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Letting It Lie (3)
Slowly and gently, Bette brushed the hair away from Tina’s eyes. "This is gonna be fun, isn’t it?" The very deep intensity of their feelings being summarized in such an understated way made Tina smile.
"Yeah," she said quietly, trying to push all of her emotions out of her mind to fully enjoy what she could tell would be one of the most satisfying nights of her life. Bette’s eyes gave that all away.
"So, what – are you two ladies gonna kiss first?" he asked, walking over and stepping behind Tina to kiss her neck. That was an awkward moment if there ever was one. Tina didn’t know what to do – she couldn’t push her own husband away for the small show of affection, but she could see Bette staring daggers into him. "… Tina …. maybe you could take Bette’s shirt off," he continued, obviously turned on.
Bette swallowed hard. She couldn’t handle watching that. Her anger was boiling, but she knew it was important not to show just how protective she was over the woman she’d loved all this time. "Rick?"
"Yeah?" he asked with a silly grin, looking at Bette over Tina’s shoulder.
"I think it would be best if … you let things play out, okay?" she asked politely, taking Tina’s hands in hers. She had always loved standing behind Tina like that – it was a very possessive gesture in her mind – and now she was watching somebody else do it. She couldn’t handle it.
"Sure, sure," he smiled excitedly, taking a step back as Bette turned Tina so she could hold her from behind instead. Then with a very talented tongue that was all too familiar to Tina, she kissed along the vulnerable spots of her neck.
Tina didn’t know how much more of this she could take. It had only been a number of minutes since Bette had stepped in the door, and yet the foreplay was killing her. She had worried earlier about moaning and letting her desire be known, not wanting to worry her husband, but here – in this moment – she was lost in the sensation of Bette’s tongue. Not a logical thought in her mind, just ‘take me’ resonating over and over.
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(46 votes, average: 4.07 out of 5)
Wow, even the asshat could sense the singularity. He’s not really a bad man, just so self absorbed as utterly insensitive unless something extraordinary happens. But still, Tina, you married this guy? WTF?
I really like this story. It’c got some interesting complexity to it. I hope that you post again soon. Thank you!
talaula… loved rick the prick.. too funny…Well lets hope they when they finish… they both get dressed and so goodbye to rick the prick…aka.. an ass… lets hope they finish real soon and leave…pps
So delicious and powerful. Hard to compete w/first and true love, Rick, baby.
wow!!!!!!! so sad and yet…
so sad about their sick son…but they need this moment to share in the pain and memories together. and oh yeah Rick “you can’t touch this” LOL
It is different all right. Awesome update. It’s so sad as well but I hope this comes about their reunion. Thank you again.
I’m with FTM, I didn’t like him using “Babe or T,” those are Bettes’ loving gestures to Tina, not his. Bastard. Now I think he realizes what he has done and hopefully, he will be the loser in this little party. Hopefully Tina will leave him and I sincerely hope she will go back to Bette but that may not be an option now. Who knows. What did Tina mean when shesaid, “Bette, I can’t go back,” did she mean that she could not go back to Bette or mean that she could not revisit the loss of the child? They still love each other and where there is love there is always hope. I really didn’t want him to see them make love, this is not sex, this is absolute enduring love, and Rick, there is no way you can equal this with Tina, no way at all. Bette is the only one. Thanks for posting. PPVS
I think Rick is starting to see their connection. What did Tina mean when she said she can’t go back? I am really enjoying this story! PPS
Sorry Prick, but your services will not be required at this moment or ever. I’m still worried about afterward, hopefully B&T walk out the and ride off into the sunset. Thanks for the post.
This is so beautiful – and the pain just seeps off the pages. Great job! PPS!
This is so beautiful. I just wish Rick would scram!
really hot n really sweet…i hope Rick gets out now!!… is a very intimate momment, they are making love not having sex!!very hot!!.. keep it up!
yeah idiot,this is call love moron!