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    My Captor- Chapter 19

    Story written on July 5, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    Chocolate Eclair

    Carmen: Jenny, what are you doing?

    Jenny: Giving my best friend a hug.

    Carmen turned around to face her.

    Jenny: You’ve been down, I just wanted to make you happier.

    Carmen: Dont worry about me. I’m fine.

    Jenny: You’re not.

    Jenny cupped Carmen’s cheek.

    Jenny: You can’t hid from me. You’re hurt.

    Shane was on her feet staring up at the balcony. Carmen looked away from Jenny.

    Jenny: Carmen, forget her. I’ll make all the pain go away.

    The offer sounded so good. Shane had crashed into her life and she had fallen head over heels for the mysterious girl. Jenny moved closer, tilting her head up towards Carmen and

    then placing a soft kiss on Carmen’s lips. Carmen didn’t feel right. It didn’t feel like it did with Shane. Her heart was supposed to race, but it wasn’t. She was supposed to have

    fireworks blow up in her mind. Carmen was pulling away, but Jenny insisted and backed Carmen up to the railing. Shane watched from below felt a stab in her heart. Someone had

    taken the floor out from under her and punched her in the stomach. She blinked not believing her eyes. She didn’t wait to watch what happened next and ran towards the woodier

    parts of the massive estate. Carmen pushed away from Jenny.

    Carmen: Get off. We’re not like that anymore.

    Jenny who had made her point backed off with a smirk.

    Jenny: You’ll come to me someday. I’ll wait for you.

    Carmen stayed far away from Jenny. Dinner came around, Carmen sat there in her light blue dress waiting for Shane to come to dinner.

    Butler: Miss, I can’t find Shane. Should I give Mr. Cezar a call?

    Carmen: No, it’s okay. She’ll be back later.

    She didn’t know that though. She wasn’t sure of herself anymore. The chef brought in her dinner for the night. She poked at it but didn’t eat much.

    Carmen’s thought: Is she really angry about this afternoon? Could she be with Cherie Jaffie? Or was she under the balcony?

    Jenny who sat across from her was trying to make conversation with her, but she was too occupied with thinking. The sun was going down in the mountain. Shane stopped in a clearing

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    4. Oh, those two! They won’t admit they were jealous and angry, and they won’t admit they want to make up already (foolish pride!), but they sure act like it. They’re so cute together. I especially liked the part where Shane secretly wanted to catch Carmen’s attention with her cooking. So cute. They need to talk about what’s going on, though.

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