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9 to 5: For Service and Devotion Chapter 7
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Alice had walked passed Bette’s office several times in the past 3 hours. Every time the door was closed and she was becoming more concerned for her friend. She had seen Bette’s short fuse before but this was extreme. It normally wore off in an hour or two, this had been all day.
Cautiously she knocked on Bette’s office door.
Alice: Bette, it’s Al. You ok?
Bette didn’t answer.
Alice: Bette, come on, I’m worried about you. Please…
Bette opened her eyes and rolled her head toward the door.
Bette: Ugh…come in.
Alice smiled at her success and turned the knob.
Alice: Hey Porter!
Bette gave a faint smile.
Bette: Hi Al.
Alice closed the door behind her and sat down at her friend’s feet.
Alice: How ya feelin?
Bette rubbed her head.
Bette: I’ve had better…and believe it or not…I’ve had worse.
Alice: Do you want to talk about it?
Bette wondered what she would say if she did talk about it? That she was a jealous bitch when it came to the new blonde? That she didn’t know how to control her anger? Either way she diced it she was a complete ass.
Bette: Not really.
Alice: I hear ya. Oh and in case you were worried…Aaron and I settled the pretty debate from earlier.
Bette sat up a little and gave her friend a weak smile.
Bette: Glad to hear it.
Alice nodded.
Alice: Yeah, he was right after all. He is a pretty boy.
Bette nodded.
Alice: So….what else is new?
She was trying so hard to make her friend feel better but all she managed to do was create awkward conversation.
Bette: Nothing really.
Alice: That’s cool….
Bette: Al, is there something I can do for you?
Alice: Actually yes. You can snap out of this funk. Whatever it is. We are all going for drinks tonight in the rear lounge and we would like you to come.
Bette shook her head.
Bette: Al, I have so much work to do.
Alice: It can wait. A night out with your friends will be help. I promise. You know us. We will make stupid conversation. Dana will deny her lesbian identity, Aaron will…well…he’ll be Aaron and I’ve always been good for a few laughs. Please.
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I am smiling:)
just too excellent..poor Bette tossing cookies on the side of a ship… LOL wonder what will happen when awaken in the morning.
I’d hoped Bette would have been a bit more of a talkative and honest drunk. Oh well, let’s see what happens in the morning. I’m glad Bette had Tina to look after her.
Hey Tee!! I can be a cute drunk too, you know ;) .. Thx a lot Flair
havent been quite that drunk but sometimes wished i could have been. excellent chappie. thx have fun!!!
Oh boy, Bette will have one heavy hangover when she awakens and she will awake in the arms of the one person for which she cares so deeply. Glad Tina stayed with her. PPS
You are so great about getting the updates out. Thanks. I love the part about, “Oh shit! I thought this was my bathroom.” Haha LMFO!!
oh boy!! can’t wait for bette to wake up and wonder what the hell happened last night!!!
omg is bette gonna freak in the morning? great story. i’m loving it. pps
i thought bette would reveal more to tina while drunk…i guess we have to wait until they will talk again
Ah a bit of calm during a stormy night… I’m sure there is more drama brewing on the high seas. I think it will be a while before Bette and Tina have each other for the midnight buffet!
Fabulous update Flair! Your story moves at a perfect pace and you pack a lot of activity in your chapters, so when you finish reading one you feel like you really had an update. Keep it up, I’m loving this!
oh Gosh, I don’t like this idea of Helena being Bette boss, nooooo way please fix that. I hope Tina won’t date Helena. I really don’t like this Helena. but(smiling)what a funny group lol. Bette will kill them in the morning for getting her drunk lol. PPVS
Ooooh…just had another thought…ships are pretty high and there would have been other decks below…where do you think Bette’s vomit landed?
I’ll tell you what, no one can out drink the rubber ducky. No one I tell you. I can’t wait until they wake up.
Too bad Bette wasn´t a playful drunk or at least talkative. Maybe the famed Porter control needed a few more shots. Great chapter -loking forward to the awakening and Arons headache – you just know he´ll bitch about that.
Great update. Read this in the office and trued very hard not to laugh out loud with the antics of Aaron & Alice! Love cute drunk Bette. Can’t wait to see what happens when she wakes up and see Tina there :) Thank you :)
HAHAHAHA Aaron picked the straight boy! XD Awwww cute drunk Bette. But that was sad just before she passed out. Hopefully Bette’s technicolor yawn went completely into the water and didn’t splat on any guests below. Yuck. lol And someone please bitchslap Alice and tell her to get over it.
ahhhhh finally! I realise Bette is totally wasted, but I think the door’s opened a little now. Ok, now that you’ve got them together, me need daily fix now…please, please! :)
I see Bette’s dealing very maturely with Tina’s dating Helena… If Bette deals any better with it, we just might see her punch Helena in the nose, or challenge her to a duel, or something. I just worry that Alice is going to find out about Bette’s feelings for Tina (although, Bette’s mood swings will probably make everything patently obvious to everyone… except Tina), then the *real* fun will start. Great update, flair, thank you! pps pps pps
Hmmm… check your PMS ;) And maybe I’ll get to hear that famous voice sing to me as well as read to me… I loved this update. THANK YOU FINALLY FOR A FLASHDANCE REFERENCE!!! That was the WORST missed opportunity on the actual show in my opinion. How do you do a dancing scene with Jennifer Beals and NOT put her in a cut-out sweatshirt? HELLO! Anyway… loved the reference here. So Bette’s an adorable drunk… what kind of a drunk are you? Or maybe I should ask your date after the wedding ;) I loved the ‘Use the key Tee’ that was just adorable. Whenever I read an update to this story I can’t stop smiling from the start of the first sentence. I love walking around in your world with you… well.. your fictional world anyway. That will do… for now ;)
The kiss on the forehead with not have to do……… why are you being sooooo cruel, Flairforthedramatic. OH!!!!!! it’s in your name. LOL I hope that B&T get to talk about this soon. Also, I hope Helena doesn’t get too piss if and when she finds out that Tina was seeing her just so Helena would lay off Bette. How’s Bette’s head going to feel like in the morning???? I’d hate to be there. Awesome update. Please continue. Oh, I’m glad you’re not the one getting married. Hearts amending.
Hey Flair! i looovvveeee how this story is coming along, makes it more believable that bette would hold her cards close to her chest and not blurt out her feelings…even when a lil squiffy!! oh and ps – you were right at the beginning, any bette is a sexy bette…my mistake!! pps