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    My Savior- Chapter 13 (includes alternate hypothetical ending)

    Story written on July 27, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    Life Again

    *WARNING* THIS IS NOT THE REAL ENDING JUST A SIDE STORY!

    Alternate Hypothetical Ending

     

    Shane placed the pen down. And quietly slipped out the door. She went back to L.A. that night. Carmen felt around in bed. The spot where Shane had been was cold. The sun was already high up in the morning sky.

     

    Carmen: Shane?

     

    She got out of bed putting on a large t-shirt and walked into the kitchen. She picked up the letter Shane had left her.

     

    Carmen, the love of my life,

     

    When you read this, I’ll be very far away. I know I made you promise, but I can’t let you fall in love with a dying person. Don’t try and come find me. It’s not worth it. I always loved you. Just remember that. I’ll be watching over you. If there is a next life, I want to be yours once more.

     

    Love,

    Shane.

     

    Tears rolled down her cheeks. Jenny had received a call from Shane that morning and she rushed over to the cottage to find Carmen hunched over on the floor bawling.

     

    Jenny: Carmen!

     

    Carmen: Jenny! She’s gone. Please find her for me. Please. I beg you. Please. I need her. She needs me! I need to find her. Jenny please help me. Please.

     

    Jenny wrapped her arms around Carmen who was shaking.

     

    Shane’s call.

     

    Shane: Jenny?

     

    Jenny: Hey, having a fun time with Carmen?

     

    Shane: Jenny, I’m leaving. I don’t have much time. Please come and stay with Carmen. I know you love her.

     

    Jenny: Shane, what are you talking about? She loves you.

     

    Shane: I know, that’s why I need to go.

     

    Jenny: You can get better Shane.

     

    Shane: I can feel it Jenny, the coldness getting to me. Please promise me you’ll take care of Carmen.

     

    Jenny: I’m not going to. You have to do it yourself.

     

    Shane smiled.

     

    Shane: I’m sorry Jenny always asking you for help. This will be the last time. Please help me.

     

    Jenny: Shane…

     

    Shane: Make her happy for me.

     

    Jenny cried too. Shane had been her love nemesis, but she was respectable. Jenny didn’t mind losing Carmen to Shane. She deserved her. Carmen begged Jenny but she didn’t have any idea where Shane was either.

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    1. Hey Let’s face it! we are all here for the fantasy – well I am anywayz. I’m with garanger – I want the happy ending I want them TOGETHER. You had my heart racing there for a while but I am glad there are more chapters to go cause I love them! Post soon.. Looking forward to it – thanks for the great story, your creativity it is much appreciated :-)

    3. “Helena: You know, I’ve stood around for 12 hours making sure I’ve put in a liver correctly for you, but I think I accidentally took out your brain.”LMAO at that line! You know the only ending I want is for Carm and Shane to be together always, and grow old, TOGETHER.Great story.

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