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Just Be Happy (Chap.4)
Previously (Just Be Happy)
The woman had looked up at her, she looked so familiar
Papi: Carmen, Carmen Morales
Carmen: Eva Torres
Papi: Hey guys, I want you to meet a friend of mine
Papi: She was just behind me, oh here she is
Shane: Carmen
Carmen: Shane
Papi: You two know each other?
Alice: Holy Shit! Carmen! What are you doing here?
Alice run over to her and hugged her.
Carmen: I told you I was coming to visit
Alice: Wow you look really hot
Carmen (laughs): thanks and you look really drunk
Shane just stared at the both them, she didn’t know what to say, I mean Carmen was standing right in front of her, she didn’t know what to do. She contemplated on blending in with the crowd and leaving but she had done enough running, it was time to face what she had been putting off for so long.
Papi: Wait how do you guys already know each other, I’m I missing something
Alice downed another shot: Well Carmen and Shane used to date about 3 years ago.
Papi: Really I didn’t know that
Carmen: Yea we were even engaged (staring at Shane) until somebody decided to leave me at the alter
Papi: Oh, I see
Shane just stared down at her feet, not knowing what to say. Carmen just stared at her waiting for her to at least look her in the eyes.
The blonde from earlier came walking up to Shane “Hey sexy, Can I have that dance you promised me” She leaned into Shane, grabbing her by her tie.
Carmen: Wow 3 years, and some things still haven’t changed. It was nice seeing you Papi and Alice, I’ll catch up with you guys later.
Carmen looked at Shane still staring at the floor, she turned around and made her way out the club.
Alice: Shane what the hell! Go after her
Shane: and say what
Alice: Apologize you fucker, god you didn’t even look at her
Shane: I didn’t know what to say
Alice: Well sorry would be a start. Look Shane you are my best friend, and I kinda understood why you did what you did 3 years ago, but if you let her walk out that door without saying anything then you really are a coward.
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(20 votes, average: 4.10 out of 5)
Great plot twist there at the end. Looking forward to the reactions!
Drew, my fiancée????NO! NO! NO! Drew’s gotta go!! Get to work, Shane!!!PPS!
Fiancee??? What a drama!!thx for nice job. PPS
Carmen is not the strongest-willed girl in town, is she? can’t wait to see Shane’s reaction after this. PPS
What? Carmen’s fiancée? Poor Shane. Did Carmen cheat on with Shane last night? I guess huge drama is coming. I love the way you write fresh2death. Thank you and post soon.
woo drama straight ahead, poor shane. keep the great work hope you up date soon.
Oh. . . . crap. Carmen has a fiancee but she spent the night with Shane the night before? Oh. Crap. So this is the first chapter that I’ve read so far and I’m already hooked (looks like I got in just as the drama started!). I can’t wait to see what’s next.