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    Milagros(Miracles) 6

    Story written on May 4, 2009 by bcoleman.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=73343
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    Angel, Shane is your mommy.

    Carmen woke up gently from her nap and ran her fingers through her hair. She stretched her body out like a cat and looked around her room disoriented. She walked into her bathroom and watched her face. She then went down the hall to check on Angel. She finally had her son at her house. She knew she shouldn’t feel that way but she was so used to having him all to herself. Shane was coming back later on today to pick him up and he would be gone again. Carmen sighed her shoulders slumping in the process. It would be easy if they could be a family together but Shane wasn’t talking to her. They were on a need to know basis pertaining to topics surrounded around Angel. Other than that it was if Shane had nothing to say. Carmen hated herself for the effect that Shane was having on her. Every time she saw her, her heart fluttered. Carmen had it bad for Shane but she wasn’t sure if the feelings were mutual. Carmen turned her head in the direction of Angel’s room. She heard slight movement. She walked in and saw Angel at his table coloring. Carmen sat down at the table next to him.

    Carmen:  Qué es usted haciendo mi amor (What are you doing my love?)

    Angel continued to draw.

    Angel: colorido (coloring).

    Carmen watched as he continued to draw. He drew what looked like to be her and Mercedes. Then Angel started drawing a stick figure with big green eyes and squiggly hair. He seemed very intent on making the hair very squiggly.

    Carmen:  puede veo (Can I see)

    Angel nooded and handed her the paper.

    Carmen: permítame adivinar este mí, la abuelita, y usted (Let me guess. This is me, grandma, and you).

    Angel shook his head. He pointed at the green eyed figure.

    Angel: Shane.

    Carmen: Oh.

    Angel took the picture out of her hand and continued to draw more squiggly hair. He had his tongue outside of his mouth and looked deep in concentration. Carmen watched him intently. Now was a good time to explain to him who Shane really was. She decided to speak to him in English, so that the translation wasn’t lost on him.

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    1. aaaaaaaaaH!!! an update!!!! yay!!! I’ve been waiting for an update from either one of your stories and I finally get one! yay!I love this story ‘bcoleman’… “angel” is just a sweetheart.ok…onto the update: OoOOOooo, I LOVE the ‘ting tings’! “Alice & sons”.. Alice is a friggin’ nut! I friggin’ love her! great update! ok… is it too soon to ask for more?! on either one of ur fics?! ah well, it was worth a try.PPVVVVVVVVS!!!!!!!!”VanillAandSugA” aka “djDeeH”

    2. almost forgot… “YAY” I am the first to comment! lol!ok, just wanted to wish you well on your finals. I know what you’re going through. If there is one thing I know about finals, it’s that it “SucksMajorAss”.

    3. Ugh, finals. Have you considered dropping out? :)sorry. jk. Now seriously, good luck with that. So, the chapter…Put him in a cardboard box, lol. Alice rocks my socks. Shane and Angel are so cute… maybe they should do something together the three of them… maybe it’d help him understand? Anyway, I don’t care what happens in the next chapter (totally lying here) but i hope it happens soon, please. Thanks for writing!

    5. Hey bcoleman, so happy to see your update. I’m honoured that you’ve incorporated one of my thoughts into your story. So, so thrilled to be of assistance to you. I’m really liking how Shane is maturing. I know she has it in her, because despite her flaws, she has a really good heart. She has good intentions, just really poor skill at execution of ideas. Thanks for writing. Now get to work…we expect you to ace your exams. Good luck!!!

    6. LOL, yep, Finals Week for me toooooo (just shoot me). Hey, I’m glad to get a little relief from all the studying and read up on my newest favorite fanfic =). Keep it coming. I hope you have a lot in store because right now I would LOVE to read updates on this fic for as long as possible!

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