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Dust – prologue and chapter 1
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DUST
PROLOGUE
“Please Shane make me feel warm… Make me feel at home…”.
“The temporal lobes are parts of the cerebrum that are involved in speech, memory, and hearing”.
“Robbery and a double attempted murder. That’s a fucking heavy bag to carry around, isn’t?”.
“I feel like my life was happy and full before what happened. I feel like I’ve been deprived of something and I cannot accept it”.
“We are here tonight to celebrate the very special wedding of this wonderful couple”.
“Carmen is awake”.
“…You know, after what’s happened to your wife, he hasn’t any benefit in showing his dirty face around”.
“And then… When I opened my eyes and I saw you there… I realized that I didn’t want you to stand up and leave the room anymore… I didn’t want to see that ashamed look on your face, like I had busted you…”.
“Name John James Sanders. Age 34. Drug addict. Crack. He has been in jail for six years – 1999/2005 – for selling drugs. No wife, no children. Nothing else”.
“… Disturbance of language comprehension, altered personality and affective behavior, altered sexual behavior and… impaired long-term memory”.
“He put himself into a big trouble the moment he touched Carmen… and our baby”
“…I really wanted you to make love to me…”.
“Listen, Shane. I know you’re angry. I know that, believe me. It’s just that… You are not a cold blood killer. You’re not a murderer. You don’t have to do that. There are other ways”.
“Shane, I am here. I don’t know exactly who I am, but I am here”.
“I don’t want to see him arrested. I want to see him punished”.
“I remember something about my dream and I want you to tell me if it makes any sense”.
“Ok, what about this. You find him, you kill him – or you punish him, as you prefer – and then you get arrested. Do you know what that means, child? It means that you’re never going to see Carmen again. Never again. Does that touches you enough?”.
“Try me”.
“Check her pockets”.
“Who is he?”.
“Shane, please… Put it down, I know you don’t want to do that”.
“How did I end up here?”.
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