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Just Be Happy (Chap.5)
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Fiancée, her fucking fiancée. You gotta be kidding me, did I sleep with Carmen last night? Because I thought I did, if I did then why is she standing in front of me with her fiancée.
Drew: Hey, nice to meet you guys. I heard a lot about you.
Alice: Well that’s crazy because we haven’t heard anything about you, take a seat. (she patted the seat the seat next to her.
Shane just looked at Alice, she knew she was going to get everything she could out of this situation. Carmen sat down next to Drew, not even looking Shane’s way.
Alice: So Drew, how long have you and Carmen been together
Drew: About a year and half now
Papi: Wow and you guys getting married, you set a date yet?
Alice: How did you guys meet?
Carmen: Guys!, geez
Drew: no it’s cool. We met at a party Carmen was djing for Russell Simmons. I saw her and knew she was the one
Shane just smirked and rolled her eyes looking off to the side.
Alice: Wow love at first sight huh? So what do you do for a living?
Drew: Oh, I’m a model
Alice: Cool, you know Shane is a model too
Shane cut her eyes at Alice, giving her a look that says shut the fuck up. Alice pretended she didn’t see this.
Drew: Really, what kind of work have you done Shane
Shane: nothing really, just a few shoots
Alice: Oh Shane, don’t be modest. She is the face of Hugo Boss underwear ads
Papi (smirking): yea, you looking very Shane today
Shane looked at Alice and Papi wishing they would both shutup, but they both gave her looks back saying they were enjoying this.
Drew: Wow I knew I recognized you, you are that Shane! Your work is great. Babe you didn’t tell me Shane was a model
Alice: Carmen don’t tell me you never seen those huge billboards of Shane in NY, cuz they are all over LA
Carmen: yea I saw them (I saw them and nearly fainted when I seen how sexy she looked, Carmen thought to herself)
Alice: Did you like them?
Shane: Al, give it rest
Alice smirks at Shane, while Shane just stares at the floor. She would rather be anywhere but here right now.
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Carmen: Fuck you Shane! Shane: you didHaHaHa! Yep! They need to be doin more of that, and Carm needs to get rid of Drew!
I don’t think I like Drew and all the drama she is bringing, but on the other hand drama always leads to Shane and Carmen fighting, which I enjoy. Good chapter, can’t wait to read more!
AHHHH POST SOON omg i’m addicted
umhahaha~ I must be an evil. I like the hard drama. You are back. Thank you!!
Hey fresh, just got caught up and I’m loving your story. How the heck are they going to get past this new hurdle called Drew? I know that Carmen was wrong not to tell anyone about Drew but I think Shane was ‘just-a-little-unrealistic’. I know their love is deep… but darn it she didn’t even call Carmen the next morning or during the day to explore their feelings about the night before… hot as it was. If Shane had…she might have found out about Drew … without the audience. Anyway, I’m sorry Drew Carmen doesn’t seem to be that into you. It’s just that Drew may be good but Shane is GREAT. I love that parting shot between them. Thanks for writing. PPS.
I totally agree with franphil2020. I know Carmen didn’t tell her fiance eariler is hurt to Shane too much so She is right to think it’s kinda revenge. Can’t wait if Carmen would gonna fix it on.
I loved this. That was some funny drama. Stay and talk to Alice? I was thinking “Who in their right mind would ever say that?” and just then I read Alice’s reaction to it. Haha. And Shane’s last line was great too. I’m really enjoying this. Just one thing is bugging me, I seem to be feeling bad for Drew, just a little bit. That can’t be good. So she needs to either stop being nice or realizing Carmen is not the one -not for her-; because, obviously, she can’t marry. And if she does, then she can’t keep her for too long.
Shane makes a good point about the kissing and the fucking. It’s not something you go into without knowing. If Carmen went that far with Shane, there must have been a reason. Great chapter!