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    I WANT YOU BACK CHAPTER 79

     

    CHAPTER 78

    “Would that be a suitable price then?” Mr Stuart said

    “Well actually I was thinking $20,000 less!! – I mean come on!!…How can you quote that price and keep a straight face?” Tina said incredulously

    “It’s a pretty reasonable amount for a place of this standard Mrs Kennard..” The man replied calmly

    “It’s Miss sir…And no it’s a highly inflated amount..”

    “Oh I’m sorry I just assumed you’d be married…You mentioned earlier that you had a daughter…”

    “No I’m not married…But we intend to be in a couple of months”

    “Congratulations”

    “Thank you Mr Stuart…Now is that your final estimation or should I go look elsewhere?

    Tina asked…Hoping that the man would fall for that sentence…Because truth be known she really wanted this particular property, and if she really had to pay that amount she would..

    “Hmmm…I’ll knock $5,000 off the asking price, but that’s the best I can do I’m afraid..?”

    “As I said sir I want $20,000 off!!…I mean the price your asking for is disgusting! -Pffft!! –You should be wearing a balaclava!! – Quite frankly its daylight robbery!!…”

    “So your not interested then?” The owner stated with a pretend ‘I don’t give a shit attitude’…But the truth was he really needed the money…

    “Tina answered straight away “Sorry…It’s just not within the price range I was thinking…It’s such a shame we could not reach agreement…But never mind I will go look at the other options available…” Tina replied then looked at the man straight in the eye and continued…

    “Sorry for troubling you, and for taking up some of your weekend…Have a great day sir..” The blonde then turned on her heel and started to walk out the door…

    The executive was despondent ..She could feel her heart sink as she walked towards the exit…She really wanted to clinch this deal…It meant the world to her…But she knew it was an over inflated amount of money he wanted, and she decided to go with her intuition and pretend she would not pay the price asked…Secretely hoping the seller would cave in..

    Tina got to the door and was just about to walk out it when she heard Mr Stuart’s voice…

    “Okay you win!…I’ll drop the asking price by $20.000…"

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    Comments

    1. “The Bette Porter Gallery”, is open for business. What a great wedding gift. Tina is a mean negotiator. Great update Please post soon. I love this story. Great job.

    2. Wow, I really love this story! Sorry I didn’t comment on the last one, but I was too excited to read the next chapter! lol. You’ve done a wonderful job with this! Thanks for posting. PPS!

    3. So sweet…what an amazing wedding gift for Bette! Having her own gallery back again and maybe even the painting back again! Thank you! Great update :)

    4. Aaaah dang lady…you made my heart all mushy after that wonderfu gesture of T’s.thanks honey…can’t wait for more;)..lmao…as for the dog box…you HAVE to fill me in on that!!! I love a good laugh and you my love..are fucken hysterical(ha ha ha..no bleeping out this time;)have a good weekend and fill me in…love T

    5. Just caught up on the last couple chapters and I loved them both. What a wonderful thing Tina is doing for Bette, it will be such a fantastic surprise for her. Bette will love it. Such a wonderful wedding gift. PPS

    6. what a terrific wedding gift… Bette is going to faint by the pure shock that the gallery will AGAIN be hers… AWESOME… I’m excited to see how Mr Stuart helps Tina with the artist……

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