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    Rhymes With Looker (3)

    Story written on April 1, 2010 by GrindRight.
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    Author Notes:

    Tina and Bette have some quality time, and a short discussion.

     

    She started breathing heavily as Bette’s eyes scanned over her. This would be difficult, not to do everything she wanted. She would have to make sure not to frighten the girl. Surely this was a strange enough experience on its own.

    "It seems to me that you’ve mistaken excitement for professional work."

    Tina frowned with confusion.

    "You obviously enjoy me telling you what to do … I bet you’d like for me to tell you to show yourself to me right now." Bette smiled, watching Tina’s reaction. She knew she was right. "… Even if it was something you knew you shouldn’t do."

    She suppressed a moan, holding her legs tightly together.

    "You’re not getting wet are you?" Bette teased gently, leaning in for a closer connection as she read Tina’s eyes. In a softer voice, "Would you tell me if you didn’t want this?"

    Tina nodded, excited with the way Bette was looking at her. She wanted to be naked, doing exactly what Bette pleased. Then she shook her head with how foreign that thought was in her mind. When had she started to enjoy this sort of thing?

    "Yes or no?" Bette teased, leaning back again to watch the beautiful girl thinking. She could almost see the gears working in Tina’s thought process.

    "Yes," Tina said quietly, her legs obviously trembling. "… I don’t ever do this …"

    "I wouldn’t have thought," Bette answered, leaning back with confidence in every turn and every smile. "Let me guess. One boyfriend … maybe a high school sweet heart, but you had to let him go. Something just wasn’t right."

    "Sort of …" Tina said, obviously confused.

    "I’m clean too if that’s what you were wondering," Bette chuckled, unable to keep it in when she was faced with Tina’s comedic expression. For once she had caught the blond off guard.

    "Uh … I …"

    "Go ahead. Spread them," Bette smirked, very much enjoying Tina’s lack of composure. "Yeah," she breathed lustfully, gazing straight between two smooth, parted legs. She tried to control her own breathing at the sight of the black material covering exactly what she had wanted to see. She swallowed hard. "Wider."

    Tina’s heart was racing, but she did as Bette asked. She was surprised at just how thrilling it was to obey such vulgar commands, and she smiled at yet another personal discovery. She didn’t even try to hide her heavy breathing, leaning back a bit to watch Bette enjoy the sight offered to her.

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    Comments

    1. Great chapter. Write write teasing so well. Shot you write well period. It’s so well rounded. It’s not all about sex. You can feel the vulnerability and thoughts, it’s a really good story. Looking forward to getting more into their heads.

    3. Gosh!!! Never again I am telling would I read NC-17 at work. I have to wait to come back home and write my comments lol. Waoooooooooo!!!that was HOT, and a premiere (Poetry during love)awesome. PPVS

    7. of all your sexy stories, this is by far the most erotic. the build up is extremely sexual and i love how your writing is so subtle this time, the build up and sexual tension is amazing.

    9. as you quoted Keats, I think I have to share with you something…your Bette reminds me of Caspar David Friedrich’s painting Wanderer über dem Nebelmeer…

    11. Hey GR, Just caught up with chapters 2 & 3. Wow wee!!!They were fabulous!I could feel the tension and attraction between Bette and Tina instantly.The game playing was fun as they flipped between mistress and servant.Tina has been experienced a wonderful introduction to the pleasures of woman to woman carnal actions.I hope that she can return the favor to Bette and get her to open up.Just so good.Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

    12. wow, i have no wordssssssthat was awsomeeeeei csnt wait for more, bette is allready in love with tina and tina is so fucking cute i just wanna kiss her.your amazing, the poets during sex was such a turn on

    13. Suddenly my Lit classes got a lot sexier!! O.O Amazing!! I can just imagine poetry being read to me in Bette’s oh-so-sexy-just-fuck-me-now voice.. THUD. You’re incredible at building up the tension, I can’t wait to see how Tina heals Bette’s broken heart!! =)) Thanks and PPVS!

    16. OMG!!!!!!!!! I’ve never heard poetry recited during a sex scene, that was freaking HOT!!!! I’m covering my eyes because the awesomeness is blinding (Kung Fu Panda). Great song suggestion found and added it. I see a piano sex scene in the works. Will our talented poet play a duet with Tina? chuckle. chuckle. I’m going to take another cold shower. Thanks grind.

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