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    I WANT YOU BACK CHAPTER 40

    Story written on February 7, 2009 by iminlovewithtiona.
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    …The giving of a ring????

     

     

    Previously…..

    “No! No problem on that score… My other problem is these!!” Alice displayed a small toothbrush, toothpaste and a pair of panties…

    Both Bette and Tina exchanged baffled looks as Alice dangled the items in the air…

    “You said you had an emergency- 2 problems I fail to see how a few flimsy items count as an emergency?” Bette said completely bewildered, as Tina laughed at the expression on her woman’s face

    Alice glared at her friends as though they were ridiculously stupid and inept as she replied, “I found them in my cabinet at the side of my bed!”

    Bette gave a mock gasp before sarcastically responding, “Oh, no! There was a few items in a side cabinet…It’s not really something to panic about is it?.”

    Rolling her eyes Alice loudly grumbled, “It’s not my toothbrush!!! –Not my paste!…And certainly not my small’s!!!!

    “Well who’s are they? Tina asked bemused

    “- Their Dana’s!!!” Alice screeched in horror..

    Tina used her hand to muffle her own laughter…. Bette patted their friend’s shoulder as she said, “I’m sure you’ll survive, Alice.”

    “No, Guys!!_You don’t understand! I’m not like you! I can’t handle a commitment thing like this!!!!”

    “It’s underwear and a toothbrush!, that’s all Al!” Tina exclaimed yearning to be alone with her 2 girls once more…

    “Oh, sure, it’s starts out with a toothbrush! -But, I’m telling you…THESE are only the beginning!!…. Soon she’ll start leaving other stuff at my place!!!….Oh, I can see it now…. It won’t be long before she’s clearing out half the closet for her own clothes, moving in that furball of a cat, filling my fridge with protein drinks, My hall cupboard with tennis raquets!!!..Jesus – I can already feel the noose of commitment choking me!!”

    Tina threw her hands in the air “Enough! Would you just get over it please?…It’s only 3 measly things Al!! Dana’s not going to U-haul!. – Sometimes Miss P… I really worry about your imagination!!!”

    Tina got up and took Alice’s hand gently, ushering her up..

    “We’ll talk about it tomorrow morning 8.30 at the planet okay for you?”

    “Tina you throwing me out?” Al said with a smile

    “No…well yes…Actually I am!!…I’ll explain all tomorrow…Okay? Hey why don’t you drop by Carmen’s house and see if she’s okay?”

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    3. Oh my, that was much more than O.K. That was simply beautiful. Happy Tina will give Bette and their marriage another chance. They will be alright as long as they talk about their problems with each other. Love it. PPS

    7. The last two chapters was even more captivating the second time through. Tina did very well with her questions to Bette about their past and future. Can’t wait for the next post.

    8. That was way better than okay, that was truly beautiful. The dialogue was very well written. I can’t get enough of this story, so please keep it coming.

    14. Okay? That does not came near to describe how beautiful this chapter is written. It can’t be easy to write a so sensible discussion in such a tender-hearted way. It suits these characters.

    17. Oh INLWT….wow…wow oh wow..firstly..the fact that Tina was the one proposing…I love that…and the way you went about it..so baby Angie could hear the happyness of her two mommies…absloutley a gem..the inscription was breathtaking..thanks for that sweetie!Cant wait for more my freind..til then.mwa

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