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You Found Me Chap. 81
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They have gotten all their gift’s, With Tina’s help Bette had gotten her family’s presents. and has gotten all wrapped at the mall. Tina likes to wrap her own. Most of Bette’s other gifts are at home cause she had ordered clothes for most of her present mostly because she had agreed to spending a certain amount of money, from the manufacturer of the blouse she had bought Tina. Which in one way made shopping ideas easy. But need to be wrapped. They stop and have dinner before going home, asking Kit to join them, Cause Bette hasn’t spent much time with her lately.
Hey baby girl…giving Bette a hug a kiss on the cheek. and the same for Tina before sitting.
How’s my two favorite women doing?
Tina smiles cause she just loves Kit, cause she makes her feel so good, and watches out for
Bette and now herself. Bette had told her how Kit made sure they were together at the cabin.
Were Good. Arn’t we sweetie? ….Bette says as she rubs the top of Tina’s thigh, and smiles at her.
Tina can’t help but grin big and her face flushes red. …Yea were Good.
Kit is amused at the enter action they have with each other. Bette has changed so much in this short time of being with Tina. And not being around her every day seem surreal sitting here watching it unfold in front of her.
I see… Kit says and they all laugh… Well I am so glad it has worked out so well between the two of you, cause I have never seem my sister so happy…. Bette blushes this time.
I’m am, very much.
And So am I…Tina states
So Bette tells me all has worked out with your folks.
Yes, It was rocky at first, but my dad came around.
Yea, after Daddy’s little girl had a talk with him. Bette says
Well I had to get a little blunt in my conversation with him. and I think it finally sunk in how much I love your sister, she says as she looks into Bette’s eye’s which sends shivers down Bette’s back. Bette thinks My God how she can make me feel with just one look.
Well that is obvious kit says as she looks at the two googly eyeing each other. Do you to need to leave the table?
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BnT, If you lose one reader, I think you will survive with the other hundreds of us who enjoy the HOT, LOVING SEX and spontaneity that makes this story different from the others. All writers express themselves differently, that is why there are so many of you entertaining so many of the different readers. I have truly enjoyed your story as has many of your returning readers. I dont think your NC-17’s are smut. Love is expressed in many different ways. Dont want to get into a political debate bout this. We are all free to express ourselves without physically hurting someone. Write what you feel and leave the free-reading public to decide for themselves.
I want to comment before I read this chapter. You don’t have to defend what you write. Write for yourself. I for one have really been enjoying this story. I believe a person’s best writing is when they are write were they are in their heads verses trying to force something into being. I’m sure when our hormones are in higher gear we can write some of the best NC-17 around. Keep writing from your heart. It’s all good. And I will keep on reading. Now let me read this new addition to your story. Thanks for posting. PS those who don’t want to read an NC-17 have the option of skipping that chapter.
Alice (shaking my head) The girl needs to get a clue and get lost. She’s good for comic relief, but she needs to know when to go home. Or as the saying goes. “Ya don’t got to go home but ya gotta go.”
I don’t comment often, but I had to say that you should just write what you feel. We readers have the option of skipping something if we don’t like it. You and all the other writers out there, give those of us who are here for our reading pleasure a gift on a daily basis. I for one appreciate that. So just keep writing what feels right to you!
I love this story!!!! You should always write what you want. I will be here to read just like many others. Great Chapter!!!! Thank you PPS
as you said you rate every chapter and if they don’t want to read what they call “smut” and the rest of us call adult love them maybe they shouldn’t read it and go back to their nunery. why is there always one that cause trouble. i for one haven’t read any “smut” just a healthy sex life between two people that love each other. please don’t let one person upset you and cause the rest of us to suffer to. told you i was shy and your story is one of 2 i comment on. there’s way to much bad shit in our world and if you take our love for b & t away you might make who ever complained happy but as you can see by the other comments you will make a lot others sad. i for one don’t read just for the love i read because as i told you before you write a great story and i think your a great writer pisses me off when one has to rock the boat and you rate the chapters so let whoever whined to not read it and to keep their nasty comment to themselves. need to stop now cuz i feel the curse words wanting to come out and if they think your love is “smut” they should hear the nasty words that want to come out of my mouth. and as i am a lady won’t say them but if they would like to e mail me i will share them with them. sorry i rambled
I agree with what everyone else has said,your writing is great ans i really enjoy it!!! Don’t let one person opoin bother you!It’s good to see all the loving these two are getting instead of drama all the time like in alot of other ff!Great chapter and alice will always be alice-lol!
