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FORCE of NATURE
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FORCE of NATURE
Chapter 8
Tingles, Mingles, Dancing and a Bowtie
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Bette looked up from placing their coat check claim ticket in her purse and froze in her tracks from the scene unfolding before her. She had seen the beautiful blonde in the dress chosen for the event and had been rendered momentarily speechless on that occasion. However indelible the first impression it did little to prepare her for the full effect of dress, shoes, hair, and swagger moving across the room in her direction.
The navy blue dress against the blonde’s alabaster skin and with her loose, golden hair combined to steal the room’s light and seemed to radiate back with added heat. Bette swallowed hard taking in the long, alluring legs stepping closer through the crowd which had reverently parted to allow the illuminating blonde to pass by.
Each step fueled a brilliant smile born of the surprise Tina was feeling with the arrival of her mother. So focused was she on Vera she had yet to notice her gallery owner friend a few steps away.
“Mother!” Tina greeted excitedly closing the distance between them and bringing her arms up for an expected hug.
The soft embrace between mother and daughter brought a warm smile to Bette’s face. In an instant her senses absorbed the loving relationship so evident in their greeting, and at once she felt drawn to them, however she ignored her desire to move closer and watched from the sidelines for a few moments more.
Pulling back, Tina ran her hands down her mother’s arms and took hold of Vera’s hands. “I can’t believe you’re here!… this is such an amazing surprise!” She said with delighted pitch in her tone.
Vera squeezed her daughter’s hands with her reply. “I decided it was about time I see for myself what all the fuss is about…” Suddenly a bit overwhelmed by the excitement and gratitude sparkling in Tina’s eyes, Vera paused and settled the emotion rising in the path for her words. “You do know I am very proud of you don’t you?” She said with an element of fear that she may not have adequately expressed the pride she held in her daughter’s work.
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Okay I’m twisting it.
Okay the parts that I loved, Tina not remembering Kate’s name, the larger than life breast comments and Tina and her moms heart feel kitchen conversation. She has a great mother. So I’m twisting again :) Say “Uncle” and give it up. :)
This story still makes me smile. I’m looking forward to more. thanks for posting, sk. :)
You made my Sunday! This Vera is a very wise woman!
I love Vera! She is Yoda and Cupid and the grandma everyone wishes they had! She is a hoot! Mr. Anthony is adorable! Those two steal the show/story!
Good idea to move the story lol. Mums know better hey. Vera is rock lol. I wish she was my mum pmsl. PPVS
You have to love Vera! I can’t wait for the birthday party and more Bette and Tina. PPS
Wonderful! Inspired to have Bette, in her sexy-as-all-get-out dress, accompany Vera. Now, Miss Tina – follow your heart and ‘Shine’! (LOL that was just for you). PPS!
What a coincidence! I have my orange multicolored board shorts on too – Lets go on to the party, shall we?… ;-D
Spaghetti soon, please!!
I love all the characters in dis story, they r all mega cool:))PPS
This is coming along nicely. Being blessed with 2 posts in one day is more that I could hope for. I am also looking forward to spaghetti. :) PPS!!
I LOVE VERA AND ANTHONY. Thanks so much for not changing the description of Anthony’s attire for the party. I thought it was priceless. Vera is such a special and very wise lady and don’t we all wish we had one like her. I se we have another one. Thanks for posting.