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    All I Want the finale

    Story written on May 16, 2009 by bcoleman.
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    The end has come

    Three years later

    Alice: Move she’s going to blow.

    Bette: Alice can you grow up for once.

    The girls raced to the nurse at the counter.

    Bette: Hi I need a wheelchair. She is in labor.

    Nurse: Name of parents.

    Alice: What do her parents have to do with this?

    Nurse: Not her parents, the parents of the child about to be delivered.

    Bette: Shane McCutcheon and Carmen Morales.

    Carmen came racing towards Bette.

    Carmen: Did you sign in yet?

    Bette: We are getting to it.

    Alice: Is she about to explode yet?

    Bette hit Alice on the arm.

    Bette: You know she is already sensitive so stop it.

    Nurse: Everything seems to be in order. Where is Ms. McCutcheon?

    As if on cue Shane came waddling in with Lily holding one hand and Shay the other. Mercedes was in back of them trying to soothe a crying Shanna.

    Carmen: Oh mi amor. What is the problem?

    Shanna: Momma in pain.

    Carmen rubbed her daughter’s back.

    Carmen: Mommy will be ok, and soon you’ll have your little brother ok.

    Shane moaned in pain and Lily rubbed her head.

    Lily: It’s ok sweetie it’ll pass.

    Shane bit her lip and nodded. She was trying to put on a brave front.

    Nurse: If you’re ready. We can head back.

    Carmen waved goodbye to everybody and went to go attend to Shane with Alice in tow.

    Flashback: One year earlier

    Doctor: Ms. Morales I am sorry but your delivery with Shanna seemed to have caused some problems.

    Carmen: What kind of problems?

    Doctor: Well your reproduction system seems to be under a lot of stress, and that is way the past two fetuses haven’t taken.

    Carmen: What about the implantation? Did it take this time? I mean I did all of the stuff you told me to do and the morning sickness has gone away and everything.

    The doctor gave Carmen a sympathetic look.

    Doctor: That is because the fetus has detached itself from your uterian wall.

    Carmen: Meaning what? This time was supposed to be different.

    Doctor: The fetus has stopped thriving. I am so sorry Ms. Morales.

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    1. Aww, your first born is all grown up and ready to leave the nest… haha! You should be proud. And what a departing surprise, shane pregnant. that’s… different. Nothing wrong with it though, just can’t picture it. but it was very sweet of her to do that for carmen. and i’m happy you made carmen be the one proposing, never got why it always seems like shane is the one “supposed” to ask. Bye bye story! it was nice reading you! *waves*. ps, a new chapter of ‘milagros’, yay! (sorry, i’m partial to the little munchkin)

    3. Hey bcoleman, that was a great tale. I’m still trying to work my mind around the concept of a pregnant Shane. Can’t do it yet. But I can see how she loves Carmen and her family so much that she would want to do it. I love the family that Shane and Carmen created with both grandmothers, Mercedes and Lily, being involved and with Shay being sufficiently secure that he can try to be the disinterested teenager, hanging out with friends, but loves his family enough to recognise a big event and want to participate. Thanks for writing.

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