Alice needs to get laid. B&T together, yeahhhhhhhhhhhh.
I also agree with what every one else has said.I love your story,ESPECIALY the NC 17 parts.The “smut” comments are bullshit.Thanks for another great chapter.
Well BnT I agree with everything that was said above. You have to ultimately write what makes YOU happy. Your story is filled with wit and love…two of my favorite subjects. I cannot believe someone would use the term “smut” to describe your NC-17 scenes. Your Tina and Bette have a healthy sexual relationship that makes me green with envy. Rock on BnT!
You know I don’t comment much these days but still an avid reader. There are so many writers & styles that there is something for every one. Ok, your sex scenes can be a little raw, hot, but real honest to goodness sex is not always beautiful soft lighting or pretty words, but wonderful to be part of ;) (Ok, hope I haven’t left myself in the firing line with that but you know what I mean). So fellow reader, if it offends, read someone else, there are so many to choose from who will be more gentle with you. Please take no offense as none meant. Now, as for you BnT, keep on posting!
I had to come out and comment on what I read in your authors notes. I’ve been a silent reading fan since you first posted and I have to say that your sex scenes ARE NOT SMUTTY. In fact I think you’re doing a great job with this story. I can see that you’re having fun with them and I love that in story writing. People sometimes forget that we don’t get paid to do this. In fact some of us are subscribed members of this site. In a way we’re paying to have our stories told, read stories or whatever reason they’ve subscribed to the site. Although people are entitled to their opinion (because opinions are like asshholes, everyone has one), it’s wrong when the person with the opinion tries to get you to conform to it. I loved that you called them out with a big “fuck you” maybe this will start a new topic in the discussion forum. I think I’ll do that, but for now keep up the good work. It’s so awesome that you post every day with kids and a snow storm. Neither rain, children or snow will keep you from posting, that’s dedication I wish I could do that. I think my comment is just as long as this post LOL, thank you.
BnT, I love your stories and I don’t think you should worry about those few readers. I absolutely love your NC-17s and I think you do a wonderful job at writing them and keeping it interesting!! Please don’t stop you stories. I love this connection between Bette and Tina and I think you should tell your story regardless of what others may say. Great story! You are a great writer!!! :)
One lost reader compared to hundreds who are loving it! I think you will survive, honey! I think it’s realistic that they are having lots of sex. You can’t get enough of each other when you first get together. I don’t think your past NC-17s have been smut. Variety is the spice of life! Keep on writing cause I certainly will keep on reading! Those who don’t like it can skip over the story and read something else! PPS
As a writer who has been part of this site for over 5 years, and has written a lot of \\\\\\\”controversial\\\\\\\” material, I will say first and foremost that you WRITE FOR YOU. Never ever abandon a direction or storyline because of anyone else but your own decision to do so. I took a hell of a beating when I wrote the September 11th story – so much so, that there were some (I nailed who they would be beforehand too and shared with those close to me who they could expect to see leaving nastiness) that indeed decided to go beyond sharing a personal opinion about the storyline and instead used it as a venue to attack me personally. Go figure! But for the \\\\\\\”handful\\\\\\\” of people who\’s backlash I anticipated (though I have to admit, I was even surprised that they would go as low as to start a thread on the message board), I had fifty times more that supported it and saw through the bullsh*t. That story prompted personal emails from people who were PERSONALLY touched by 911 and not just touched because they were a citizen of the country that was attacked, but because they lost a family member, or spouse. If someone THAT close to the situation can applaud the integrity, creativity, and respect that I brought into that piece of writing, then the \\\\\\\”handful\\\\\\\” who used the story as a ill attempt to bully me just did NOT count and nor did they get their wish – that I stop writing. They didn\\\\\\\’t then, and they surely don\\\\\\\’t now. Unfortunately, there will be those who don\\\\\\\’t even know you in the least, who may have even read your stories, but decide to take an opinion of you SOLELY because of someone else feeding them distorted views. So, my