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Anatomy of a Breakdown Chap 4
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Chapter 4
“ God Tina I was so blinded by my own selfishness that I totally lost sight of you and us. How could I ever ask you to forgive me?” Bette’s voice begins to crack under the strain of her unabashed confession.
“Bette…” Tina’s whisper interrupts.
“See I’ve done it again just rambling on not even allowing you a moment to get a word in.”
“Bette why did you go to San Francisco?” Tina asks to gain a break from the out pouring Bette was providing. Bette looks into her eyes and inhales.
“I needed to go back to a place and time where everything we had was love and magic and joy. Remember it was right after I decided to sell the gallery and take the job at the CAC and you were swamped with work, but we also made the decision to start a family then. I needed to be in a place that reminded me of possibility. You and I were so busy with our lives and yet we still managed to steal time away just to be with each other.” Bette stares at Tina who is now deep in the rush of memories flooding her mind…
“Babe you home?” Bette’s voice rattles the silent house.
“In the bedroom.” Tina calls back. She is standing in front of the vanity in their bedroom removing the last of her day’s jewelry. She slides open a drawer and retrieves a tank top and sweat pants just as Bette walks in wrapping her arms around Tina’s waist.
“Mmmm, Thank God you’re home. I missed you.” Tina smiles as Bette’s whisper find its way into her ears.
“Long day babe?” Tina turns to face Bette.
“Too long. I don’t even want to talk about just know it was a nightmare and I’m glad to be here.” Tina laughs playing with a tendril of Bette’s brown hair. She leans into Bette and presses her lips to hers.
“Aw baby I’ll make it better.” She leans in again to capture Bette’s lips. Bette snakes her hand around Tina’s neck to deepen the kiss.
“You always do. How was your day?”
“About as good as yours. I swear sometimes I just want to….” She pulls out of Bette’s grasp. “I just want to punch Aaron.” She flails her arms in the air eliciting a laugh from her brunette love. “What?” Tina raises her brow.
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Sex on the trolley, what a trip. Love the flashbacks and hope that Bette is successful in winning back Tina and their and their unborn child.
Go win your woman back Bette!!! AWESOME story!!
Hello denEmat… I am really enjoying how you are allowing them both the time to reflect upon their shared pasts… I think Tina realizes that Bette never meant for it to get this far… she was so very lost and in a moment of weakness she failed… I hope that she will allow Bette the opportunity to at least try and make amends… the sincerity in her voice shows just how much she realizes what she has lost… keep up the amazing work… sincerely, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and Proud Cuzzie to the ever talented Eunichick)
Hello denEmat… I’m back… I have re-read all your chappy’s so far and I am wondering just a little tiny bit… are we ever going to see Tina face up to her culpabilities that also led to the destruction of their once perfect relationship… cause it was not only Bette’s fault… Tina had her flaws also the major ones being pushing Bette away when they lost “Their” son and also going behind Bette’s back making a HUGE decision about having another go at a baby when she was blind to see just how lost Bette truly was… I mean yes Bette cheated and she should burn for all eternity but when is Tina going to own up to her part… I love your story and you have portrayed them both with grace… and I patiently await to see how you unfold this story, Sincerely, JC
I like this glimpse of hope)PPS
A glimpse of hope indeed! Can’t wait for more:)
I love where this story is headed. PPS.