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    Something so right – Chapter 99

    Something so right

    Chapter 99

     

    Bette followed Tina out of the building and half way across the car park

    “Tina – Tina “

    Tina just kept walking as quickly as she could. Finally they reached their hire car and Tina unlocked the door, jumped inside and started the engine. Bette opened the door and got inside. Tina started revving the car even before Bette had closed the door. Bette was wondering what the hell to do – maybe just hang on until Tina calmed down enough for them to have a conversation. Tina put her foot down and negotiated her way out of the car park without having to slow down. It was only when she joined the main road that she came up to slow moving traffic. She hit the horn aggressively

    “Get a move on you ass-hole “

    “Tina – calm down “ Bette said

    “Get out of my way you fucking stupid bitch “

    “Tina “

    Tina was oblivious to Bette who was wondering what the hell to do. She wanted to reason with Tina but she knew that the blonde was utterly beyond reasoning with.

    “Tina – slow down – you are going to get us hurt “

    Bette shouted as Tina put her foot down and took a risk to get them away from the slow moving vehicles. Tina grunted something and put her foot down – in a few minutes they were at least back on a reasonably empty road.

    “Okay – – now slow down “ Bette urged

    Tina finally looked across at her and the speed went from 70 to 80 to 90.

    Bette loved speeding along the motorway in her nice, ultra modern, ultra safe top of the range car. This was not one such motor – normally Bette liked being chauffeured around by Tina who she thought was a fantastic driver – but this was Tina clouded by anger and very hurt. Yelling at Tina was getting her nowhere, reasoning with her was pointless – so Bette’s only other course of action was to close her eyes and hope to every deity that Tina calmed down before they encountered any more slow moving traffic. Bette didn’t close her eyes but she did her very best to keep her composure. She was going to have to be calm and controlled for both of them because Tina wasn’t capable of being either Bette had no idea where Tina was heading – the countryside was getting more rural and beautiful – they had not been this way before and Bette would have enjoyed the scenery if she hadn’t been driven at such speed by Tina in full maniac mode. Bette glanced at the speedometer which was gradually dropping down below 80, then 75 and finally Tina seemed to settle at 60.

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    1. gosh i realy realy hate neil right nowif he was my father i dont think i could have forgive him or want anything to do with himat least for a few years

    2. Hi Ally, It is awesome to read how Niall’s actions have completely destroyed his family. Tina and Finn are totally devastated by his ‘mid-life’ crisis affair. Could he just have bought a sports car. Particularly relevant given Tina’s recent drivign demonstration.Ot was a shame to find out that Finn and Niall had actually come to blows. Yes, I appreciated that much of this anger is due to the shock of a step-brother and young girlfriend.Bette has been a star as she has calmed Tina down and it able to lift Finn’s spirits a little.I do get the feeling that Niall and Sarah will be firing on all cylinders.This is tramatic and I hope that Tina and Bette come through it stronger and more in love and committed to one another than ever before.Ally, you rock.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

    3. Thanks for posting, I wouldnt want to be at the Kennard farm right now. Younger than Tina,well the older Kennard is really in a world of trouble. thanks

    4. Niall is in for a complete session of hell from Sarah as he should be. And to think that he thought he could gloss over the situation with Finn by trying to be chums and be casual about it. Shows just what he was thinking with. I guess he forgot they taught their children to be responsible. Glad that Finn decked him and if Sarah has an iron skillet, she should beat the hell out of him with it. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.

    5. WOW an angry Tina is somewhat scary? with that fast moving car?…Wow good thing they did not crash into something?..And Fin?..can’t blame the kid?…why be so casual?…is that how you tell YOUR SON THAT YOU’VE HAVE OTHER FAMILY THEN YOU HAD!..WHAT A JERK!!

    6. Niall certainly regressed when he hooked up with this woman. I can almost understand him getting involved with her over his head but running away?….that was really immature and irresponsible. He needs to act like a mature adult and take on the responsibility of running the farm again, in nothing else.

    7. Niall is some piece of work. To try to take a casual approach with Finn— STUPID and an insult to Finn’s intellegance. “I have a Sugar Mama, so I don’t have to slave away on the farm” is NOT going to play well with any of his childrenI hope that B, T & Finn can help pick up the pieces with Sarah. I also hope that they are there to support Sarah in court and fight for their percentage of their family legacy. Since Niall’s was willing to leave Sarah and his family high and dry with work on the farm, he should get less. How will Willow take it alone in school? PPS:o).

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