advice to you is you write with the freedom of releasing creative images in your mind, and NEVER listen to readers who wish to manipulate your creativity, misuse the rating systems, challenge the pace of the story, or for any other reason that might prevent you from sharing what you do for your readers. Also, as good friends have often pointed out, when people continue to give you unnecessary attention, it is because you have something they want – – what it is, well that is different for each person. The worse thing you can do is stop posting stories because someone said something negative. It ends up creating a broken relationship with your readers, and you are looked upon as someone who cannot be depended on to complete something you’ve set out to do. Let\\\\\\\’s face it, no one would want to buy a book only to find that the author never finished the story. I think as authors we all have an obligation to finish what we started, no matter how difficult things may get. It is one thing for a reader to offer true constructive criticism, and sometimes that is a good thing which we call all learn from. As a writer though, you can usually quickly filter out what is genuinely constructive in criticism or destructive – the difference usually being what is behind the motivation to point out the criticism. Wow….you brought me back to my days of the Long Winded Author Notes (another thing I was often ridiculed for! LMAOOOO). Still, it didn\\\\\\\’t change my style then, and it won\\\\\\\’t now – neither should yours. ** hugs **
Yup! Chicki is right…you do what isthe best for “YOUR STORY!”…If otherscan’t deal with it…THEN…..DON’T READ!!…As simple as that!…[hey loved your NC17 a lot heheheheh..SO HOT!]
Thank you for posting promptly and so dedicatedly. This is one of stories I watch for every post, please don’t stop. I may not comment on every chapter; know that I enjoy the gaiety of the storyline and your NC-17 are a treat. gets me hot, bothered and squirming whilst reading, I think someone desperately need to get laid, think so too? :D
hey….i just wanted to say to u that i really enjoy the nc-17 stories, i dont think they are kinky or something weird, they are just the representation of 2 women in love that enjoy eah toher, so please dont stop or reduce the nc.17 stories, each one is free to read what they want and the ones that dont like that kind od stories then they should just stop and let us enjoy them… ppvs…thaks
Who cares what one reader thinks when the other 9999999 of us love it? Seriously, this is brilliant and we will tell you if your NC17s ever become too much, although that is unlikely, everyone enjoys a well written NC17! =)) Alice is ridiculous as always, so glad they are moving in together, can’t wait for Christmas to see how long they last haha, thanks and PPVS! =))
Well, now that we have settled that (You know, the thing about a writer’s right to write what the heck they want to write. I mean it’s hard enough living inside your own brain let alone someone else’s) on with the story. Danger, danger, Alice is in the house. Hide all nude pictures LOL. PPS:o).
Write what you want and who ever doesn’t want to read just shouldn’t read it then. You write for yourself. Great update. I am liking all your update NC-17 or otherwise. :) THank you.
Hey, me again! I have just read Chicki’s comment. This lady knows what she is talking about! I can say I was there with the story she quotes, as with all her other stories. So, to thine own self be true. For the one that is causing this “problem” there are hundreds who love this story. Keep on posting!!!!
Thats great and Alice is funny!
For me obscenity is a terrorist group to take people’s lives in the name of God. .
obscenity, is a pedophile to take advantage of a inoscente child.
obscenity, is to know that in some countries women are tradadas with garbage.
obscenity, is to know that even with a world of great scientific and technological advances, modern civilization has millions of people living in absolute poverty.
I could list what is infinitely obscenity, but I left my message.
BNT unfortunately exitem people who are completely ignorant in life,
unfortunately happens, if do not like NC 17 just ignore the page and ready now to mention it’s obscene! please disregard this person.
I love the way you describe B & T, discovering in love, giving
details of a two coexistence and are enjoying every moment together,
and enjoy the best possible way, having sex !! that’s all normal couple
faz.Eu am a worshiper of NC 17, and you write are very
funny, creative, sexy, and very hot !! heheheh.
BNT, never absorb this kind of deconstructive criticism.
Do not miss the magic that you have in this story.
All the stars.***************************************************:):):):)