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Playing By Heart; #03
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I found my self drifting into an absent peace of mind, slowly uncovering the undeniable beauty she beholds to the world. The glow in which is no comparison even to the blinding rays of the sun, the small detailed curvature that perplexes her hips to hug the waistband of her alpha work trousers. Her subtle curves make my core burn consciously as I willingly allow my eyes to invite me further enticing me into her beautiful fixture. Her chocolate eyes, which make me, reel in mystery and lust as I watch her eyes make love to me through her words. Her long, lovely brunette mane whisk fully wrapped in loose curves that hit her face, drawing me to the warm rays her hair lets in as the sun wraps itself upon it. Giving this woman, a sensuous glow that she does not know radiates and feels the place with warmth.
It was like we had changed roles, I was the one who was now undressing her with my own eyes. Although when I had fist met her I knew she was somewhat a beautiful creature but nothing quite prepared me for this up close and personal portrait of Bette Porter. My fingers kept twitching and sweats expiring at force, my hands were forming pooles of perspiration. I could see the sweat beads’ forming as Bette continues to pursue our conversation, for the first time in my life I wasn’t trying to formulate a plan so calculative. But instead seeing where my initial plan will take me. In the end I knew I would end up reaping the benefits and enjoying this victory more than others. I could just feel it as it creeped through my veins.
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"Helena, are you okay?" She questioned with a look of concern on her face. Her face frowned and shrivelling as her eyes deepened with worry.
"I’m sorry yes I’m fine, just deep in thought. I was going to ask you if you would like to go out for a meal tomorrow you and Angie. You know if you’re not busy" I cautiously twiddled my fingers as I awaited a reply.
I watched her gently brush her hair from her face, and look towards me "Actually that sounds nice, you sure it’s okay to bring Angie with us?" She replied.
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Loved the update! And I like the way Helena decided how she would wiggle her way into Bette’s life. I also like how she made sure to remember that a child was also a part of this package. But I do hope she will not get to cocky. It’s okay to be sure of yourself, but she dealing with something totally different here. She wants to know this woman in more ways than one. And one false move on her part could be her down fall. She could lose her heart with this one. I also like the way that Helena slipped in and rescured Carmen. I can’t wait to see how she will fit in to this tale. Please post when you are able.
Great update C4V, can’t wait to see what else Helena has in store for us and for Bette :)
Your story is very intriguing. I need to start alll over again, but is Helena’s intent for good or bad. I just find her a little scary.
C4V I just noted you wrote this chapter. Excellent job. Please don’t let Eunicki-Wicki hold up this story. If she doesn’t get another chappie out soon, they you just keep writing. Great job. This story has me on edge, trying to figure out where you guys are going with it.
Wow. Gee. Thanks for the vote of confidence, Squirl.
Eunicki-chicki-wicky you are still alive. I was about to put out an APB cause I’m seeing nothing from you anywhere. Hope all is well….C4V don’t let her off easy. Your writing was very good this chapter, whatever you did, do it again. Euni you get to writing too.
Ah, Squirly, I have been on hiatus coz of CNY celebrations in Singers. I did mention it in my Author’s Note previously. Besides, you know how it is when you get caught up in one story. It’s like you just can’t stop writing the one. On a side note, thank you to my beloved Aunts for understanding. ((: Much love to all. I’m glad to see that there are people enjoying this tale. Caramel, want to write the next chapter then?
Hi, C4V! Well, you have to understand that our niece Euni had to enjoy the New Year festivities, right? Hahaha We believe she will be back on track and will continue to collaborate with you. Also, she needs to update her other story. As for this update, you did an extraordinary job. We were lost on the description you made of Bette, through the eyes of Helena. It was candid, lustful and beautiful, at the same time. All of these elements combined. You also unveiled a bit more about Helena’s surroundings, which we believe are very important, as to learn more about her whereabouts. Thanks for delivering us this enchanting chappy. We are sure that our niece will be with you shortly, and that both will continue this interesting story. *wink* PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero and Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
Thanks for the wonderful comments you guys have left.And Squirl thanks I know Euni had been busy so I she doesnt have time to update I will write the next chapter.I’m very pleased to say this is the best writing I have done so far. Has anyone noticed I’m personally a sucker for the colour element in my stories?
I’ve been waiting for an update to this story, glad it’s finally here. I enjoyed it a lot & can’t wait to see what’s next. PPS!