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The Loudest Whisper
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PREVIOUSLY:
“Tee, we can get through this. We’ve always been able to get through hard times, because we were together, and we’ll do it again. Don’t blame yourself…you didn’t start this.”
“Yes, I did.” Tina managed to get out. “Bette, I do love you…”
“I love you too Tina.”
“No!” Tina pulled away from Bette. “I really DO LOVE YOU. I’ve always loved you, just like they’ve said!” Tina started to cry harder.
“Tina…what are you saying?”
“There was always something there…I just…I never knew what it was, ever since I could remember. It wasn’t until she said it…that little girl said those things….that I knew what it was.” Tina talked in-between sobs. “I would lay in bed night after night praying this feeling would go away, but it never did, it stayed with me, I could never shake I off. I tried to pretend but I can’t anymore. I don’t know how, but it was like that little girl knew, one night she gets bored and tells a lie and suddenly things start to make sense and fall into place. She saw the ounce of truth in this lie, I don’t know how but she knew…I can’t deny it anymore.”
“Tina, you’re tired and worn out, this isn’t…” Tina ignored Bette and kept going.
“I always resented Chris and your plans to marry. Maybe because secretly I wanted you. I’ve never felt that way about anybody but you Bette.”
Bette eyes widened at Tina’s confession. “Tina…” she tried to take Tina’s hand but Tina pulled away.
“I can’t stand to have you touch me…I’ve ruined your life…I’ve ruined my own…I just feel so damn sick and dirty, I can’t stand it!…I can’t stand myself because of what I’ve done to you!”
Tina huddled in the corner of the couch and continued to cry loudly. Ignoring Tina’s resistance Bette wrapped her arms around Tina and held her.
THE LOUDEST WHISPER: THE FINALE CHAPTER
“Bette please! Leave me alone!” Tina yelled.
She pushed Bette off of her with all of her might and ran upstairs into the bathroom. Bette ran after and tried to open the door but it was locked. She decided to let Tina be alone to get herself together before she tried talking to her again. In the mean time Bette laid down on the couch to think things over herself. Just how long had Tina had these feelings for her? And how come she wasn’t too surprised when she told her? Maybe she knew all along? As Bette thought over everything she started to doze off, and then slowly drifted into sleep.
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Hey Stranger!! Glad you came back to finish up…. GREAT ending ;) NOW bring on the new :)
Thank you for finishing this story. You scared the hibeee jebees out of me, having Tina slit her wrist. Glad that Bette found her and that they are making a clean break and starting over.
*puts hand over forehead and repeats in a dramatic way* “Bette..you dont know how happy i am to hear you say that,it’s SOOOOOO unreal” and u say i’m a sap,hahaha durr i get it from U!
That was amazing and wonderful, so happy they are together and love them. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!
Yessss!!! You did it! Yaaayyy!!! *happy dance here* We are sooo happy that you could find a sensitive closure to this story. Indeed ignorant people may be rude to others who feel “different”, but it is up to those in love who should fight for their own happiness. There is freedom of choice and the right to be together. No more lives deprived, because of the comfort or discrimination of others. As one of our friends would say: love conquers all. We truly believe that. Thank you, dearest Coffee, for keeping us along this wonderful ride. Can’t wait for more of your stories to come. PPS Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
Ohh a little drama to the end. Thanks for finish ths story but I would have liked to see a loooonnnngggger one. I would like to know what B&T will do to start a new life together. Look forward to a new one. Love your stories. Thanks
I am so glad you chose a better ending for this wonderful story. Even though the movie was great(and probably more true to the times) it is nice to think they could go away and live a happily ever after. Thank you and can’t wait to see more stories from you in 2009
I still haven’t seen the movie probably because it would just piss me off. lol I”m glad you went with a happy ending. Well the slashing part wasn’t happy but the kiss was. lol
Don’t cross your fingers you need them to write silly rabbit
It was a beautiful ending, I am so happy that you are back and posting again. I am also happy cause our T&B stayed together and they are starting their lives some where else. I just wished that, that evil little girl never go unpunished and her family too. Thanks Coffee, you are great. Love