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A TiBette Love Story: Sun, Moon and Stars (13)
The forty minute ride was over almost as fast as it began. Tina was so lost in their conversation that she had not noticed they finally arrived at their destination and Bette pulled the car into a parking space.
Bette gathered her purse and walked over to open the passenger door for Tina with an extended hand to help her out of the car.
Tina slowly exited the car with an awestruck expression.
“So, here we are…Cloud Nine.” Bette smiled.
Tina is unable to speak and only managed to let out a gasp.
“Unbelievable!” Tina’s eyes could not believe what she saw.
At the front of Newport Beach Marina’s slip was Cloud Nine…a one hundred foot luxury yacht with a small crew on deck awaiting their arrival.
“Good evening, Miss Porter and Miss Kennard.” A uniformed Captain greeted each woman with a handshake as they boarded. “I’m Captain Ferrero. On behalf of Cloud Nine’s owner, Mr. Edward Schuler, the crew and I welcome you aboard.”
Bette and Tina each took turns shaking the Captain’s hand and thanked him.
“On tonight’s cruise, you will have our fine crew tending to your every need.” The captain quickly introduced a group including his deckhands, officers, stewards and head chef.”
The captain glanced at his watch and advised, “We’ll be departing in a few minutes. Please enjoy hors d’oeuvres and drinks on the top deck,” the captained gestured toward stairs, “as well as the view while the sun prepares to set over the Pacific Ocean.”
“Thank you again,” Bette replied with a smile.
Tina and Bette made their way to Cloud Nine’s upper deck. Tina went up the stairs first and admired the European styled ship. It was a sleek, contemporary yacht with gorgeous woodwork and intricate design.
Bette was right behind her and took the time to admire the view of Tina. The way her black dress clung to her curves…the way she swayed her hips as she moved…the way her hazel eyes lit up and smile beamed in excitement…it seemed all her actions were enough to drive Bette insane. Whenever a slight breeze blew the blonde’s hair, Bette was so tempted to brush it out of her face, as Tina’s fingers did.
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(34 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
I’m loving it! =]
Actually, I would like to add two more comments… I really thought I wouldn’t be at all surprised by “Cloud Nine” and you DID surprise me! And, I’m still dying to read their first kiss!It is really good to come home after a whole day working and studying and then read a chapter well written like yours! Thank you! =]
well i like your writer’s block…great chapter…still on the hook for more;)
”If only you knew what I wanted right now…” – another chapter? ;-) Thanks LuvT!
And the dance begins. So much fun.
What a first date…cloud nine, indeed! Love your story and the way you write such sexy, flirty dialogue. Look forward to every chapter.
I know what *I* want. What a chapter – again, the tension is so thick between these two. Love, love, love it.
great story! I’m loving all the building up! PPS
Luv, you have done it again. AWESOME date.I am so hooked. Keep going please.
I LOVE IT!!!
I know what I want – that mean apple pie :)-so how about it roomie – a small treat before my rent sets in :D Love this story, the flirting the buildup – I actualy like everything about this story! Thank you Luv. Love it love it :)
yup…if bette only knew…way to leave us hanging, girl! i love the banter between the two. it’s so cute…still going slow and smooth, huh…maybe a little more action would be interesting…ahem ahem… :) love it, girl!
Wow, Bette really thought of a great date. If I were Tina I would be very pleased and wanting more, more, more. PPS ;)
thanks for the ring side seat… love it… please continue
Awww…I love this story!
VERY NICE SCENARIO..AND THE ‘I want what u want’ was very sexy!!! This has me enthralled. Thx for shout out.
well you did take the flirting up a notch! This is quite an impressive first date! Love it! Thanks for posting!
That was very romantic and love the way Bette have for their first date!