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Reconciliation Part 34
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Part 33
Raquel, Paulo and Nando were at a remote beach in Brazil, checking out the local scenery, so to speak. Beautiful, fit and tanned bodies passed by strolling, jogging and some dancing to the beats from the music on the beach. They had been in a heated argument over Raquel’s refusal to call Helena since she left. Paulo argued, “Eu não compreendo porque você não a chamou. Você é tão teimoso. Você não está tratando sua direita.(I don’t understand why you haven’t called her. You are so stubborn. You are not treating her right.)”
Nando added in agreement, “Você era muito mais agradável quando estava aqui. Eu estou indo chamá-la se você não faz.(You were much nicer when she was here. I’m going to call her if you don’t.)”
Raquel argued back in her defense, “Estada fora dela Nando e Paulo. Você não compreende. Está no amor com sua amiga idosa. Porque devo eu ir ao mar e ser ferido. É melhor esta maneira. Se está sobre ela, chamar-me-á. Se não é, não. Nós temos uma compreensão. (Stay out of it Nando and Paulo you don’t understand. She is in love with her ex. Why should I do overboard and be hurt. It is better this way. If she is over her ex, she will call me. If she isn’t she won’t. We have an understanding.)”
Paulo tried to motivate Raquel into action by arguing, “É a amiga que a mais agradável você teve nunca. Eu não posso acreditar, você Raquel da Silva, ego grande e todos, deixá-la-iam apenas andar afastado tão facilmente. Você é perdedor ele. (She is the nicest girlfriend you have ever had. I can’t believe, you Raquel da Silva, big ego and all would let her just walk away so easily. You are losing it.)”
“Sim, eu sou perdedor ele. O que você esperaria, eu estou pendurando a em torno de um grupo dos vencidos. (Yes, I am losing it. What would you expect, I’m hanging a around a bunch of losers.)”
Paulo and Nando looked at each other and shook their heads with no response. Raquel looked at them with tears in her eyes. “Eu sou pesaroso. Eu não signifiquei aquele. Jesus, eu falto-a. (I’m sorry. I didn’t mean that. Jesus, I miss her.)”
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…torn between two lovers, feeling like a fool… I seriously hate that song. Helena must hate it even more than I do.
AWaw I’m a Dylan fan, so I will say sofely, at least Dylan was honest with Helena. but Helena was having fun also. You can love a lot of people,but only one do you want to spen the rest of your life with to wake up and see the beside you, and to be with and lonly when they are not by your side. Helena has a problem, some one will get hurt. let it not be Helena. thanks
Being in love with two people at once can be quite tedious. I truly feel for Helena. But I’m also amazed at just how hypocritical she can be. She can’t help being hurt that Dylan slept w/Chelsea–that’s understandable. But to actually be angry with her about it is beyond me. Dylan had sex with someone else…Helena FELL IN LOVE with someone else. Dylan left it behind…Helena still holds on. Dylan was honest and told Helena everything…Helena has not opened up to Dylan. She needs to grow some more before she deserves either one of these ladies she’s torn between.
Helena is starting to get on my nerves. Dylan made a bad choice and has apologized and I do believe she is sincere. It’s not like Helena has made some bad choices in her life that she would like to take back. It’s funny when things are on the other foot how judgmental people can be. I’m thinking at this point Dylan should cut her losses and let Helena go. I know it will hurt but she shouldn’t have to spend the rest of her life apologizing. Some things are just impossible to fix and Helena/Dylan relationship might be one of them.
Loved the update how will this wine tasting evening go…hoipefully well after all the tears….
Oh boy, this is good… *sniffle* Unfortunately as enviable as two options…two paths…two loves…sounds on paper, I know it is equally exciting as it is painful and draining. I suppose the difference between this scenario and those people typically find themselves in…is that there is a great deal of honesty here…which I love! Someone will still get hurt, but it is a L of alot better to have honesty and hurt than blindsided betrayal… please remind all three ladies of that, will ya?! lol! Hmmm…actually Helena knows all about that, eh? Wellll this is a hard one…maybe everyone, particularly Helena needs time to clear her head without distraction…without the compulsion to run from stimulation to stimulation or be drawn in by tempting coercion… Thorry for the two week reminder…hehehe! And guess what? Season 3 is repeating at this moment! Here’s to continued boundless creativity! PPS!
C’mon Helena…you have to make a decision, hon. This going back and forth between the two is no good. I would feel very frustrated if I was in Dylan’s shoes. Everytime the woman is honest with Helena, she gets shot down. I mean, c’mon Helena. You’ve been sleeping with the Brazilian babe and Dylan confesses a one night stand with you and you go ape on her? This is so not right. So now the question is how long Squirl will be torturing us with this delicious story. Until the season starts sounds perfectly marvelous to me… as long as I get at least one HOT (and I do mean HOT) Dylena kiss SOON – I mean like yesterday SOON.
