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Something so right – chapters 107-109
Something so right
Chapter 107
 
 
Bette arrived at Tina’s studio and parked in the blonde’s parking space. She knew her way around the studio and had her own ID pass for when she was on the site. She had finished work for the long weekend and was ready to whisk Tina away for the weekend. She made her way to Tina’s office
“Hello Lara “
“Hello Bette – Tina’s in a meeting “
“I know – I’m taking her away for the weekend -got our bags packed – just waiting for her to finish for the day “
Bette sat down next to Lara’s desk
“So – tell me what’s happening with you – are you still dating that bank manager ?”
“No – she bite the dust a long time ago – you need to keep up “
“Obviously – so whose the newbie ?”
“Well I am seeing Tina’s friend Dana “
“Dana – she’s terrific “
“She is a laugh “
“Not always intentionally “ Bette remarked
Lara laughed
“No offence “
“None taken – you are right – she is a klutz at times “
“Since she started on the challenger tour we don’t see much of her – where is she at the moment ?”
“Canada – she’s through to the third round of an indoor tournament “
“That’s good – I like Dana- she’s got a really kind heart “
“She’s got the biggest heart of anyone I know. Watching her play tennis its hard to believe that she is as clumsy as she is “
“That’s true “
“Do you want a coffee ?”
“Please “
Lara got on with her job – working on her computer as Bette sat back and read one of the magazines that was on the coffee table in front of her.
“Bette “
“Yes “ Bette looked up
“Tell me to mind my own business if you want but is everything okay with Tina ?”
“There is stuff going on “
Lara looked at Bette as if she was expecting her to spill the beans
“Sorry Lara – she is very determined that she doesn’t want anyone to know – she’s finding things hard “
Lara nodded “I understand – I think . Its notable that something is wrong – she’s been very cranky “
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Really love this story. Thre is so much going on in this tale,but knowing they are so commited to each other, it only brings them closer. Can’t wait to read more. Thanks Ally for another wonderful story.
This weekend was obviously a very good idea by Bette. Tina has begun to see her failings in her parents business and that they really aren’t her decisions to make or agree with. This has also been good for her to realize what a treasure they have in each other. This is a beautiful love story that we all can learn from. Fantastic update. Thanks for posting.
Yay, they are finally going to get married!!! Love this,but then again,I love all your stories!!! PPS
Great chapter,Tina’s response to Bette was classic. PPS
You know, Ally, I think it’s so great there are people like you to write these wonderful stories for us to enjoy. Loved the proposals!
Thank you Ally for a great wad of wonderful and magical words. It was humorous and loving; tender yet playful; hot yet sweet.Tina is beginning to accept that her parents have their own lives and paths to follow. While she can’t change them, she can still tell them how she feels and listen to their responses.Her father has been selfish but is doing what he thinks is best. Only time and hindsight will prove him right or wrong.It was good to learn that Tina really started to appreciate everything she had put on Bette over the last few weeks. I was sqealing with joys when Tina eventually and inopportunely proposed at 3am. Then Bette’s later proposal and Tina’s reply had me laughing heartily.So enjoyable and entertaining.More please.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
The 10 am wedding proposal was hilarious! Thank you for brightening up my Sunday!
finaly tina coming to her sense….great chapter…….
Absolutely excellent. Love this story. Thank you.
this story is sooo good ally,i have loved it from the start and cant wait to see new chapters please keep them coming
Thanks for the update. I love the longer updates! I am glad that Tina is finally seeing the light at the end of the tunnel with her family’s problems. It is hard to separate yourself from the family dynamic and accept decisions made that you don’t agree with but which are really none of your business. Please post again soon!:)
Great Update. Looking forward to the weddng.
You are still great Ally..LOL!..with Tina’s asking Bette to marry her!.. at 300.am ops 3,15.am!..hehehe! but It’s even funny the way Tina’s answer when she’s being asked?..hehe “fuck off,I’m sleeping!”..heheeh! LOVE IT!…
Wow, I can’t believe Tina proposed to Bette! That is just so sweet. I guess she has had a lot to think about lately with everything going on with the family and she had a change of heart. They were already committed to spending the rest of their lives together so getting married is the perfect way of letting everyone around them know about their commitment. I can’t wait for them to get back so they can start the plans.