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UNBREAKABLE CH TWENTY-FOUR
CHAPTER 24
Candace jumped to the window and immediately recognised Henry…Although her common sense had told her it had to be him anyway…
“FUCKIN’ OPEN THE DOOR!! – I WANT TO SEE MY WIFE!!!” He shouted while rapping the door loudly…
“OPEN IT NOW! – I KNOW SHE IS IN THERE BITCH!!!” He roared
Candace opened the room window…”Henry, what the fuck are you doing here?” she hissed at him.
“DONT PRETEND YOU DONT KNOW DYKE! – I WANT TO SEE MY WIFE NOW!!”
“Henry, I have no idea what you’re talking about, I haven’t seen Tina in years”
Henry stopped banging on the door… he was mentally digesting her words through his alcohol soaked brain.
“She…She has to be here…She came here today! – So don’t lie to me!”
“As I said Henry…I really don’t know what’s going on, or what’s happening between you and Tina…But I can assure you, she’s not here”
“Well where else would the bitch go?” he asked, his certainty leaving him a little.
“How the fuck would I know?…Now would you kindly leave my property before I call the police?”
Henry stepped back…For some reason he believed Candace…
Well he almost did…
Until he spotted Mikey peeking through the bedroom blinds…
Henry’s anger came roaring back to life.
“YOU ARE A LYING FUCKING BITCH!! MIKEY! – MIKEY COME DOWN HERE!” he screamed.
Mikey moved away from the blind swiftly and walked away from the window…
Henry was raging at the action of his son…He was still full of booze…He charged back to the front door, lifted the letterbox and proceeded to shout through it…
“FUCKING OPEN THE DOOR, BEFORE I BURST IT OPEN!!”
“Henry, calm down…” Candace said calmly
“FUCK YOU DYKE!! – NOW OPEN THIS DOOR NOW OR AS GOD IS MY WITNESS I’LL BURST IT OPEN!!” he shouted back.
Candace heard a scared voice behind her…
“I think we should call the police…Otherwise he’ll be true to his word…” Mikey said quietly.
“O-Okay…” Candy replied, then added “You distract him while I phone them…”
Mikey nodded…He walked down the stairs, and looked through the letterbox…
“Dad…It’s me…” the youngster said in an almost childlike voice…
“Open the door!!” Henry demanded.
“Not gonna happen..”
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(47 votes, average: 3.26 out of 5)
Nice job! Love them finding eachother again. Please keep going….
Great chapter. Had hoped Scott and Mikey would beat the hell out of henry. Sorry they did not get the chance. Glad that our girls now have the chance to be with one another again. That unmistakable tingle they always felt when they touched. This is candaces’ last hooray and Bette needs to tell her how she feels about her which is nothing. She actually cringed the other day when candace touched her and that says it all. Goodbye candace. WHO DOES THE BABY BELONG TO? henry might try to get Mikey back and he might be able to tell the court that he does not want to live with henry anymore. Maybe Bette and Tina will accept him, then henry will never leave them alone. Someone will have to kill him and I hope it is the police and not any of the family. I would really love for Bette to tell Tina exactly what happened during the divorce negotiations and what henry said to her. Thanks for posting.
Yes! Yes! Yes! Awesome post! So Candace knows Henry but Tina didn’t know or recognize Candace? What gives?! And like Dainty said, all that ugly legal mess has to come out at some point. Henry is such shit for keeping Bette from her daughter and he’s got to pay! It’s not enough for the Police to deal with him; he has to be set ablaze by the Bette Porter fury!!! PPVS
Now we are getting somewhere. Tina at Bette’s house? Should be interesting!Thanks, iilwt, ;)
Excellent chapter. Thank you. Only wish that Scot beat Henry up. :) Thank you again.
Awesome chapter. It looks like Bette has a lot of explaining to do. Wow I really think Mikey is a brave kid. Thanks for writing
Oh how I love this story…One question… How does Candace know Henry? Not really sure of the past time line…Can’t wait for more…Thank you and PPVS…
Did Bette cheat on Tina with Candy in this story ? Because if so that would be hard for Tina would it not? I know I couldn’t do it… Any who great chapter can’t wait to read more PPS
Such a heartbreaking story.But there is hope.PPS
I´m a little confused here – didn´t Candace hold an infant when Tina first showed up? What happened there? If Candace and Bette have a child together, how can Bette be so callous and disregarding of Candace?
I too am confused about the baby and how Candace and Tina don’t know each other but Candace and Henry do know each other. How long is Henry going to stay in jail for disturbing the peace? Henry will be released from jail about the same time Tina gets released from the hospital and he’ll be back. Bette’s house is not exactly the safest place for them to stay now that he knows they are there thanks to Mikey. The cops obviously didn’t go to the hospital to talk to Tina the night before to see if she would press charges so they have nothing to hold him on. I wonder if sober Mr Nice Guy will convince her again that he’ll change?
OMG I wanna so bad to fucking beat the shit out of hendick, glad the police come and take him away and happy that Mikey is stand up and will put his dad away in court. Love the moment of Tibette and can’t wait to see more of them and hope you will get hendick and cadyass out of the picture soon please. Im with Dainty there, please post more, thanks!
Please don’t let Tina and the kids go back to henry please. Bette and Tina can have Mickey. yes he has a disgusting father but he has been a good son to Tina and a good brother to Angie. As a teenager he can choose to live with Bette and Tina with a care and residence orders to them. I feel for This Candace but I am intrigue by the fact that she new he was Henry. And again who it could have been banging on their door screaming like a lunatic?Bette and Tina belong together and Mickey and Angie are for me their children. Like you said in your Author’s notes: “afterwards it is possible to piece your life together and be happy again.” PPVS
At least Henry is gone for a day. Please give this family some peace and happiness. Lets have Tina stand up for herself and the kids and finally charge Henry with a crime!
What if it was all a plan by Candace and Henry to separate Bette and Tina and that’s how Candace knew Henry.