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Reconciliation Part 33
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Part 33
They spent the night in separate rooms contemplating where to go with their confessions and emotions. They both concluded they would not press the issue further and take the opportunity to really get to know each other and see where it would take them. Perhaps Dylan would get over the love she felt for Helena that kept her captive or Helena would come back around and hold on to the love that Dylan offered her.
Early the following morning, before the sun rose Dylan woke up Helena, with a knock on the door. Speaking softly she called, “Helena, Helena wake up there is something I want to show you.”
Helena who was suffering from the three hour time difference, felt like she had just fallen asleep. She groaned, “Show me later. Can you just show me later?”
“No. I want to take you somewhere.”
Helena looked at the clock, 4:30. “Dylan, for God’s sakes, where are you taking me at 4:30 in the morning.”
Dylan giggled, “Trust me. You can nap later. I just want you to see this. Get dressed sleepy head.”
“Dylan if this was not worth it, you know I’ll be making your day a living hell.
“I’ll take the chance. Come on!”
Helena got dressed and came out of the room to see that Dylan had packed them a picnic basket of fruits, jams, breads and two thermoses, one with coffee, the other with tea. Dylan smiled when she saw an obviously sleepy Helena stretching, yawning and stumbling out of her bedroom. She held out her hand for Helena, who took it looking at her with suspicion. “Come on sleeping beauty. I’ll earn your trust.”
They jumped in Dylan’s car and drove a short distance to Stone Mountain, a large exposed granite rock. Despite its confederate history, it and the surrounding park had become a local landmark and destination for fun. With flashlights, blankets and their basket in hand, they hiked to the top of Stone Mountain in the dark. On top were a few other people, some where couples cuddling together, others where by themself meditating and reading. There were a few small groups of people having private church prayers and songs. Helena was confused at the scene and asked, “Why are we here?”
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oh am I first, well I didn’t read yet but just wanted to tell you I have stayed loyal to my Raquel. :(
I wish I was on top of that mountain. I’ve never seen the sun rise or set for that matter. Man, Helena has a tough decision to contemplate. When she’s with Raquel she wants her but when she’s with Dylan her heart tells her she’s the right choice as well. What’s a woman to do….I know one thing I wouldn’t want to be in Helena’s shoes. This story is like when I’m reading a good book. I want to jump to the end to see what happens because I’m so anxious….this is torture but I loe it. pps :-)
…getting to know you like me…And then a little later in the show came “Hello young lovers, where ever you are.”
Wow, I need to take an early morning trek up Stone Mountain…sounds quite beautiful! Very, very nice…They are taking their time and I’m loving it! This really can go either way! Make sure to come back and hang with us on the board so they don’t think I ran you off with my boisterous (and true) introduction! PPS…and Happy New Year!!!!
Ok minor interlude before I go into my much bigger interlude… I’ve been to that spot before… at stone mountain… about 6 years ago… OMG… you capture it so much like my memories…. love and hugs, JC
I’m not posting till I get JC’s and momadukes’ dissertations. I might hold out for East’s and lobo’s too.
I really enjoyed this chapter it was so wishful and full of renewed promises in one another.I feel Helena is allowing herself to want to able to fill her heart with trust for this woman who captured a part of her heart so long ago.I like this more than the Raquel ending there’s more history there to be reckoned with, I know Dylan wouldnt hurt Hels again but how are they going to maintain after this weekend is over im really curious to know.Great update Squirly
Well my dissertation is coming a tad bit late. Sorry ’bout that Squirl. My hick family doesn’t believe in DSL so I didn’t even attempt to access the Internet over the holidays. I hope the old adage better late than never applies. Geez… Helena must be opening to Dylan to vow her trust for her. The massage on Stone Mountain nearly did me in — Jesus, someone better kiss someone soon — and it better not be the damn soccer coach. I think more than anything, Helena doesn’t trust herself; that’s where the real problem lays. I don’t know if Dylan does either. Both of them continue to project their insecurities onto the other. This story is killing me – but I absolutely love it!
I jut caught up and like bettyv I al for Dylan. Raquel was ok bit she’s not the type of woman for Helena, I don’t really know how to say it but there’s too much blabla around Raquel, she lives in a total different world, a world that is atificial while Dylan is confronted with the real world which makes her more down to earth. They still have a long wau to go and Dylan sure needs to be patient cause trusting someone isn’t somthing you do overnoght but I have a feeling that by the end ogf the weekend they will have come a long way. PPS. I wish you and your loved ones all the best for the New Year.
ahhhhh My most Passionate Friend… you are so freaking super fast I just got my thoughts processed about the last one and you got something new for me… ahhhhhh… Ok I will be back very soon… you rock and roll… Love and hugs, JC
Okay,Dylan is still my girl.if I was in Helena shoes.I would go to the lake house,build a 10 ft stockade fence and dare the world to even try to get into it for the rest of my life. Bit much but gee, I really lke her. I couldnt not even picture Rachael with Helena. Nor anyone whe Dylan can on the show. I’m just one person but only you know what will happen. Have a Happy New Year and a beautiful and healthy 2009 thanks
Well, my comments are far from the deep, detailed dissertations of JC, so you don’t have to hold out. ;) It sounds like Helena may be ready for more than just seeing flowers. I love that these two are finally communicating. When there is the misunderstanding or misinterpretation of someone’s actions, facial expressions, words, it’s best to delve into it and get it resolved. Those are the things they really need to KNOW about each other–the little things, the subtlties. Everything else will fall into place.