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I’m The Real Queen
Bette Porter, 26 years old. Yale graduate with a double degree in art history and law. Was a rising star in the art world but is now working as a lawyer.
Keep drinking coffee
Stare me down across the table
“Morning dad.” Bette grudgingly said, finally capitulating to the reason why her dad had been staring at her over the rim of his coffee cup.
“Morning Elizabeth.”
While I look outside
Bette turned to look out the window of her home in Chicago, trying to quell the irritation that was once again rising in her.
So many things I’d say if only I were able
But I just keep quiet and count the cars that pass by
She desperately wanted to get out of Chicago, to return to her first and only love – art, but Melvin Porter, intimidating man that he was, was standing in the way like he had always been.
“Alright Bette, get a grip, he’s still your father after all. Breathe, breathe, breathe. Just try not to snap at him, CONTROL.”
You’ve got opinions man
We’re all entitled to
“So Elizabeth, have you heard any news about when you’ll be getting the promotion to Assistant District Attorney? God I hope you get it over that other woman, Helena. She should be burning in hell for being a woman-lover.”
But I never asked
Bette seethed inwardly, the volcano was slowly building up and explosion was imminent. This was not the first time that her father had tried to enforce his opinions on her. Just like how he had stopped her from doing art. The biggest concession he had ever made was to allow her to study art history at Yale, and only after she had kicked up a big fuss.
But the worst part of Melvin’s latest hateful comments?
The fact that he too knew that Bette was a “woman-lover”, he was simply in plain denial over it. He refused to acknowledge her coming-out and treated it as a delusional phase in her life. By his latest comments, he was in essence condemning his own daughter to hell.
So let me thank you for your time and try not to waste any more of mine
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Great story! Can’t wait to read more!
Really well written and constructed. So you must have learned something in school. :-) Studying comes first b/c it will eventually give you freedom and power to do what you want. The important part is the motivation has to come from within. Continue when you can.
yeah,yeah little one, your studies are truly important! :) great beginning btw, so continue!
Excellent story. Love the way you write. Thank you and please write when you can.
FIRST of all, LISTEN TO AND OBEY YOUR PARENTS. Studying is very important for someone 17 yrs. of age. You know the rest of the story. Love it!!!!!!! I want to read about her throwing him out of her house and slamming the door in his face. Please continue. Thanks.
haha! Good story, and i hope you continue in the near future! and im 17 and i know what you mean by studying, my parents get on my ass about it lmao, boring, but it is good :)
everything Dainty said … take your time… study and when u have time continue with this story… loved it..
Hey Tigger! It was nice to see your story today ;) Thanks and PPS
That was great and go Bette!