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FORCE of NATURE
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FORCE of NATURE
Chapter 10
Three-dollars and Forty-two-cents
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Kit looked back on the expectant expressions of Madie and Anthony and continued to contort her lips in-between her teeth to keep from laughing. The youngsters’ explanation for their interest in the cost of spaghetti was one for the books.
Between what Madie had picked up from her Aunt Alice’s persistent talk about her mommy needing to date and what Anthony had overheard his manny Phillip answer when asked by his Grand for details about his recent date, they had decided going to dinner was an appropriate date for their mommies; “…just like Lady and the Tramp!”, Madie had concluded.
The plan was simple in the telling and Madie had explained the motive with Anthony’s nod of approval. Alanna, their classmate, has two mommies and they all live together in one house. “If mommy and Miss Tina eat spaghetti we can all live together in one house after they kiss.” Madie deduced. “With a swimming pool!” Anthony added. “Yeah, and puppies!” Madie interjected.
Kit wasn’t quite sure how the two planned to pull it off, and was mentally debating how and if she should help with the effort when Anthony spoke just above a whisper words that tugged her heart.
“And mommy won’t be lonely anymore.” He said looking down timidly.
“Oh, baby boy,… come here.” Kit spoke through the swell of her emotions and scooped Anthony up to her lap for a hug.
Madie did not know the significance in what her friend said but she felt the shift in emotions and climbed up on her bed where her Auntie sat holding Anthony then added her hug to the moment.
Giving a quick, final squeeze, Kit adjusted both children on her knees. “Now, I think you have a good plan for a dinner that I can help you with, But!…” She paused making certain she held their attention. “You need to understand that just because two people have dinner together does not mean they will move into one house…”
“But Auntie Kit!…” Madie interrupted. “They will kiss!” She said as though it was all the explanation needed to bridge her aunt’s understanding.
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Those two little ones are so freakin’ cute! PPS!!
Honestly, these kids are too cute. I cannot wait for the spaghetti supper of sumptuous…. something. I’m sure I was going somewhere with that, but failed. Still, sk, bring on the date! thank you for posting (and your AN – lol!). :)
Hi, SK! Can’t wait for the dinner. Love your writing! PPS! And thanks to your amusing AN, I now know how to get grass stains out of clothes. Great tip, Dainty!
In my neck of the woods, $3.42 barely gets you on the subway and a slice pizza! Me thinks the date is going to go well. : )
not just dropping by but reading and enjoying it immensely LOL the kids are just too darn adorable…lets hope that their mommies WILL kiss
Sunkissed…this is so adorable! Sheesh…those two kids are so cute…fan-fic hug to them!!! What a little gentleman Anthony is to want to pay for his mum’s dinner. So cute! I love your story!!! Can’t wait for the “lady & the tramp” dinner to begin. LOL!
First, for future information, hairspray, the kind you used to be able to get for 89 cents pers can is the best remedy for grass stains on clothing. Especially white clothing. During my daughter’s years of playing softball from middle school all the way thru college and beyond, I used hair spray on her white ball pants for grass stains and red mud. Spray them first, then throw them in the wash, works every time. Always kept 3-4 cans handy and always carried it with me during tournaments as well because we always had to find a washateria and wash those team pants. Now to the story, I do so love those children and the scheme they have come up with to get their mommies together and have a family. Makes you want to cry it’s so sweet. Bring on the dinner, can hardly wait for it. God I love this story. Makes you feel all warm and fuzzy. Sorry ou are no longer in school but it does give you time to write and I do love that. Thanks for postig. PPS
Hey, C! We’re finally there where you left off the last time. Can’t believe we’re gonna be continuing this wonderful story soon. Thanks for posting so often….love what’s coming next. (happy dance LOL )
Amazing amazing amazing. Can this story get better yes it can by reading it 2nd time around :) Thank you for posting and giving this wonderful treat SK.
Waoooooo, grass stains??? how did you manage that:-)? Are you sure it was grass stains pmsl? Glad you are doing your own washing now cos don’t want you to get ambarrassed AGAIN!!!LOL.Hahahahaha Sunkissed, you know what I mean by same hey lol.How can we be sad when reading this kind of story every day? Not possible. My belly is killing me for laughing to much. Alice is something. Anthony and Madie are so sweet it makes me cry(Of joy of course lol). did I already tell you I love the story? okay, I love the story, to make sure you know that and may be post another 3 new chapters pmsl. Thank you for posting,PPVS
Wow sunkissed, this story is flawless and seemingly effortless. I love the lady & the tramp dinner, so clever!! Can’t wait for your next post. And watch out for those holes!! : )
Oh so cute – I just want to kiss their chubby little cheeks! Anthony and Madie are kinda cute too, LOL. PPS!
What was all that about “where you left off last time” ? It got me really worried! There is more of this story, right? Like about 250 chapters more, right? Right? Sorry, I got carried away… Just hope that we get to find out what happened, whether it’s about Antony & Co, or about another grass stained pair of shorts.
Ok…waiting on Bette and Tina’s response. Can’t wait for the lady and the tramp date. LOL
Those babies are just too precious, Maddy and Anthony continue to steal my heart every time they appear in the story!! Can’t wait for the spaghetti date, lady and the tramp style with the kiss and all. PPVS!!! Thanks Chelone :D
So like kids I remember these kinds of activities when I was little, my father was single and most eligable. He finally remarried when I was 19; yes, it was a set-up
Two Jr. matchmakers. We don’t care how they get together do we? Looking forward to the date. :) PPVS
first (to Dainty) dare we ask how you found out about the hairspray-on-butt gets out grass stains?… ;-) … And second (to sk) ‘ I was living on Neptune Beach in Florida. I had this crazy-easy job with banker’s hours and played a lot with my playmates who matched my need for spontaneity’ – Sounds ideal – why did you leave? and if you go back can we come?… ;-)