I hate that song as much as you do funnyone :) Poor Hel’s I really don’t want to be in her shoes right now. It must be very hard to chose and someone indeed will get hurt, there is no other option. Please don’t hurt Hel’s
Hello My Most Passionate Friend… Ok… I’m back and we shall start with a recap for woooo hoooo Chapter 32: This chapter continues to point out one of the biggest factors in Helena’s continuous need to run away from everything… she cannot even fathom being honest with herself… she is in such a place to get things settled or even to find a way of ending them without having to actually resolve them… I feel that Helena’s only intention for visiting Dylan was to finalize things… to tell her once and for all that she had moved on… but when the flood gates of emotions comes about and you finally see that other person you start to realize it isn’t so easy… you might have to grow a back bone and finally do the actual leg work to work these demons from your soul… “The revelation cut deep in Dylan’s core. “So she is the reason you are here. You didn’t come because you wanted to come. She sent you.”” Why yes Helena again be honest with yourself it was Raquel that did send you packing and put you on this course… if not you most likely would have continued to pursue a fake relationship (and when I say fake I mean it in the context that she could not give of herself 100 percent) and when you realized that either Raquel needed to much or that your own emotional handicap came into the picture you would take flight once more… Helena is fearful of the stability she so desperately needs in life, for one she has never had it and two she continues to hold onto those things from her past that she has no control over… she is always placing the things that hurt her in the past into a current setting… well Dylan did it why shouldn’t’ Raquel… and so on… that is what I think she uses to justify her own actions… one thing within the context of this story between Dylan and Helena that I find fascinating once again is how much they are seeking the same things and how it is Dylan that is actually going out of her way to actually seek it and cement it as a part of her life… Dylan has made contact with her family… she has tried to contact her mother and grandmother and is set on a path of reconciliation… she is trying as hard as she can to finally purge those things from her past that caused her to lose the one thing she treasures the most and realizes she will never ever have again… her first ‘TRUE’ love… I truly feel that even if Helena doesn’t’ realize it Dylan does Dylan knows that even though she will try and make things work… this is THE END… for them… and for Dylan she will try to make this weekend last as long as she can cause then when Helena boards that plane or whatever she will be forced to move on… and much like Raquel I think it will be Dylan telling Helena as she already realizes it… she already knows Helena’s love is somewhere else… she will tell Helena to leave… she will give Helena the peace of mind even if she won’t give it back to her in return… oh and Helena had not forgiven Dylan… and they both know it… so my most passionate friend I am truly sorry I have been absent but I am back and I vow to remain seated until the end… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever loving Eunichick)
Hello Again My Passionate Friend… Ok once more I am back with a recap… this time dum dum daaaaaah… for chapter 33… I cannot tell you how truly amazing this story is my friend… you have talent so far beyond its breathtaking… you are the real deal trust me (huggles)… Ok… for me this chapter really takes things into Dylan’s world… I think this is Dylan finding her own way to end the cycle of her relationship with Helena but on her own accord… she is pulling Helena out of her comfort zone and creating new memories… she is trying to place shadows over the pain she knows Helena will never let go of… if Dylan cannot go back in time and prevent the pain she would much rather give Helena beauty to shelter the pain… (Personal Interlude: as I mentioned before I remember that park I have been there and I don’t think I have told you this or if I have not enough you are incredibly gifted at making the environment just as impacting a character as your incredible character development… far an away you are one of the best at weaving the environment and the story so fluidly and flawlessly; end interlude :P)… “She was tempted to cuddle up close next to Helena but did not want to push beyond the comfort zone they found themselves in.” I love how chivalrous Dylan is towards Helena… you can tell she has a lot of male attributes… not to say that ladies cannot be chivalrous but for me Dylan has a lot of male characteristics which makes sense since she has had a lot more experience with them… you emulates the actions from the environments she is familiar with… When she takes Helena to the game it is like they have come full circle… it was for this team that she left in the first place and it is fitting to see them back here where it all began and it all ended… full circle… but what makes this chapter so much my favorite in there whole bout of interaction and communication even though Helena hasn’t done any was this scene right here; “Dylan was deep in thought reviewing some of her material when Helena came up behind her. She did not hear Helena approach and nearly leapt out of her skin when Helena ran her fingers through her hair. Dylan held her chest and tried to settle down when she yelled at Helena, “Don’t ever do that. Don’t sneak up on me.”” This more then anything shows Dylan’s vulnerabilities and I think that is what makes her such a relatable character… Helena is the only person she has opened up to about this… she is the only one she felt she could be vulnerable with… maybe it was her sense of justice upon herself for her part in destroying Helena but more so it was the first time she felt she could actually talk about ‘WHO’ she was all of it without being judged… I really think Helena should take a walk and search deep down… cause if she is not going to start actually talking and being honest she might as well just leave and let Dylan lose herself in her work… which frightens me… cause she seems to be doing her penance within her work and her taking on more dangerous challenges seems less out of moral obligation and more out of a form of redemption for past misdeeds… Helena’s reaction to her analyzing some of the pictures was interesting just goes to show just how much she really doesn’t’ want to actually ‘TALK’ and more she just wants it all to resolve without having to empty her own baggage and show her hand… ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…. This is so freaking good… I want to bound and on my shelf… hmmmmm… that’s an idea… you are so amazing my friend… I cannot tell you just truly how much you inspire me… words will never ever do your impact justice, Love and Hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever loving Eunichick)