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Why am I so confused?
David walks into our bedroom after his shower wearing only towel. He sees me lying in bed and says "lets do it". "I have a terrible headache" I say "can you go with out it for one day"? "come one" he says "it will get rid of your headache". So i let him have his way with me as usual and now he is rolled over snoring…..but….I still have my headache only now I am wide awake and cannort sleep. I really hate this feeling.
I have been at work for 3 hours now and haven’t had one single customer. Guess it could have something to do with the rain that’s pouring outside cause who wants to get their hair done only to have it fall into a mess minutes after you leave the hair salon? My co-worker and best friend Becky has been hounding me all day with questions. "Come on Mary why are you still with David you KNOW you 2 really don’t belong together?" "Yes I know you are right Becky but I have 2 kids to think about They need both their parents". "Besides we are still paying the mortgage on our house" Becky gives me that look she always does as she replies "You KNOW those are just excuses?" "Becky I really don’t wanna talk about this right now."
Becky: Ok Mary I will promise to stop bugging you the rest of the day IF you come out for a drink with me on Friday??
Mary: I do believe that sounds like a bribe?
Becky: Maybe so but….is it so bad to wanna see your best friend with a smile and enjoying herself for a change?
Mary: I guess not ok I will go out for ONE drink only ok? If you actually stop harrassing me for the rest of the day.
"I eye captain" Becky says as she salutes.
Mary: Oh quit already you can be so goofy
Becky: True BUT I did make you laugh
Mary: Yes Becky you always know how to get a chuckle out of me
and the rest of the day went by with joking and laughing enjoying the otherwise boring day.
 
As I was driving Home I decided to stop and pick up a new box of cereal seeing how my kids finished up every last morsel that we had at home. I quickly went to the cereal aisle and reached for the box when suddenly I felt a jolt shoot through my hand and up my arm as I saw someone else’s hand accidentally bump into mine as they reached for the same item (static electricity that’s ALL it is). I looked up and my heart skipped a beat as I seen the most gorgeous eyes I have ever seen in my life. Then the soft voice that I heard shook me out of my trance. "sorry" they said and grabbed a different box turned and walked away. I found myself staring at the back of this shapely figure then I shook my head in disbelief wait…wait…. that is a woman… I am straight… I am married…I am just tired that is all I need to go home and go to sleep.
should I continue?
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you just got the best advise from 2 of the best on this site,,, Seahurst and Chicki,,, and now if i can add my 2 cents… keep writing… no one here is a pro… and i have a feeling… Bette or Tina middle name is Mary… so lets see where you lead us… pps
Bette? Tina? Alice, Shane or Dana? “L Word Fan Fiction”
Why of course, please continue. You’ve already captured our interest. Thanks for posting.
I would definitely encourage you to continue writing, however remember that this is an L Word fan fiction site, and so far you have written three chapters without mentioning one name from the show. That’s fine if you’re easing us into the story, but you might want to give us some clue in the author’s notes to let us know that you are writing about The L Word. Thanks! And I always say, if it makes you happy, keep on writing!!
You should certainly continue writing. I enjoy the slow build and the curiosity as to just who this story is really about. The more you write, the more comfortable you may become with your style and not worrying if others want you to continue or not. As long as there are writers, there are always readers. Set your own pace and develop your story as you see fit. No pressure here, just take your time. Oh, and PLEASE don’t even consider the “low” star ratings – there is no boundary when it comes to some just misusing its intended purpose.
Interesting start. Please continue, I’m curious as to where this may lead?
it would be interesting to know what is up next?
Please continue. Very initeresting and different.