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9 to 5: For Service and Devotion Chapter 6
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Bette spent the night walking the ship before sitting down at the breakfast table with her friends, her mood still not changed.
Aaron: Thank god you are here. Bette tell Alice that I’m pretty.
Bette: What?
Alice: I made the mistake of telling Aaron that I thought he looked handsome today and he got all pissed. He insists that he looks pretty not handsome.
Aaron: I am pretty. Look at these check bones?
Shane: You guys…do we have to do this again?
Kit: I mean really! Can’t you be pretty and handsome?
Aaron huffed.
Aaron: Bette!! Come on! I need you to chime in here. As our boss you know best.
Bette stayed silent.
Aaron: Bette?
Kit: Baby sis? You ok?
Bette stood from the table abruptly.
Bette: This is fucking bullshit! If you are all going to sit around and just talk about nothing I’m leaving. I actually have some fucking work to do.
She grabbed her coffee and left the dining hall, all eyes were on her.
Aaron: So…I guess I’m not pretty then?
Alice smacked her friend upside the head.
Aaron: Oww! What the hell Al!
Alice: Did you not see what just happened?
Aaron: Not really? I mean you smacked me from behind so I didn’t really see it coming…
Shane: She’s talking about Bette you ass.
Aaron: Oh! Right. What was up with that?
Kit shrugged.
Kit: I have no idea. What happened at poker last night?
Alice: Nothing. She was there for like an hour and then she bailed.
Aaron: She did look a little sick though? Remember?
Dana: Yeah, she was pale.
Shane: Totally pale but other than that she was fine.
Kit: She’s probably just stressed.
Aaron stood up.
Aaron: Do you want me to go talk to her? Cause I can like totally drag it out of her!
Alice reached up and pulled her friend back down.
Alice: Do yourself favor…sit down and drink your chocolate milk.
Aaron: Mmm…I love chocolate milk!
Alice patted his head and the group fell into silence.
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I can’t wait to see what happens next with Bette and Tina. Could Tina be fired for dating a Passenger? Please post soon…
AWESOME. I feel for Tina. Man, can Bette get cold. BRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! Alice and Aaron are something else. Is Kit getting Bette’s art collection to help Alice out??????? PPS
Aaron makes me LOL…funny, funny stuff! PPS!
Is mailing them to me just a pretense for you to get my name and address and come visit me… if so, I promise not to tell your date ;) I’ll pretend I didn’t catch the nuance of extra nice. Exploiting my jealousy will get you nowhere ;) Loved this update! Bette seeing Helena and Tina in the store is just heartbreaking! Poor baby! And the conversation with Alice and Aaron and Kit is just priceless. LOL! Do whales eat people, I love it. Again, you don’t even have to tell me who was saying anything, I absolutely would have known. I’m a pretty girl mama… MISS GYPSY ROSE LEE!!!! … impressed ;) Can Showtime just change all of these characters name and produce it as a new show? Because I would ABSOLUTELY tune in weekly for it. And is Kit up to what I’m thinking she is up to?? …LOVE the way your mind works ;) What I love the MOST about your writing is that usually when I read stories, I read them only for Bette and Tina and scenes with other people I just skip over… but in your stories you write the other scenes so well that even if it isn’t a Bette / tine or a Bette and Tina scene, I’m still completely in the story with you. THANK GOD YOU’RE BACK!!
…i’ll never let go jack – ha, that made me chuckle! What a meany our porter can be, she needs to calm that down…2nd thoughts an angry/vicious bette is a sexy bette!! keep the chappys comin flair!! pps
So Kit’s gonna steal her baby sis’ photos? She might think that she’s doing both Alice and Bette a favor, but it could totally backfire. Aaron letting slip about Bette may have just saved Tina and Bette a lot of awkward fumbling… Hopefully Tina knows now that Bette may be acting the way she is cos she’s jealous. And hopefully she doesn’t use that in some game between Bette and Helena… Post soon, thanks flair!
Hey I am so glad u r writting again:) I read all ur other work some time ago n just loved it, the way u write Alice n Aaron is just fantastic. U r an amazing talented writer n i am looking forward to more of dis story n ur other stories.
oh boy rough waters ahead..
Damn Bette that was so cold I can see my breath. lol
Great update – I love this story! Can’t wait to read more! PPS
O.K., I had been a silent reader up until now, but this is just too good to stay silent. Flairfor the dramatic, you have a flair for more than that. This story moves at a great pace with something interesting all the time. Keep it up, I look forward to all your posts!
I think the temperature might drop even lower when Kit offers up some of Bette’s art to auction w/o telling Bette, heh. Cool Alaskan waters have nothing on AngryBette! Alice and Aaron rock!
bette needs to learn how to communicate that’s for sure
So, Kit got the key to what. . Bette´s an artist?? Anyway can´t wait till Alice finds out about Tina dating Helena. A whale´s not gonna do the trick, bring on the big white one. I just love your dialogue. It leaves me chuckling all the way to work – my students are eternally grateful!
I’ve read 2 chapters in a roll.. my heart’d higher heart rate due to your story. Great job as always Flair.. can’t wait to read more. PPS Thank you
What a nice treat after a very long Monday…thanks!
Great update! I can’t wait to see what happens next! I so love the interaction between Aaron and Alice. I laughed out so loud! You will sort out B&T right – maybe Bette can apologise and then tell Tina why she was angry and then Tina will say – she was just helping out Bette… ok ok – I’ll let you write to story its your’s anyway :)
I’ll never let go of the rubber ducky. The ducky will float on. Hope Bette comes around, maybe she should be first in line to see said shrink. Thanks for the post.
Hi, thanks for another chapter. It’s nice that they have some misunderstandings at first, maybe it would help them to try better .. I mean, when everything is going very well from the very beginning, it’s kinda .. dangerous. The obstacles are quite helpful sometimes, they teach us to appreciate good things and nice people properly.. I love fairy tales, but I dont believe in them.
Uh oh! Kit’s gonna take some of Bette’s art pieces?! Not cool, especially with the mood Bette is in! I hope Tina finds out what’s wrong with Bette! PPS
OK got my life jacket and I am ready for the perfect storm in one Bette Porter. Bring it ON!
hmmm…. the plot thickens. this is great fun thx.
I enjoy it when I get a break from the coming drama with Bette and Tina when I look at the craziness of Alice or that little diva.