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Mismatches – The absence
The house was quiet.
Very quiet.
A muteness that occupied space and time and invade her senses recently awoken. Yet, the thoughts, there, in turmoil bombing her peaceful morning.
Yes…it feels like that…
She could only thing about the desolation of war. A bombard. First t the surprise and panic. Then the noise of absolute indefectible silence.
However, she was not at war. She was at her house. At the comfort of her bed and there was no eminent possibility of a missile attack.
Only, the palpable sound of silence.
If the brunette really concentrated, she could hear voices, the neighbors reform, the sound of the motor of a car.
Far.
Distant.
But, that, if the mocha skinned woman was really interested in paying attention.
But she wasn’t and she ignored it.
All the curled haired woman could reach was yet, silence. And it hammered the brunette’s head and annoyed her ears.
Quietude.
Because, they weren’t there anymore. And with them leaved all the sounds.
Giggling, laughs and cries. The noun mother flying in the space, enchantments, dialogues. Movements of a child.
Yes, she missed her daughter.
However, this Sunday morning, still in bed, eyes closed, lingering from the night she had slept, she missed her.
She missed Tina.
And there was she: surrounded by memories, yet, silent emptiness. No sounds. Of any kind.
No more plates, kettle, cutlery, cups. The objects: taken and devolved to the cupboard or shocked against each other. Because that’s the way she is. She was so careful with everything that surrounded the brunette, but she was kind of messy around the kitchen.
And after that morning movements, came the smell. The smell of recently made coffee. Toasts, milk, her voice murmuring something.
It took Bette time to understand that those were sounds of life and fragrances that perfumed her days.
And there was also the steps, coming in and going out.
There was the family lunch. It always seamed to Bette that her lover exceeded all the movements when she was in the kitchen. And all those tiny actions had her name. The wine being opened. The experience with new recipes. The smell of pot and the voice inside old songs they’ve heard together so many times, but also songs that, even living with the blonde for eleven years, the curled haired woman never heard before.
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(20 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
you’ll take pleasure in knowing you have rendered me speechless…and taken my breath away…..again :)
My Most Beautiful Poetess… you have taken mere and simple words and have completely evolved them into pure emotions… your poetics and your rendering of colors and shapes and emotions… the ability to give inanimate objects and simple things an emotional context… you are pure magic my love pure and beautiful magic… I love you Braz, Hugs and Kisses, JC
Oh Braz once again you outdid yourself with the words that made the emotions come out and were rocked to the core of pain, past,present and what was to come for Bette. As always you are as my dear Cuz JC says, you are pure magic!
Hi, dearest and sweet Braz! *waving* If there is someone who knows how to describe the taste of loneliness and the sound of absence (silence) is you, dearest friend. You truly know how to evoke an image and make us feel as if we were actually smelling her perfume or the surroundings. Indeed you are our fantastic poetess in the family. Thanks, sweetie, for bringing us this story which enhance our senses. PPS Big hugs & tender kisses on both your cheeks. Much love, Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the loving JC, Eunichick, ZLFAN, T_Daze, Melrose231, and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
That was emotional sad!
Your writing is one of the deeper and symbolic forms on this site. The words you blend and weave together to form each chapter is a testament to your talent. Thanks so much my dear sweet Braz.