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    Anatomy of a Breakdown Chap 2

    Story written on January 20, 2009 by denEmat.
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    Bette returns to LALA land

     

    Chapter 2

    Bette boards the plane feeling a mixture of emotions. She sits in her window seat and stares out, in about an hour she would be back in LA. The anticipation of getting back and forming a plan to win her beloved begin to rush her mind.

    “Hey Kit its Bette. I just wanted to let you know I’m on my way back. I’ll call you as soon as I land. Love you.”  She puts her phone away and closes her eyes. ‘How can I win her back?’ she thinks breathing heavily.

    “Would you like something to drink?’ The voice makes Bette open her eyes. She smiles and nods no. She needed her wits about her.

                The flight is uneventful and short. She maneuvers her way through baggage claim relatively easy, and then makes her way to her car, which she had chosen, to park in long-term parking. She slides into the drivers seat and picks up her phone turning it on to find three voicemails.

     

    “Bette Porter where the fuck are you? You remember me don’t you? You know it’s me Al. Anyway call me, I miss you.”

     

    “Bette it’s Kit got your message. Come to The Planet as soon as you get in. I have a warm meal for ya.”

     

    “Bette… its Shane. I’m worried call me.”

     

                She stares down at the phone for a moment selecting which person she would call first.

    “Hello.”

    “Hey Shane, it’s Bette.” Shane steps away from the table she is currently occupying with her friends.

    “Bette Jesus I’ve been worried sick. How the fuck are you?”

    “I’m fine Shane. I’m back in LA. Meet me at The Planet. We need to talk. I owe you an apology.”

    “No need for apologies Bette. I’m actually already here…” Her voice goes quiet as the words come out of her mouth.

    “With Tina?” Bette asks hesitantly.

    “Yes, but you should come.”

    “I…I um… I think I’ll just head home.”

    “Bette no. Come please everyone wants to see you. We miss you.” Shane has always been supportive of Bette even early in their break up Shane has always been the person Bette could lean on she could not possibly let her down again.

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    1. Just came across with your lovely story. Hope you’ll update very soon.. I hope also, that in this story Bette will notice herself that Tina is pregnant)

    3. At least they are able to share a table with the gang and each other. They actually have a Lot that needs to be aired out, Tina telling Bette about the baby and Bette letting Tina know that she can not live without her in her life.

    4. You know if Bette were very smart all she would have to do is look at Tina’s neck and see the pulse quicken, a pregnant woman has a pulse that is much quicker, almost a double beat, than one who is not pregnant. Her skin is usually flawless and of course, her face is fuller. Hopefully Tina will tell her immediately, in all fairness Bette needs toknow about the baby. I think it will help her with respect to getting Tina back or at least help keep herself together and not go off the deep end. I hope a reconciliation is in the works for them, they need to be together.Great chapter. PPS

    5. we can only hope that tina will tell bette and not let her find out from anyone else… like on the show… so come on tina… just stand up… thats all you will have to do… wow… PPS

    7. Hello denEmat… I am so sorry I haven’t commented until now… I have read your story and from the beginning I have been blown away… they way you have shown Bette slowly deal with her past… to slowly accept the things she has done and try to move forward… for me I feel that Bette might already realize where Tina is at in her life… and I feel that she will not be as volatile as some might expect… she might be surprised but I feel she will either try to rekindle something with Tina or allow Tina the time and space she needs… I feel her trip and the rebirth of some happiness in her life might make her more susceptible to allowing Tina to move on with or without her… I cannot wait to see where you take this story… keep up the amazing work, Sincerely, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the Ever Talented Eunichick)

    9. How can a person keep a secret of being pregnany.Unless they decides to wear ainner tube and a shity and say it feels better that a dress. God let Tina tell Bette,it might not make any different in their relationship but will give Bette a wee bit of hope. Something to want to be a better person. thanks

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