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Springtime in California Chapter 1
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It was the first day of spring, Tina had awakened from a deep sleep, her eyes sore from the tears the night before. As she opened her eyes the same scene began to play out in her mind, she sighed softly trying to find the error of her ways, she knew what she should have done and said to Bette, but would it have made a difference? Would it have changed her mind?
Tina realised by now Bette would have made this grand gesture and most defiantly won the heart of Jodie. The scenario played out in the young woman’s mind of what Bette may have said, what she would have done and it began to drive her crazy with jealousy and as she finally lifted herself from the pillow she knew that today she’d have to just get by with the love of her daughter, the one that both her and Bette were blessed with.
Later that day her and Angelica arrived at the Planet for lunch with Alice, she had planned on spending time at home but Alice called her and begged for her to come and after some persuading Tina was putting Angelica in the car seat and on the way to the Planet.
Alice waved her down, she let Angelica out of her arms and laughed as she ran into the arms of her Aunt, Tina rose the sunglasses from her eyes and was alarmed by Alice’s face -‘why are you looking at me like that?’-
-‘You’ve been crying’- she accused
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Hey loveTee, Yes of course you should continue. It’s a great start so far. Your writing is great. PPS
Of course you should continue…with one condition – as long as you get rid of Jodi really fast (like brwnsuga said) :)
hELLO ! Of course you should continue! I really like it! It’s really well written. I just can’t wait for the next part :) See you soon!
That was a great chapter. Very interesting. Please continue !!!!
that was a great start. please continue!
Yes, you should but can jodi disappear already. It will be interesting to see if Bette loves Tina as much as Tina does now.
absolutely
Loved your story and sure hope you continue soon..I am with Ally…hope Jodie isn’t around long..I know stories need some drama but B & T can always make enough on their own. thank you for sharing and can’t wait for the next chapter.
Good start and please continue, thanks!
Please continue. Great start and I would realy like to see how you bring Bette and Tina together. Thank you and I admire you for being so brave to write. Thank you :)
great start!! loved it :) and of course you should continue!! Tina better come up to a plan to win Bette back asap
Hello loVeTee… Of course you should continue… it takes a great lot of strength to even attempt to post a story and you have done an excellent job… the way you have portrayed ‘Angelica’ is so cute and adorable and well yeah please continue… and bring us a story only can tell… Keep Smiling Friend, Hugs, JC
Yes of course you should continue and I´m looking forward to your next post and to seeing how you manage getting our favourite characters together.
Definately continue.
Welcome aboard, loVeTee, Please continue. I cannot get enough of B&T. Just do me a favor, get rid of Jodi as fast as you can.Please post soon.
Shall I continue?….ohhhhhhhh yeaaaaah!
absolutely continue!! it’s amasing so far! can’t wait for more ;)
By all means please continue. Enjoyed this first outing and plese do us all a favor by getting rid of jodi real soon. WE HATE HER!!!! And don’t want to see her with Bette. Maybe she will just decide not to come back to LA, wouldn’t that be great. Rant over. Please continue and thanks for wanting to write and post your story for us. We love all things TiBette. Happy Easter. PPS
i think this is a very good start and we all have to start somewhere. right – lets get rid of Jodie and get tour girls back sharing the same house — and bed right ? AE xx
Please continue:) I was half hoping that Bette didn’t go to Jodi but instead was stuck in an airport trying to get back home, to Tina, but I guess we shall have to wait and she if she comes around to loving Tina again. PPS
Continue? Ummmmmm…Hell yeah!
So I see you didnt continue after popular demand thats too bad this was awesome, so please again please continue come back an update love it