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Rhymes With Looker (5)
With a glowing smile, Tina put her hair up in a clip and splashed water over her face. It had gotten pretty hot with Bette, and the room was beginning to feel like a sauna, or perhaps it was her own body temperature. Either way, she was in need of the fresh tingle, and took a moment before drying her face.
As she walked out of the ensuite bathroom, she paused. There on the bed laid an exhausted brunette, her eyes closed. Tina smiled and quietly walked over, sitting next to Bette in admiration of her beauty. "She sleeps," she whispered to herself, her eyes tracing over each delicate feature that seemed so active and powerful in the woman’s wakefulness. But here, in her sleep, Bette was soft and delicate. She didn’t want to wake her, but she wanted one kiss, and she couldn’t seem to stop herself from reaching down.
Bette awoke with the kiss, opening her eyes as Tina sat back up. "Hey."
With a smile, Bette answered her. "How long was I out for?"
"Only like ten minutes," Tina whispered, somehow not wanting to unsettle the brunette any further. "You should go back to sleep. I was just getting the bath ready."
"Mmm that sounds good," Bette smirked, closing her eyes again.
"You’re tired," Tina observed, running her fingers over the side of Bette’s cheek.
Bette caught the hand without having to open her eyes, keeping it still. It was her way of keeping the warmth where she wanted it.
Instead of retreating, Tina opened her hand and softly started massaging the tense neck. It didn’t take long until Bette’s grasp on her wrist loosened completely. "I’d rather the bath than sleep."
Tina could see that arguing would get her nowhere, so she pulled her hand away and got up.
"I didn’t mean it like that," Bette started, getting up onto her elbows. Memories of the fights she had with her ex flooded her mind, and she silently cursed herself for the slip. She often held a cold tone that many took offense to, and she hadn’t controlled it in the way she spoke to Tina.
On the contrary, Tina accepted Bette’s decision easily. She could feel Bette’s trouble in the way she spoke, and she somehow understood exactly how she meant it. She could hear Bette’s intentions through her tone, and Bette sounded tired more than anything else. "I didn’t take it in any specific way, Bette."
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(53 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
Great update! Tina is so very good for Bette! I love how T is peeling back the layers of Ms. P! PPS!
Woah, Bette still in the closet?? I hope she and Tina talk that one out, a lil confusing at the moment. Tina’s good for Bette, really good. I hope they see that, this story was really nice. Thanks so much and PPVS! =))
Well now. Bette’s been letting perceptions slide, huh? I have a feeling that won’t happen for long if she wants Tina to remain in her life, and I think she already does. Nice chapter, GR. cheers!
i love ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttina is soooo cute the cutest ever and bette, she madly in love
Hey GrindRight, Well that was another awesome chapter.Bette is finally admitting that she feels an intimate connection to Tina. This is not just about sex; be it rough and ready or soft and tender.It is about giving part of yourself to another; to opening yourself up to possibly be hurt: risking your innermost thoughts, fears and desire with someone else.Still being in the closet had done much damage as Tina was loud and proud about her sexuality in the hotel and suddenly realizing that while Bette is being completely honest with Tina, she isn’t to the rest of the world. This concerns Tina as what would stop Bette from denying her in public.I know that these gals can work it out.Bette has to tell TIna everything and have the courage to shout about her love for Tina from the hotel rooftop. This is an opportunity to find out who your real friends are. They will stick with you through thick and thin. Be there to offer a wise word or crack a joke or kick your butt or consol you.I want to be the fly on the wall as Tina and Bette work through this as there is much to gain from continuing this relationship for both gals; hot sex and fun games should ensue for many chapters.Thank you so much for sharing this unqiue view of the Bette and Tina universe with me.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
Great update. Love Pretty Women and liked how you changed it around. Thank you.
nice that she returned – ‘Tina had found her way back to the bed at some point, and was stretched out beside her, still immersed in peaceful sleep.’ – very interesting way to get these two together!
Holy cow, never though Bette still in closet lol. That was awesome and Tina are so cute, they need to talk and work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
What a revelation that Bette wasn’t out already. Good chapter
Shocked yes shocked is what I am, Bette has not outted herself..wow. I think Tina is good for the highly tense B Porter.