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Reconcilliation Part 37
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Part 37
Dylan was startled with the kiss and gently pushed Helena away. “What happened to you out there. You leave here in a quiet mood and you come back attacking me. Not that I don’t like being attacked by you but I need to understand what happened.”
Helena held Dylan around her waist and laughed. “So you don’t like me wanting you?”
"I didn’t say that. I want you to want me. I don’t even mind you attacking me. But you seemed kind of hesitant but you come back all over me. So what happened on your walk?”
Helena leaned in to kiss Dylan. The kiss was slow and soft and left Dylan’s head swirling. Once the kiss broke Helena nibbled on Dylan’s ear and neck, “It didn’t happen on the walk. It happened here with you, talking to you, being with you, talking to your sister. I thought about what I really want in life. I want love, simply love. I want stability. I want what Bette and Tina have. I want what your sister and her partner have.” She paused and looked at Dylan through moist eyes, “I want someone to make breakfast for me every morning. I want you.”
Dylan stood silently and studied Helena’s face, “Are you sure? I thought you wanted time to think it through. I’m not saying that right now you are not making me excited beyond my wildest dreams. But are you sure? Are you sure this is what you really want? What about her?”
"Her? You mean Raquel?” Helena sighed and stepped away. As she paced she explained, “Raquel is..Raquel is special. I had a great time with her but we are in different places in our lives. She would never be right for me and I needed to face that. I tried to compare you two, but there is no comparison. When I thought about what I am looking for in my life, in everything it was you.” She turned to face Dylan and smiled, “You are my ‘it’ girl. You love me completely and passionately. I guess I am being selfish but what is wrong with that? Why should I deny your love, my love, our love?”
Dylan reached her hand out to Helena. Her eyes were filled with tears. “Helena, hearing you say you love me, is my dream come true. Actually, two years of dreams come true. I am still a little stunned. Are your sure that is what you want?”
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Laughs. OMG. Squirly-Whirly. That was so funny, the ending part especially. Indeed, that was fun. (: You know, when I read the line, “I choose you,” my heart literally went, “Aaahhh.” (: It reminds me of the last episode of Sex and the City when Big tells Carrie, “It took a long time for me to get here, but I’m here. Carrie, you’re the one.” SIGH! (: They indeed took a long journey to get to where they are. Thank you for bringing new life to Dylan and making her such a relatable character. ((: Looking forward to your next chappie, you mention in your Author’s Notes that this is not the last we’ll be hearing from you. Yet. ((: PPS!
Pesky repotyer. Belena should like the reporter part,pesky No. BVH shy,maybe I will think about that. Helena thinks she has go her heart together ad what happensRaquel come to life. How will this turn out?? tHANKS SO MUCH FOR GIVING MY GIRL DYLAN A WEE BIT OF HEAVEN, It might not last thatis up to HELENA. If her heart is with Raquel,or Dylan. One can sing. “I wish you happiness,butfor me Sweetheart I guess I’ll always be in love with you” Poor Helena. thanks
I guess Dylan is her it girl. And didn’t she get it. This felt good to read and I can’t wait until your next update. Just maybe Helena will finally receive the love that she deserve. I want to see her happy. And she seem to be well on her way. Great update!
Hmmm, Helena…is that your final answer?! I’m with Dylan…(yeah I saw it coming)..but I’m shocked! lol! Wow, how will she respond to Raquel’s note? I’m not sure that it is settled…maybe it is…don’t get me wrong I’ve rooted for Dylan and Helena but hmmm…I’m not sure. HA!…I wonder if that stealthy Niki girl left something interesting in the car! I’m sure at the very least, she made sure that the Girl from Ipanema was blasting on the stereo!
Yo! Thanks for the shoutout it kinda threw me off at first. I do like Helena with Dylan because their connection seems more intense then Helena and Raquel. I want pretend that I understand the actions of the characters in this story. Maybe it has to do with the fact that I’ve never been in a relationship or in love and find it easy to disconnect from people. I’m not sure I agree with some folks who think Raquel squandered her chance with Helena. Raquel didn’t want to be with someone who had someone else one their mind. I can respect that because I would have done the same thing.
