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Ugly Duckling Turn Into Swan ( My Version) Chapter 3
Chapter 3
Carmen shakes Shane hand slowly with her head bow down because she doesn’t want Shane to see that she is blushing.
Shane smiled at the shy girl in front of her.
Shane: (Look at her ears so red, totally blushing what a cutie).
Carmen slowly got the courage and lifts her head slowly as her eyes slowly scan Shane body upward.
Carmen: (Gosh….. what a bod).
Carmen eyes went from Shane six pack (because Shane have been working out; her wife beater is stick to her body). Her broad tone shoulders and arms .Carmen hurry look away as she saw the most gorgeous green eyes she ever seen.
Carmen have been checking Shane out that she forgot that she been shaking Shane hand longer than a normal hand shake should last.
Carmen: “Oh sorry”.
They let go of each other hand.
Carmen thought what a big, firm, but yet soft hands Shane got.
Shane: “It ok”. (Warm smile)
When just Shane was about to speak to Carmen, one of the blonde came over and interrupted them.
Rachael: “Oh Shane could you help me with something over there”. (She pointed)
Rachael said in her squeaky high pitch voice that Carmen bet that what Rachael use to get what she wants just like her classy whore sister. Without looking at Rachael Shane tells her sorry she had a client and grabs Carmen hand and walk away from the blonde. Carmen turn back and take one look at the blonde, clearly pissed off and jealous and stomp her feet on the ground and walk back to her group of friends by the treadmill. Carmen turn back to look at where they going and smile.
Outside of the gym.
Shane walks around and shows Carmen the other facilities they have. Basket ball court, tennis court, an outdoor swimming pool you name it they have it. This place is heaven Carmen thought.
The two of them make small talk about Carmen goals that she want to accomplish in the one month that she will be working out at the gym. Carmen felt so comfortable around Shane that she told Shane about her problems with her weight and looks and how people always criticize her.
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love alice..i favor alice and tasha more though!
Alice, Alice, you’ll never disappoint me ;) and papi can try all she wants cause she’s got nothing to do, obvs.
Shane, is a trainer? That iz WICKED HOT man!!! An Carmen is real adorable. I kick every1’s ass who made fun of her. Papi better go somewhere. lol. And the Tasha vs. Dana thing iz pretty awesome 2. lol. Alice is so crazy! Itz jus like her 2 have 2 girls fightin over her. Luvin it!!! PLz PMS!!!!
As I am a Sharmener, I feel shame on me.Cuz I found out your fic today and it’s already chap 3.Wow trainer Shane?! HOT HOT HOT!!!Can’t wait for the next. I don’t mind Papi’s hitting on Carmen cuz Shane will be a winner eventually.
I love the Alice/Dana/Tasha part of it. I lean toward Alice and Dana mostly though. Funny story keep going
wow lol, you gotta love alice that was hilarious…and of course sharmen was always great