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FORCE of NATURE
FORCE of NATURE
Chapter 6
Shopping and Blue
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“Are you sure he’s not lactose intolerant?” Bette asked not looking up from the ingredients label she was studying on the fourth different type of puppy food she had picked up to compare with the brand Tina had recommended.
Tina returned the list she had picked up from atop the brunette’s purse in the shopping cart. It caught her eye when the gallery owner had abandoned it to examine the vast selection of puppy food stocked by the pet center. What had surprised her beyond the effort that had gone into creating such a list was that the headings and subheadings were abbreviated points the blonde executive had made in conversations about caring for a puppy with bulleted items needed to implement the care. It was as thorough an outline as any thesis proposal one could hope to produce.
Looking up and over to Bette, the blonde decided her friend needed to lighten up and have a little fun. “Yep! I’m sure.” Tina finally answered and grabbed a large package of the food Chloe’s pups had been weaned with on the recommendation of her trusted vet. She placed it on the lower rack under the basket and looked back over to an annoyed Bette with a smile.
Tina swiftly returned to the front of the shopping cart picked up and handed the list to the brunette. “What’s next?” She asked placing one foot on the axel of the cart, twisting her hands on the handle bar and biting her lower lip to stifle her smile.
Bette glanced at the stock of food brands she had not yet compared, looked back at the cart eying the package the blonde had added to her purchases then looked at the list with a defeated sigh. “Well, that takes care of nutrition.” She said cutting her eyes to the blonde for a beat before looking back to the list. “I need to get a carrier, harness, leash, and…,” hearing the cart speed off, “HEY!”
Tina was balanced on the axel of the cart, riding at a running speed down the long aisle. She glanced back laughing to see the stunned brunette standing dropped-jaw just before sprinting after her.
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It sounds you have fun! Thanks for taking the time to update-I have been looking forward to your posting. This story is a very fulfilling combination of fun and romance, written carefully and accurately!
She blinked away the shared gaze and slowly pulled away her hand in complete contradiction to the seedling desire breaking through the freshly tilled soil of her grief. Wow! I think that’s the best line I’ve ever read. Love how they’re getting closer to each other. Enjoy the fish fry. PPS!!
Hi Sunkissed, PMSL means Piss My Self Laughing. i love this story. To have a chance to read it again is fantastic. Hopefully this time we will see Bette and Tina together as a couple, Anthony and Maddie as brother and sister with new arrivals in the new family lol. This story is so full of love fun and romance. I just love it. Can we have some more please.
Like this update. I like how you are writing this. Of course we all want you to speed this up. But that wouldn’t be fair or would it? No rush. But hurry. we’re waiting. Thanks. PPVS
Bette’s list and Tina reaction to it. Loved it.
Thanks for the update. As usual, I love your author’s notes–now I am wanting homeade hushpuppies. Have cole slaw, too? PPS
I enjoyed the original story and am really enjoying reading it again, especially with the updates. Thank you.
Hope you had fun today! The fish I had today with my sister’s girls and my parents was smoked and came from Zabar’s. It wasn’t as freshly caught as yours, but it wasn’t bad. Thanks for the update.
Hi Sunkissed, Great update as feelings start to develop between Bette and Tina. There has been much saddness in these gals lives so far. Now, there is a gentle and tender attration bloosoming between them. Tingling hands is such a wonderful beginning.I can’t wait to find out how this all out out.Many thanks from A Fan.
this is great – i am now off to read the preceeding chapters- great fun and i am looking forward to reading more of this
Hey Sun! Although some of your readers have read this before, this is my first time. And it’s amazing, love it!! I loved Bettes last line :) PPS!
Again, I’m so greatful that you’ve decided to continue this…I love to read what you write!!!!
Love this story! Definitely a unique take on B&T meeting – can’t wait for the ‘court and spark’. PPS!
There is just so much awesomeness and briliance in this story. Thank you for it SK.
I just got caught up on all of the past chapters. I love this story. This is very romantic. I hope Bette will offer to take Tina to the movie premiere. PPS