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What If (Threesome) – Short Story
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Bette pulled up in the car, looking over to Tina as she put it in park. "Let me know at any time if you feel uncomfortable," she whispered, always careful with her beautiful girlfriend, "I know it’s a little crazy."
Tina smiled back at her concern, "You too, okay?"
Taking the question into deep consideration, she smiled back at Tina and nodded. Something about this only being a one time thing allowed her to digest the situation with more ease. She was in a bit of a wild mood, and was ready for their strange plan to come to fruition.
Looking pleased with her answer, Tina took off her seatbelt.
"Just look at me, okay?" Bette whispered, a flash of concern in her eyes.
Tina knew exactly what she meant, and nodded. She wouldn’t have it any other way.
After getting out of the car, Bette got her purse from the back and hung it over her shoulder, looking up to the man that had arrived on his motorcycle. The man they had decided to sleep with.
Bette thought that she would go crazy with all of the complicated papers and processes to find the right man’s sperm, but an opportunity had presented itself, and she decided to ask Tina about it. She knew having sex once wasn’t a sure thing, but both Bette and Tina were interested.
After hearing her lover was on board, Bette went ahead and took the man up on his offer. Meeting his line of sight now, outside, she confidently walked after Tina, and he followed her into the house.
In their bedroom, Bette and Tina were kissing while he discarded his shirt. Bette held Tina close, slipping her tongue into a very excited mouth. They had experienced a threesome with another woman before, but this was a little different. Twisted. That made Bette smirk, trying to control her unpredictable nature.
"I love you," Tina whispered, just barely audible to her lover, but Bette caught the phrase and smiled into the kiss. She felt Tina’s hands comb into her hair, keeping her lips close. That was what she needed. That connection they shared so well.
"I love you too," Bette whispered, holding Tina’s head in her hands. She pulled her favorite lips in once again, and moaned at how delicious their kiss was. It was playful and intoxicating, her hands roaming over Tina’s shirt and pressing into her chest.
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I remember seeing that scene and thinking there was no way that guy would’ve said ‘no’ at that point – good job. Could you re-write all of Season 1 for us?… ;-)
Hey this was great and how the scene should have gone, it was really hot!
Well done, perfect in fact.
LOL @ Bette giving that dude the bum’s rush. Nice post! thanks
I remember this scene well. The only thing that would have made the story better would be if the last few paragraphs were the intro to your next story! Great post! Thanks for writing.
What made this work (for me) was you didn’t give the guy a name or description or talk about him much at all, except for the “helpful” suggestions! Well done!
I think you should write a series of “What if” stories, basically rewriting all the ‘unfinished business’ or ‘WTF’ or ‘That doesn’t make any sense’ scenes IC gave us for 6 seasons. Plenty of material there. Or maybe you could write chapter 2 of this one, how Tina would give it to Bette a little better as you said. Thank you for posting.
Awesome spin on the TiBette threesome! But now i want to read about the other (all female) threesome that these sexy ladies had. That gets my vote for your next story……PLEASE!
Wow! Excellent and would have been so great if the scene was like this. Thank you.
Of course you made this scene both hotter and more believable than Ilene Fucking Chaiken. God that woman was infuriating. (BTW, can’t wait to miss her new show-Jesus fucking lipsticky, unreal ‘Sex in the City’ (hate that show) lesbians, and yet it’s supposed to be ‘reality’. Makes me sick.) OK, thanks for the vent and carry on with the good smut.
Well!! Everyone else has said what needs to be said. I just wanna say that you made it a lil funny, so there were some moments when I just wanted to laugh so hard, but it was too hot!! hahaha, agree with Nanc, how about you rewrite each of the show’s sex scenes?? =D Thanks and PPVS! =))
i said the same thing after watching that scene… NO MAN IN HIS RIGHT MIND WOULD WALK AWAY FROM A NIGHT WITH BETTE AND TINA… you did a good job… wonder if you are going to write another chapter with this one… and let us know if it worked… just a suggestion… pps
I am really amazed at how good you are at writing these kind of stories. I for one is not offended by them. You have a way with words that doesn’t make it trashy. Thank you for posting and sharing yuor stories with us. Great job!