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SOUL (25) Part 2
Part 2
The minutes seemed like hours as they all stared at Bette for signs of human life. She still felt cold to the touch and Tina could feel no heartbeat or breathing. Her soul was nowhere to be found. The blonde witch stayed by her side as the others slowly began nodding off, exhausted from their ordeal. Tina was glad for the silence and she wanted to be alone with Bette. Her mother walked over to her with Kit. She was starting to worry that her daughter would break if this wasn’t over soon. “Christina, Katherine and I are going to make some coffee. Would you like some sweetheart?”
“No Mama. Thank you.” She continued to stroke Bette hair as she held her hand. “Please baby, come back to me. You can do it Bette, come back, babe.” Tina’s voice was a faint whisper.
It was enough to break their hearts. Bette’s sister and mother in law walked into the kitchen fighting away their tears. Alice paced out in the porch periodically looking in the window for a change, any change.
After another half hour of no change Tina decided that if it wasn’t going to happen she wanted to be alone with Bette. She had some blood on hand to give her once the clock struck midnight. Her appointment with Denbo was looming as well and she would need to be in her room. If she could not get Bette’s soul back for her then she would be with her as a vampire, as long as they could be together, she didn’t care what form she took. It was just after 11pm when Tina had finished getting Bette settled on her bed in her attic room. The others remained downstairs drinking coffee and waiting for midnight.
Tina looked down at Bette lying on the bed looking like Sleeping Beauty. Her hair cascaded lightly over her shoulders, each curl formed into a ringlet of chocolate brown. Her skin was pale from the lack of blood but her beauty had withstood the physical tests of the evening. Tina had changed her clothes and dressed her in her in yoga pants and a t shirt. She looked relaxed and comfortable as if she were asleep. Tina had changed her own clothes as well. There was no need for formality now. Everything that she could have done she did and she lay down beside her for the next forty five minutes just watching her. She took Bette’s hand and kissed it as she looked at her slumbering princess.
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LOVED IT!!! What a great story this was!! Hope you will post more soon!!!
I loved it! I hope there’d be a sequel, thanks for the wonderful story. :)
HEy JBMcLovin, That was extraordinary. Love conquer all.Bette and Tina are now together forever.I do like the idea of Bette as a slayer with Tina the witch beside her. I thnk this is a tale that has legs and could definitely peak my interest.More please as I hope you continue to grace this site with your great talent.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
that was excellent!! great ending.
great story! sequel, sequel, sequel!!
Thank you, thank you for the beautiful story. Now…sequel, slayer, sequel, slayer, sequel, slayer, sequel slayer!!
coolness! Loved every minute of it.
Just wanted to say I loved this story.
This has truly been my most favorite story out of all the years I’ve been reading Tibette FF! While I’m sad to see it end, I love how you left the possibility for a sequel. Looking forward to the epilogue as well! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
That was a brilliant story,you have made me enjoy vampire storys, i hope you have more storys to write, thank you so much.
What an amazing story.Thank you so much.
That again was a very powerful chapter. You are great at this writing thing.
Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Thank you! Brilliant absolutely brilliant.
Amazing!! I loved this story. Please let there be a sequel. I can’t get enough of this Tibette. I need more. Thanks JBM!! :)
A really nice fiction,I enjoyed the last chapter,hopefully you’ll write more.Thank you for this one.
Bette a slayer?? Oh boy, I’m worried. Does that mean there’s gonna be a sequel?? I loved this story big time JBM!! =)) Your description was incredibly detailed and well-thought out!! I hope we get to see the epilogue soon! Thanks JBM!!
great story and a great ending. but also could be a great beganing to a new one. wow i said great a lot
overwhelming story! :D
Awesome! I hope Bette is a slayer, because I have a feeling Denbo isn’t just going to go quietly into the night. This has been such a fun story to read, and there’s always scope for further adventures if you want to write them. I’m looking forward to the epilogue. Thanks, JBM! :)
WOW! Great ending. I loved this story from the very begining. So glad Bette finally woke up. Can’t wait for the epi and oh yeah, a sequel would be nice too. :) Thanks!
JBM, you took the words out of my mouth: ‘This has been a really great experience. I’ve enjoyed it more than I can say.’ – ditto!
JBM, What an AMAZING Story!!!! I do hope we get a sequel. Bette as a slayer. Love It!!! Thank you PPS
Is there going to be a sequel? Bette as a slayer? Thank you jbmclovin!
What a great ending! Awesome! Its sad to see it finish. Is Bette a slayer is that a sequel I’m hearing? oh yes please!!
Oh what and absolutely amazing tale. I loved the last two chapters and thank you for giving them to us so quickly. The ceremony was everything I had hoped for. The chanting the brooms and the intrigue. Great story and I love that you left enough for new slayer adventures to come. YES???? I hope??? I mean I pray
This was a masterpiece. sad it is the end though because I know you bare more capable of giving us not only an epilogue but also a sequel. You’ve done a so great job with this story, I can’t get enough of it. I love it when the good wins over the bad, always lol. PPVS