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FORCE of NATURE
Force of Nature
Chapter 2
Bad Timing and Good Student
“Mommy I had to go bad.” Tina heard the little girl say as she pulled the door closed behind her.
Bette chuckled. “I could tell.” She said smiling at her child. “However, you should not have run away from me like that.” She said as Madie finished pulling up her pants.
“I’m sorry mommy… but I couldn’t help it… it was coming… I had to go potty.” Madie reasoned and held her hands up to the sink for her mother to turn on the tap. “Do you think Ms. Stallings will be mad?” she asked.
Bette adjusted the water temperature then lifted her daughter up to reach the stream. “No, I don’t think Ms. Stallings will be mad, I’m sure she understands you had to go potty.”
Noting the quality of the hand towel she passed to her daughter, Bette paused to check more closely the detail of the blonde executive’s bathroom. Italian marble tile and vessel sink, beveled mirror, and full shower. The closet door had been left ajar and she could make out a burgundy trench coat hanging next to a dark blue suit, otherwise, nothing else seemed personalized; no toiletries out in the open or anything else that gave a clue about the blonde.
Growing in curiosity about the occupant of the executive office, the brunette took a moment to check her appearance in the mirror. Running her hands down the front of her dress, she paused to turn and glance at her profile. Satisfied, she looked down at her daughter, every bit a miniature of herself, and smiled. “Ready?”
“You look really pretty mommy.” Madie said with her big smile and expressive big brown eyes.
Bette’s heart leaped with her daughter’s smile. “Thank you sweetie.” She said leaning down and kissing Madie on the cheek.
With one last quick glance in the mirror, the brunette widened her smile and opened the door. She drew in a breath to ready her words of gratitude to the blonde executive and let it out with a sigh of disappointment when she discovered no one was in the office.
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I loved it the first time around and enjoy it again. It’s so worth reading.
YEAH A PARTY!!! I love the way you write kids, it reminds me so much of my own! LOL! I had to laugh, half the time you want them to tell you when they have to go potty even if they run off and half the time they don’t tell you! Great story, can’t wait to see what happens.
Loved it! Thanks.
What a great way for them to meet! Maddie is adorable. PPS!
I love all your stories. Thanks for resurrecting them — a boon to us, your readers. My faves in “Force of Nature” are Maddie and Vera (not counting Tina & Bette as they are always assumed as my faves). Can’t wait for your other stories — the way you have portrayed the characters of Tina and Bette are so different — captivating! I recall discovering “Noble Deeds & Hot Baths” through word of mouth under your Chelone name. I have a feeling a lot of people missed that one. PPS — yes, you were indeed sorely missed.
it’s all coming back to me now LOL i just love how you write the kids in this story, they are the hardest for me to do…post soon
I’m so glad Anthony is having a party!: )
I absolutely loved this story the first time around and can’t wait for it to really get rolling this time. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story…Twice..PPS
Oh finally they’re gonna meet!! Bette can find out all the answers to her questions then! I can’t wait for the next chapter, just caught up with this story, it’s amazing! Thanks for this and PPVS! =))
Have you seen the potty dance commercial? When I was reading this post I was reminded of that dance. Yeah, a Party.
And Mommy gonna RSVP really fast.
”Hot Baths”? – I’m in!… ;-)
Hahahaha so nice to have it back. just love it. PPVS
Tgis is so worth reading again, loved it the first time,love madie. thanks
Hey C! So glad you’re back. I’ve really missed reading your stories. Arrrggghh. When you pulled your stories out this particular one was already getting really steamy. LOL. But I love it enough to wait for that chapter again. Thanks for coming back. You’ve been sorely missed!
It’s still amazing reading 2nd time around. Thank you for this wonderful story SK.