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New York Minute – Chapters 10&11
NEW YORK MINUTE
Chapter 10
 
“Time for bed Angie “
“Why isn’t Bette going to bed as well ?”
Angie pointed to Bette who was asleep on the sofa and had been for the past hour.
“She’s an adult “
“She’s asleep “ Angie giggled
“So would you be if you had run as far as she has today “
“My legs would have dropped off and fell in the river “ Angie giggled again
“I wouldn’t be at all surprised – come on bed”
“I want to talk to Bette “
“Angie – do we wake you up when you are asleep ?”
“No “
“So don’t wake Bette up “
“Is she going to work tomorrow ?”
“No – she’s says she has earned a few days off “
Angie got up and stood watching Bette sleep. Tina rested her hand on Angie’s head
“Come on “
“Do you think Bette is pretty ?”
“I think she’s beautiful “ Tina said honestly “She’s got a fantastic heart and she’s special “
Tina took Angie to her room and they sat reading together for twenty minutes until the little girl couldn’t keep her eyes open. Tina kissed her brow
“I am glad we are staying in New York mommy “
“Good – so am I “
Tina went back to the sitting room and picked up her newspaper and tried to read but like Angie she was drawn to watch the sleeping Bette Porter. Watching Bette sleep brought back so many memories for Tina -all good ones – memories of wild nights of love making, tender nights of intimacy and drunken nights when the bed would shake with how much they were both laughing. Tina lost herself in how vivid her memories were – so much so that she missed Bette opening her eyes and slowly taking in her surroundings.
“Hia “ Bette said finally
“Hey – sorry – miles away – how are you feeling ?”
Bette swung her feet round and tried standing up.
“Stiff but that should ease in a couple of days. I ran a half marathon last year – tried to beat my own personal best without the training and I couldn’t walk up stairs for a week. This doesn’t feel as bad “
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Has anyone ever told you you are a tease Ms Ally? The question is are you a tease that takes requests? I hear it’s a long weekend in your part of the world, plenty of time to post all those written chapters, time to stop holding out don’t ya think? Oh yeah fantastic chapter.
I am attached to my computerscreen, this is such a beautiful story. PPS.
“I will only be going back to LA to put the house on the market.” – or she could just rent it to Roger & Kit… Roger sounds like a colorful character, maybe he likes to garden. ;-)
I so love this story!!!! What a GREAT CHAPTER!!! Thank you Ally PPVS
Great story, incredible writing. Very glad to have you back!!
All those un-posted chapters and all of the readers waiting in anticipation! You are a tease.:) Thanks for this chapter. I love this story. Please keep posting.
You know Ally, of all your stories, this is my fave. There is something so beautiful about this story.
Thanks for brining this story back, Ally. The feelings of Bette and Tina are so emotional. When they finally get it on, there will be thunder and lightning.
Soooo good! Thank you and post more soon. Love this story!
Great chapter. They are getting there slowly but surely and that is all good. Can hardly wait for Angie’s reaction to knowing that Bette is her other mother, I think she will be so pleased to know that. When Tina gets ready to put the house on the market, I think she should give Kit a chance to rent or purchase it. Kit would love that because she already is so familiar with the house, it is already like her home. The transaction would only make it official. If Tina needs the money then they should make some kind of great deal to Kit and Bette can make up the difference. Love this story and you can’t post fast enough for me. lol Thanks for posting.
I adored this story the first time I read it, and I adore more now. Thanks Ally.PPS
Great chapter. THank you. It’s just brilliant this story.
Very very nice, as usual ! Keep up the great work ! Thanks for sharing this.
Thanks for posting more of this story. I think it’s my favorite at the moment. I’m always impressed that you are able to write so many different stories so well. Thank you!
Another great chapter.Thank you.
beautiful, beautiful beautiful. Everything is on this chapter: emotion, love, respect, forgiveness, communication, tolerace, all possible virtues. Just love it. PPVS