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Naked VIII
Ryan: Hey stranger
I turn around and see Ryan. She is smiling at me and I don’t want to hurt her. I don’t want to cause pain to that beautiful face and I don’t want to lose her but I am not ready to let Carmen go. I’m stuck between the two.
Shane: Hey
Ryan: I’ve been calling you but you haven’t been answering what’s up.
Shane: I’m just dealing with a lot right now.
Ryan: Anything that I can help with?
She puts her arm on my shoulder to comfort me and it just feels wrong. I should be the one confronting her. I am the one that fucked up.
Shane: No I just may need a little space.
Ryan: Ok well let me know. I am here if you need me and here I brought you lunch again.
I don’t deserve her kindness. I am the scum of the earth and she should know but I can’t speak. I can’t tell her and at the same time I know I should.
Shane: Thank you.
Ryan: You’re welcome. You can call me anytime you need to talk.
She goes to walk out the shop at the same time Carmen is coming in. I feel a knot in my stomach she smiles at Carmen and then waves back at me. Carmen looks at me curiously and I feel the knot growing tighter. I watch Ryan ride off and I am in awe once again of her. I look back to see an angry Carmen in front of me.
Carmen: Who was that Shane?
Shane: None of your business.
Carmen: A girl waving at you is my business.
Shane: Since when. You’re not girlfriend and you’re not my wife.
Carmen: Fuck you Shane.
I grab her arm before she walks away.
Shane: I am sorry ok I’m sorry.
Carmen looks at me still hurt but less angry.
Carmen: What’s that?
She points to the lunch that Ryan brought me.
Shane: Lunch
I can tell Carmen wants to ask more questions but I am not ready to answer so I start to head back to the shop.
Carmen: We need to talk about last night.
I just hang my head and look at my feet.
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(28 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
damn, carmen, I don’t think you’re doing it right! too bad i have to admit ryan is great. still hoping shane can forgive carmen. still reading no matter what. sorry for the lack of reviews. and thanks for writing ;)
you are doing a great job with this story, with all your stories…even though im all sharmen i really like ryan so im like shane im stuck between to the two…i dont think shane should take carmen back just yet, carmen needs to realize what she lost and fight for shane, it was good that shane didnt sleep with carmen again everything cant be solved that way…cant wait for the next post, i love all your fics
just got caught up on your story, and holy shit i love it!your amazing!!!
I think Carmen has to show Shane her love and effort to get her love again. kisses are not enough. Hmmm Ryan is a really great person. She deserves to know what happened between Shane and Carmen. I am still here and will read your fic becoleman as long as you would write Shane stories.