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Just Be Happy (Chap.1)
At the Planet
Shane sitting at a table having her usual morning double shot espresso while reading the paper. Alice walks in and spots Shane, who she hasn’t seen since Jenny’s funeral 2 weeks ago. She notices that Shane doesn’t looks so good, it looks like she hasn’t slept in days, her hair stuffed under a hat and she has on sunglasses although it is raining and the sun is nowhere to be seen.
Alice: What’s up Shaney, long time no see
Shane: Hey Al
Alice: So how you been? Are you okay, I mean I haven’t seen or heard you from in a while
Shane: I’m living
Alice: yea barely (oh shit did I say that out loud)
Shane: what was that
Alice: Huh? Oh nothing, so besides living, what else have you been up to
Shane: Same ol, same ol
Alice: What’s same ol, same ol?
Shane shoots her look, as if to say she doesn’t want to be bothered but Alice isn’t going for it, she’s been wanting to really talk to Shane lately and this was the right to time to do it.
Alice: Shane can we talk?
Shane: Do I have a choice?
Alice: um no not really
Shane (sits up): Ok what gossip do you have today Al
Alice: No gossip smart ass, I’m just worried about you Shane, I …
Shane (cuts her off): yea well don’t be, I’m fine, I don’t need your pity
Alice: I’m not pitying you, your right you don’t need pity, you need a reality check
Shane: What?
Alice: Shane when are you going to grow up, I mean really, when are you going to start taking some responsibility for your actions, what do you plan on doing? I hope you aren’t going to back that pathetic party life
Shane: Party life?
Alice: Yea, drinking, getting high, fucking a different girl every night
Shane: Yea that’s exactly what I plan on doing, why do you have something else in mind
Alice: Yea you…
Shane (cuts her off): well keep it to yourself
Alice: You know what Shane you really need to grow up, you are 28 years old still doing the same shit you were doing when you were 21.
Shane: Well what else do you want me to do? Huh?!
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(16 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Loved it!! You are doing a pretty good job given this is your first fic. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I liked the start a lot. I love Shane and Alice’s friendship so it’s great to see that in your story. I’d love to read more.
great start
Wonderful start. There is so much potential in this story. I like that you reintroduce Carmen and open that door. It would also be interesting to read what Bette and Tina are up to in New York. Maybe they and Carmen might meet by chance and assist her and Shanes’ reunion!? I look forward to reading where the characters go next. pps
I love it, keep the good work. I really like your writing style.