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Milagros(Miracles) 4 part A
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Two Weeks Later
Mercedes: usted tiene que hablar con ella (you have to talk to her).
Carmen: hago (I will)
Mercedes: cuándo (when)
Carmen ran her fingers through her hair. She didn’t have an answer for that.
Mercedes: Ella mantiene la venida aquí le buscando. Ella necesita respuestas. (She keeps coming here looking for you. She needs answers).
Carmen was suddenly angry. Shane needed answers but so did she.
Carmen: quién es lado es usted en (Who’s side are you on).
Mercedes: Angel’s.
Carmen watched as her son played with his trucks on the floor. He looked so happy but she knew if she kept this from him growing up he would hate her. She would hate herself. Mercedes patted Carmen’s back and then pulled her in for a hug.
Mercedes: El merece saber. Los dos hacen. usted ha mantenido este secreto para también mucho tiempo. (He deserves to know. They both do. You have kept this secret for too long).
Carmen nodded.
Mercedes: Ella ha explicado a mí y yo la perdono. Ella todavía le adora Carmencita. (She has explained to me and I forgive her. She still loves you Carmencita.)
Carmen had nothing else to say. What was there to say?
Shane had just hung up with Ms. Morales. She told her that she hadn’t heard from Carmen. Shane knew she was lying but what could she do about it. Her phone rang and she looked at the caller id. It was Alice.
Shane: Hey Al.
Alice: Hey Shane. How are you holding up?
Shane sighed. She was tired of the special attention, all of her friends crowding around her and constantly asking her if she was ok. She didn’t like people to look at her as if she was fragile.
Shane: I’m fine Al for the thousandth time.
Alice: Ok grumpy pants I just have a few a questions.
Shane: About?
Alice: Well I am researching something.
Shane: Al just spit it out,
Alice: Do you have an older brother?
Shane: Huh?
Alice: Ok didn’t think so. Are you capable of making sperm?
Shane: Al are you on pills again?
Alice: No this is for research purposes.
Shane: I am hanging up now.
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hella great chap!! can’t wait for shane’s reaction
I hate cliffhangers!! Glad Carm told Shane about her son. Now they gotta fix their issues and be a family!!
Your mean, leaving us hanging like that! JK, I really, really, can’t wait for Shane’s reaction!
Hey bcoleman, great chapter. Is Shane FINALLY growing up and realizing that she has to get off her butt and speak to Carmen like an adult? Gosh I really hope so. I know Carmen was wrong not to have told Shane about Angel but… I can understand her motivation which was born in pure disappointment and pain. I look forward to good things from these two. (Hint!Hint!) Thanks for writing. PPS.
Loved Alice and her research, loved Shane and her helicopter noises, loved the fact that wavy hair is back! Woohoo! Shane moved to East L.A. and opened a shop in Pasadena? She needed a change of scene, huh? But a house in WeHo with a kid living next door seems to me like a nice enough place to raise a child :)Thanks for answering my question again, i’m just trying to picture him in my mind, and btw there’s no such thing as too long a chapter. Now I’ll wait patiently, or not, for part B.