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Never Give Up – part 7
Story written on March 21, 2009 by charlot.
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Helena could not believe the nightmare she was going to fall back into. Once again she had let herself being deceived so easily by those dark eyes.
Was Dylan still hanging on with Danny? With that fucking snaky, shifty, nasty, rat-like… she was not even able to find the proper words to define him.
She dared not to speak in the car, and sat silently thinking about how to handle that. She perfectly knew she had to face Dylan and ask directly for what fucking reason Danny would call her, and of all nights, right that night she was supposed to take her last chance to gain Helena’s trust back. But she was pretty sure Dylan would have a reasonable explanation, that she will not be able to take as true. Why haven’t she told her she still had some relation, any kind of relation, with her former boyfriend? Did she just forget to mention that? Anger was growing up again inside her. That’s the last drop..
Bzzz… Bzzz…
The phone rang again in Dylan’s pocket.
"Fuck, I forgot to connect the headset…. where did I put it…" She kept one hand on the wheel while exploring quickly the car for the wireless headset, without being able to find it.
"Oh, whatever… Dylan’s speaking" She answered the phone with a standard voice.
Helena, who had not stopped looking at her since they left the restaurant, could tell for sure she had not looked at the phone display yet. It had turned dark as soon as she dropped it and now Dylan was focusing on driving the jeep on the rough terrain, and she didn’t take even a short glance at the name of the caller. ‘Ok, let’s see how you handle that, Dylan’
"Hello, can you hear me? Fuck… I fear the line is broken here.” She put the phone back in the pocket, still without looking at it.
“Well, that even better. I didn’t feel like to speak with anybody else but you tonight" She could see her smile in the dark.
"Stop the car please." Helena almost choked up and her voice failed "I’m feeling sick"
"Oh. Yes sure."
Dylan parked the car on a small place to the right of the dark road. Helena opened the door and exited the car quickly, but stayed next to it and put a hand on the cowling of the car. She felt her stomach turning upside down, and the whole stuff of emotions she experienced in those last days, the pain and fear caused by that last call, soon everything came to the surface, mixed with food and wine and she could not help vomiting her soul out.
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Did my girl Dylan make another mess,I think not. I agree with her she cant be with Helena,if Helena is never going to forgive her nor trust. She shouldnt have that in her life.she couldnt be happy with that hanging over her head. Not Helena is going to be unhappy also, she needs to forgive and learn how to trust,be it with Dylan or someone else.
oh man, Helena is just so neurotic. so much so that it really makes me laugh because you captured it perfectly! great job, even if writing in english is frustrating for you, you’re doing such a great job, Charlot!
I have just caught up with this story. It’s absolutely fantastic! I hated the Dylena ending and I am enjoying this one a lot better. This post has me in some distress though!! COME ON HELENA!! …Then again, Dylena is being kinda sketchy with the Danny call. I dunno, I’m hooked. Can’t wait for more =)
Man Helena is overreacting, can’t she just for once give Dylan the benefit of the doubr? But then again I can understand how she must feel cause I have HUGE trustissues myself. Great job dear.
I found this story yesterday, and came back this morning to see if you had any additional chapters. You do an excellent job writing in English. It’s definitely better than how episode 8 left us, but I’m curious as to where you will take this next.