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Timid Devotion (Part 12)
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It was early Wednesday morning when everyone agreed to take a few minutes to get together before work. Bette had just arrived at The Planet, and spotted the gang right away. She walked over with a smile.
"Hey Bette," they all started, nodding as she sat down.
"Hey guys."
Alice and Dana were sitting side by side and arguing quietly about something, so Bette looked over to Shane instead with a big smile.
"What are you so happy about?" Shane asked cooly, taking a sip of her iced tea.
"Nothing really," Bette smiled, looking down to her hands folded on the table. She wanted to blurt out the most amazing weekend date with Tina, two dates to be exact, but she knew she’d have to wait.
"Okay Bette," Alice intervened before Dana nudged her.
"No, stop it," Dana hushed her.
Bette raised an eyebrown and looked back to Shane. "Anyways …"
They both chuckled before Alice started again. "Bette, I think you need some action."
The people at the table next to them looked confused and disturbed, turning away. Bette dropped her head in her hands, "Thanks Alice, could you have said it a little louder?"
Shane laughed to herself as she had some more to drink, "Ah, come on Al, leave her alone."
"Yes, please do!" Dana insisted, shaking her head.
"I really don’t need you telling me when I should get laid," Bette said quietly, trying to avert attention from herself.
"Oh Bette," Alice pouted dramatically as she went on.
Tina was walking around the side and heard part of the conversation, smiling at Alice’s words, but feeling bad for Bette at the same time. When she made her way to the entrance, another smile braced her cheeks.
She walked over to the group while everyone gave her a wave and went back to bickering. Bette’s eyes, however, remained on Tina, and she smiled back.
"Hey," Bette said, turning in her seat slightly as Tina approached.
Without a word of welcome first, Tina walked straight over, leaned down and captured Bette’s lips in a kiss. A kiss that was sure to make them completely obvious. Tina didn’t want it to look like a sweet kiss between friends. She let herself linger for a few moments, feeling Bette’s lips give in and enjoy it.
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it took me for ever to get thru this one damn people here at work keep disturbing me..i am trying live each moment like i am the horney Tibette….LOL
geesh i hope the fire company is waiting to hose them off when they get to work! :)PPS
So just say it…dammit…
Wow, Tina is really coming out of the gate fast. I love the way you are writing this story and portraying Tina. I was even more fascinated with the way Tina came out to the gang and happy that Bette took Tina away before asked nosey Alice asked a million and one questions that were none of her business, besides it would have embarrased newly admitted Tina. But the backseat scene surprised me even more, never thought Bette would do it. I also wonder who the heck was on the telephone. I thought it might be someone trying to tell them the police were coming and to get out of there. lol. Loved the updates. Just catching up and I lvoe them. I see you have already posted again. On to the next one. Thanks for posting.
Tina just stole my heart with that one simple kiss in front of the gang. Wow! Such a wonderful way to make their introduction as a couple. I can certainly understand why Bette was so turned on by her special blonde. I wonder who was calling???? As always, you leave me wishing I had another chapter to read immediately!!! Post when you can…
when r these bunnies gonna do it?! Lol.
I am not sure that I would have been able to stop. I can understand the wanting their first time to be special. Hopefully that special time will come soon.
That was amazing!! I love the connection between Bette and Tina. I think that it is really sweet how Bette is taking her time with Tina and not rushing her. They are so sweet together. The tension is great…I wonder how they will work after that make-out seesion…lol! Oh and I loved Alice’s reaction! It was priceless. =) Great job and PPS!!
WOW – that was some make out session – even better than what i was thinking! And I am proud of Tina for telling everyone she was with Bette – and with a kiss and all! Now one question does Bette still feel that Tina is not one hundred percent ready? They almost couldn’t stop themselves – please just put them both out of their misery and let them have some FUN! You know I am a BIG FAN – your stories are the best and the highlight of my week! PPS
And what’s wrong with car sex?!! Why does the first time always have to be perfect? It never turns out that way no matter how hard you try LMAO :)
way to go, tina! loved how she came out to the gang – brave and sexy :) loved the update!
How is it that they could control themselves at times like THAT?I’ll probably never understand…You got to come when you got to come…
hooooooooooo that wass the best coing out everrrrrrr and may i say a great way of saying good morning to bette lol tina is so soooo sweet and bette rule. bette is in love
That chapter made me smile. I love how they are acting a bit like out of control teenagers. It’s cute. Thanks for posting!
Can’t wait for your next post!
dude that was so HOT not sure i can get back to my work without a cold drink now though. great post!loved how Tina came out to the group. lol at Alice still trying to set tina up and loved their self control or lack of :) thanks biissexi
Well, good morning to you too….. I cannot go to work after this..LOL Muy caliente (very hot). Biissexi, thanks for the update. please post very soon. Loved it!!!!!!!
Biisexi, thanks for this cute and hot story. LOVE it.
I have to give Btete a round of aplause for stopping where she did…wow..BUT as for Tina’s entrance in the beginning..kissing Bette…AWESOME AWESOME…made me wanna shout out at that moment “YOU ROCK!” lmao…I wonder who was on the phone..one of them is about to have a terrible day-I have a sneaky idea its Bette…but ill hold on until your next chappy..for how long..aaahh…not to sure…so get crackin lady lol..thanks bi for a wicked story..as always, you have not dissapointed. You really have ben one of my fav writers since i joined this site!
Tina walking in and kissing Bette….I never saw that coming..it was perfect. You have got to be the queen of tease at the moment…damn…I can’t wait for the next chapter…I see that t_daze is all ready crackin the whip…so I will just sit back and wait. : )
am i first to comment? wow… as always an excellent update! your writing is dynamite and B&T are sexy and sincere! so sweet really. You wrote the rest of the gangs reactions perfectly shanes reaction reminded me of season 1 end of pilot when she sees B&T in the morning… i imagine that smile she gives in this story! well done my friend
How on earth are these two going to get any work done being all flustered like that??? Loved how the gang found out, I can just imagine that happening! Love this and can’t wait for more:)
There is something people must suffer at this contemporary days.Havent you hard about a “circunstancial deafness”?It´s, for example, when a cell rings and you just can´t listen to it – when you are…making out, having sex,…Bette must do an effort to be deaf at some moments :) Great chap! Thank you, dear,also for the kind pm.
Loved how tina came out to the gang! Yeh! Love this update… hot make-out session! :)
Awww they are so cute and sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!