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Thank you, For changing my life. Chapter 9
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Chapter 9- Saturday Night
“Damn Tina you look hot!” Alice said
“Yeah, Tina you look great”
Tina was wearing a short denim shirt that showed her nicely toned legs, a pair of knee high suede boots that added height and a red backless blouse with a deep neck line that showed off just enough of her cleavage. Alice put Tina’s hair up in a messy up do that left some of her hair falling onto her face this showed off Tina’s muscular back and well tones arms, Alice could not figure out why Tina choose to cover up her body, it was meant to be shown off, Tina was HOT!! Tina used very little make up so she had a natural glow, that made her look even younger and that much hotter.
“Tina, do you have to wear those hideous glasses? They cover up your whole face, plus the frame is so dark and thick.”
“Alice, if I don’t wear my glasses I won’t be able to see” Tina laughed
“Ok, fine but you really should think about getting some laser eye surgery or contacts”
“You know I did an article about Lasik Eye surgery, I can get you some numbers to great doctors” Alice said
“Actually I was, thinking about it, I have this money I got from the studio and I was thinking about maybe trying contact lenses, I do have to go clothes shopping I’m kind of scared I don’t know where to go for nice looking executive clothes will you guys help me?”
“Help you spend money?” Asked Alice “Hell yes, I know where we should go”
“Yeah Tina, we would love to help you when do you want to go?” asked Shane
“How about sometimes next week, I want to get my hair done as well”
“You got it, Tina you just let us known when”
“Thanks you guys” Replied Tina
They arrived at the planet, some people were already there, and they were all shocked to see Tina looking so hot she was being hit on by both men and women, but Shane kept them all at arm’s length keeping a close eye on Tina. Tina was laughing and drinking the drinks everyone was buying for her.
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Better think fast Bette, a woman like that doesn’t last long! And man talk about ruining a first time….well after the first time…poor Tina. Now hurry and post again, I’m sooo hooked!
Great chapter ILM I hope Bette finally realizes she’s in love with Tina
Hey you better fix it……………….. Cmon Bette do something and Tina well………………. I know it comes a little drama… but fix ASAP………
I am so hooked on this story! I wasn’t certain if it was Tina’s first time but I figured she wasn’t very experienced. The way Bette treated her just broke my heart. Bette certainly understands herself. She is completely self-absorbed. I have a feeling you are going to let some time pass in the story and the two of these women will be reconnected at a later date. There will be a lot of anger and resentment to overcome. I think with Helena looming in the background, Bette had better get her s*it together. But Bette avoids addressing conflict on a consistent basis. You have definitely remained true to her character. How soon will you make us all wait before you post again? I think we are all dying to see what happens next.
I agree with TKGIRL23, 22yr old T has a lot more class than 33yr old B. B has been a player too long, she needs to get her head out of her arse and go after T, reassure her it wasn’t a 1nt stand. Good story! PPS
So T is a virgin, Bette should feel special that she is T’s firt time…but Bette being an idiot and self centered had the nerve to get angry. To think that she volunteered to drive Tina to keep her safe and protected from the other lez girls in the Planet, yet, she is the one who took advantage of her her. Bette should know better that T is drunk, and she, being the one with more experince should have been able to control herself by acting as the more adult, although T is no longer a minor. Sleeping on the bed just gave T an impression that what Alice said is true. Bette will love them and leave them. If I were T, make bette jealous until Bette realizes what she had. Bette needs to learn some lesson in some ways that she cannot just treat any woman she beds as a used car. Anyway, hope they will work it out. Please post very, very soon as I am having an anxiety attack that Bette will ignore Tina just like she does to other women.
Well, I think that Bette should not give up on her feelings for Tina. They need to stay in contact one way or another.
Bette was a total asshole, bad girl. May be a little living between Helena and Tina will do the trick and Bette will come to her senses.PPSThis is awesome.
Color me compeletly clueless…T was a virgin? Duh, I should have figured that out. Bette needs to “pull it out”. She made a bad situation 100x worse by sleeping on the couch. Go get her Bette, talk to her.
Bette NEEDS to fix this!
wow i feel so bad for tina… what the hell is wrong with bette… reading on…
This is sad and feel bad for Tina!
Except for the rating, I totally didn’t expect them to end up in bed together. Tina has been drinking all night, Bette should have known better! Not to mention it was her “first time.” Bette should run after Tina and clear things up before she leaves for NY. She sure did send the wrong message by not sleeping with Tina all through the morning. Great update. PPS!
I’m with Dainty. Bette is a big huge MORON! Hell Bette heard Tina’s story from Shane she should’ve come to the conclusion that Tina was a virgin. Durrrrr. And that mini tirade after they made love was just an asshole thing to do. *headdesk* I could see Shane giving Bette a tongue lashing if she found out since she sees Tina as like a little sister.
its soooooooo good!! bette should go after tina.. please keep it coming!! thank you
I’m with denEmat: Helena’ll get Tina if Bette doesn’t do the right thing fast! Great story!
I’m hooked! Bette needs to talk to Tina before she heads to New York! It was Tina’s first time, so Bette needs to at least check on Tina. Can’t wait to see the transformation of Tina the woman when Bette gets back! PPVS
Bette should definitely go after Tina and clear some things.. And should have stayed in bed with her already took her once mind as well make it memorable at this point..I believe Tina would have welcomed it..PPS
Great chapters, i love this story, i´m sooooooo hooked here, please go on and i hope you post soon and pleaseeee long chapter, pleaaaseee. :)
Well the 22yr old has shown that she is more mature and responsible than the 33yr old.
Great chapter. I she how Bette would of been upset with finding out that she was a virgin in that way – but why be nasty about it – and then not sleep in the bed – that was low. Bette should of come out of the bathroom and at least talk to her. She has been so worried about protecting her but she just did something really hurtful. I hope she goes to Tina before she leaves for her trip and tries to work this out. Great story – I can’t get enough of it – PPS !
I hope Bette goes after Tina, and that they actually TALK! Great story, can’t wait for more.
Bette with her old roguish ways should have known Tina was as “pure as the driven snow.” Moron. Now she should finf Tina before she leaves for New York to make sure she got home okay and tell her they need to talk when she gets back from her trip. She should not let Tina think that she did not want to stay in bed with her and that it was just the opposite. She really needs to be honest with Tina. PPS please.
i looove this story! ugh Bette better catch her quick or else helena my get her hands on Tina… keep writing cant wait to read more
I wish I was there so I could smack Bette upside her head. Woman, have you completely lost your mind. Screw N.Y, I’d go after Tina before someone else does.
WOW! Bette better decide what she wants soon before Helena has her chance!! Great Update :)
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! but I agree Bette needs to fix this like NOW!!! PPS!!!!!!!!! thankyou