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Thief of my heart – chapter 15
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Chapter 15
Previously
‘Do you think we can forget about this little incident and try to get to know each other?’
‘I don’t know…I mean I broke in at your place and than you broke in at my place..’
‘Oh yeah about that…remind me to give you your thong back. I borrowed it just for some…wicked fun.’ Bette winked at Tina with a smirk. Tina now looked shocked.
‘Relax Kennard…I have a sense of humor too you know!’
They both began to laugh hysterically. After some time they became silent and looked intensely at each other.
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‘Tina…would you…uh…would you like to go on a date with me?’
‘Why?’
‘Uh…that was not really the answer I was hoping for.’
‘Sorry Bette but I want to know what your intensions are. Do you want to be friends with me?’
‘Maybe…but friends don’t date.’
‘I know…so you don’t want to be my friend…you want to be romantically involved with me.’
‘I want to be your friend but I would really like to see if it could lead to more. Like I told you…you are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen and…’
‘….you are attracted to me’ Tina smirked.
‘Obviously…and I think you are attracted to me too.’ Bette smiled at Tina.
‘Then I think we should go on a date and get to know each other better.’
‘Great! If it is okay for you, I would like to plan it.’
‘If you want…but Bette…’
‘Yeah?’
‘Nothing too fancy…nothing over the top. Just a normal date.’
‘Sure what did you think I would do?’
‘I don’t know….you have different standards than me’
‘What would make you think that?’
‘Bette’
Tina lifted her arms and looked around the room.
‘You are rich. Your living room is five times as big as my room. And may I add…the statue you wanted to give me as a gift costs…let me guess…uh 30.000$ ?’
‘You think I want to impress you with my money and woo you with expansive gifts?’
‘I don’t know…do you?’
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Yes my Dear, when your back hurts you hurt all over. I.ve had a couple of back surgeries and not so fun. I do a lot of walking,and still hurt you are so young so try to follow the Drs orders. Hope you are better soon.. Lost Tina in this story she has Poor Bette on a merry=go=round Losr that she keeps Bette on her toes. There is a reason for her being a thief, did I miss it? Get better soon.
Hi Jay! Such a charming story and so much fun to read! I too, faced a time in life when change was scary but undeniable… I picked the impossible and found it was not only possible, but more rewarding than I had ever dreamed! Best of luck to you! Dream big, and go for it!
Jay…my thoughts are with you as you begin a new phase of life. It seems as though you have accepted the transition and that will make all the difference as you begin to create a new path for your life. Please keep us all up to date on your progress. The story continues to be marvelous. I am so eager for their actual date. For whatever reason when I envision Tina, an imagine of catwoman comes to mind. No wonder Bette can’t wait to invite her over for an evening…PPS
Awwww Jay! We are so sorry to hear about your back, but your doc is right. You still have a chance to switch for a better life, sweetie. Go for it! We are sure that you can do what you put your mind and effort to achieve. Cheer up, sweetie.- As for the story, we LOVED the back and forth dialogue between B&T. It was just SO funny. We truly smiled at the end of this chappy. PPS Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
I love this story Jay! Please post again soon, if you can. Keep your head up. I believe this injury is a sign that there is something bigger and better out there for you…
I am sorry to hear about your injury. Hope that all works out for you. Tina is hiding something from not only Bette but from Shane. There is more to Tina than she letting on.
I am sorry to hear about your injury. Hope that all works out for you. Tina is hiding something from not only Bette but from Shane. There is more to Tina than she letting on.
Great chapter! I like the line when tells Bette she wants to use the door! take care of your back! Have fun seeing Pink but please becarful my friend.
You are such a tease jay wild. I have been following this from the begining, to be honest I cant’ remember if I commented or not an am to lazy to go back and check. I sounds like a funny way to start a relationship, points to each party but I also thought it to cute. I too had a back problem over 10 years ago that changed the course of my life so I’ll tell you the same thing my friend Rau told me, “Kia Kaha e hoa ma” means, have courage my frien. Best of luck w/all your changes. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Love it!!! *clab*
Love the story.Hope your back problem opens new and better opportunities for you.
the point system was cute…PPS
jay..what a great chapter and I can’t wait for them to start dating. I’m sure there will be lots of love and drama. I hope your back begins to feel better and that life brings you exactly what you want and need. take care.
Hey Jay, gald you took your friends n doctor advice. Sometime it take a situation for us to revalue our lives. Hope you will have a more fulfilling job. And do keep posting, loves your writting. Thanks for sharing.
Hey Jay, gald you took your friends n doctor advice. Sometime it take a situation for us to revalue our lives. Hope you will have a more fulfilling job. And do keep posting, loves your writting. Thanks for sharing.
The points system was too cute, and then Bette’s mouth being faster than her brain! Loved it!! Sorry to hear about your troubles, it may seem hard right now, but never give up!! PPS:)
OK, now that I am caught up with the storyline, what is going to happen at their dinner date?? I cannot wait for the next update Oh, by the way, DID MENTION THAT I CANNOT WAIT???!!!!!!!!! LOL PPS.