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    Ugly Duckling Turn Into Swan ( My Version) Chapter 2

    Chapter 2

     

    The next day

     

    Knock, knock

     

    Maria: “Carmen are you awake??” 

     

    Maria asks peaking her head through Carmen door.

     

    Carmen sat up on her bed sleepily

     

    Carmen: “ Yeah I m awake”

     

    Maria came in and sat on Carmen’s bed as Carmen rub her eyes sleepily.

     

    Maria: “So what you think about giving gym a try?”

     

    Carmen: “Yeah I will do it if it gets everyone off my back”

     

    Maria: “Ok then get ready and meet you down stairs in one hour”.

     

    Carmen nods as she slowly walks in the bathroom to get ready.

     

    One hour later downstairs of Moralez home.

     

    Carmen: “Hey sis I m ready”.

     

    Carmen said sounding more energetic and exciting until her other sisters began to talk.

     

    “Carmen what the hell are you wearing, don’t tell me you going out in your pajamas” one of Carmen 20 something year old sister said as the rest just snicker.  

     

    Carmen rolls her eyes as they are always like that bringing her down.

     

    Carmen: “No stupid I m going to the gym and what wrong with my attire it gym attire”.

    Carmen was wearing grey sweat pants, a white t shirt, with her hair up in a messy pony tail and her glasses looking like it going to fall off her nose soon and some worn out tennis shoes.

     

    Carmen decides to change the subject to something else.

     

    Carmen: “Where you going dress up like a classy whore”

     

    Carmen sister: “Said what!”

     

    Maria: “Ok break it up guys, and let go already”.

     

     

    Maria shakes her head as they all headed out through the front door.

     

    At the parking lot of the gym.

     

    All of the girls jaws drop to the floor as the supposedly “gym” look like a resort.

     

    Maria: “Ok you guys stay here while I take Carmen to get registered”.

     

    Carmen sister said under her breath, “Baby”.

     

    Carmen was just glad that she gets to be away from them.

     

    Inside the gym.

     

    Maria: “Ok Carmen I already got you a one month membership and you will get your personal trainer tomorrow. Today you got lucky. Ok I really need to go before they drive the car off a cliff or something.”

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    1. Hi I usually read Danish stories but I find this interesting. Nice job on everyone in the gym especially the hilarious cardio intructor and the fierce tennis player (sorry can’t help it, am still a danish fan :-p). Great job. Thanks……

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