Well…I could have dealt with Racquel but having Dylan was so much better. Oh and I have a beef to pick with you… this chapter was NC-17 and there was entirely too much talking!!! C’mon! I waited for months for some hot Dylena action and this is all I get?? I certainly hope the last few chapters have a bit more…ahh action if you know what I mean. I know you can reach deep down and give me a bit more! :>)
Man are you all a tough crowd. Not enought sex, too much talking, not enough talking, why didn’t Raquel get my number, I’d never wear sequens, did Raquel get the message I left for her in the car, I’m not the shy one, can we see the edits….Whawhawhawhawhawha!!!Yo! JacO where have you been all story?…. Welcome, I’minlovwithTina(now that is a mouthful(said Bette))Lololita, I need to stop writing you into my stories. People might talk….Retroboogie– I do have one regret regarding the Helena/Raquel story line, that I didn’t spend more time actually writing dialogue between them. Because it was meant that Raquel was a reasonable/viable option for Helena, but my personal time was limited and this was always meant to be a Dylena. Raquel just exerted herself deeply into it. But this story does have a couple more chappies and Raquel hasn’t gone away yet, now has she. Hehehehehehehehehe….BTW Where is JC and my disertation…But thanks sweetie for the insight into a certain someone whose pale tush was last seen running from the hot tub.
Hey Squirl I was out to dinner with a friend and told her I was in your story, hehehe thanks again. I was coming back here anyway because I have a ?. pg. 3 para 1, do you think Helena could get points for form, don’t know why but I wondered that all morning at work and let me tell you this was not the perfect day for distractions but there it was. Stil begging for edits though. Thanks again, Md
Md-I went back and reviewed pg 3, para 1, Yes Helena gets points for form. This position is very doable to the average lovah, lovah,(well maybe I’ll only speak for myself) but for Helena and her yoga flexibility it is more than easy. (BTW-I found a bunch of annoying mistakes/typos in that crucial paragraph. Thanks for sending me back. I’ll fix. Maybe even embelish a bit more.
Okay typos were fixed, Oma still has sequense, Belena is not pesky anymore, BVH is no longer shy. How easy it is to make changes with just one letter.
that’s great Squirl but if you think I’m going back to read that before going to sleep your nuts. I guess the story was so intriguing that I didn’t notice any errors. dooooooooooooooo, you made me look, good night
So BeLena is the perky reporter huh, LOL that reminds me of Alice hahaha. I hope the bartender loses that note or destroys it intentionally. Raquel has had her chance but didn’t take it at the time so she should bare with the consequences. I don’t want anything or anyone to come between D & H, they took a long way to (re)find each other and I want them to be able to make it. Dylan is the one that truly, deeply loves Hel’s and that’s the kind of love she needs. I still can’t help it but have a feeling Raquel is more like Shane, they think they love someone but after a while they realise they can’t settle down and all they do is break hearts and destroy lives, I don’t want that to happen to our dearest Hel’s, she has been through enough already in life, she needs love, happiness and peace now. Thanks for posting this great chapter, loved the end that was fun. PPS
and then Oma walked away singing “Raquel don’t loose that number, it’s the only one you got” YA! Squirl this must be the reason I woke up so so early. At first first I was squirming with the hottness of the story then I was truly delighted to read your shout outs to us readers. I am touched. Hope you don’t mind if I give JC a wink, Wink JC, but there is not and never will be sequence on Oma, unless Squirl really wants it there. Outstanding, Thank you, Md
I forgot, do you think we can see the edits sometime?
Lol at all the names you scrolled off there.I’m glad Helena and Dylan are getting back on track and renewing their love. But how will Helena feel when she gets back to find the note and orchid from Racquel…I cannot believe this wil be over soon i have enjoyed this so much.Helena deserves some happiness with Dylan and where better than LA right not Alanta
I know that your personal choice for Helena is Raquel, but you wrote Dylena so well and convincingly, it’s hard to imagine Helena w/anyone else but Dylan. How much more special the sex is between them when they incorporate those three little words. Wonderful job Squirl. And thanks for adding me to yet another story ;).
Hey!..Excellent chapter!..Such a shame its coming to an end! I have been a silent reader up till now…But this story is great! Glad you had fun incorporating the names..I know how difficult it is to do it (I also incorporated the names of regular commenters in my story!-Its difficult eh lol?) Your such a talented writer! PPVS xx
How come Oma was the only one that got toslip Raquel (or Helena or Dylan) a number? Never the less, despite my envy I’m honored. And I was right there with you until I read that Betty V Hall was shy, and I knew that something wasn’t quite right. I have some sympathy for Raquel, but she DID make her bed, so to speak. The band was a grand gesture, but Dylan has been steadfast (well, at least since she said goodbye to the assistant) and restrained, so even with the orchids, I would understand Helena sticking with her choice.