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I’m In Love With a Stripper – Chapters 20-22
Story written on August 24, 2010 by Journey1962.
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“Bette, would you mind giving me a ride home? I had trouble with Sam again before work. I had Kelly drop me off .”
“Not a problem. Do you need help getting your things out to the car?”
“No, I don’t think so. I brought my luggage with wheels. Well maybe just help lifting it into your car.”
“I think I can handle with that.” as Bette says that Tina glances down to Bette’s bare arms.
“I bet you could.” no one else was left in the room to notice the connection going on between the two. Tina shakes herself from her daze. “Hey why don’t you pull around to the back door. I’ll meet you there in five minutes. All I need to do is throw on my sweat suit and grab my bag. And I‘m out of here!” she saying as she dances of to the dressing room door.
“Sure friend… met you out back!” smiles Bette as she watches Tina’s exit from the room.
Chapter 20
Bette pops open her trunk from inside the car and then gets out to help Tina load the suitcase into the truck.
“Here let me give you a hand with that.” joining Tina in lifting the heavy bag.
Tina looks back that the back door to the building as she walks to the passenger door of Bette’s Saab.
“It’s open.” says Bette.
Tina turns to look for the handle to the door. “Cute car.”
“Yeah, it’s a real chick magnet.” jokes Bette as she enters the car quickly followed by Tina.
They both bucket up.
“Oh wait a sec. I have something for you.” says Bette as she unbuckles her seat belt turn on the interior lights and reaches over to the glove compartment and retrieves a long slender box similar to a necktie box.
“Bette, you didn’t have to…” says Tina as Bette interrupts her.
“Oh yes I did. Wait until you see what‘s inside.” she says as she hands the box to Tina.
Tina shyly takes the box and notices it’s very light weight. Tina opens the box and looks inside to find rose petals and a piece of beautiful parchment with handwritten calligraphy and ink drawings on it. She lifts the parchment out of the box to read it as Bette watches on.
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This was a great long update!
I love this story thank u for posting
Soooo good.Thank you.PPS
way to go Tina! Alice needs to be shut up every now and then. great update. glad they are going slow. pps
I’m really enjoying this story and all the updates. Is it just me or is there a chapter missing between 18 and 19? The beginning of 19 doesn’t match the end of 18 and I think I’m missing some key conversation where they must have decided to be “friends”.
Hey journey, thanks for the awesome post. My Tina and your Tina could’ve hooked up if our stories merged LOL. I love the pace and can see their frustration, but I’m going to put my money on Tina caving first. Your Bette has the charm.
thanks for the multi update…once this starts there’s no stopping
I wish I could have seen the dance that Tina performed at the club and the one that she did for Alice. So cute.
Journey’s back!!! *Tigger bounces round and does happy dance!!* Gosh, how did I miss the chapter before this?? Journey, this was absolutely fantastic, I love the pace you have set, it helps me to fall in love with them both gradually.. And everyone knows that if you fall gradually, you also soak up more love as you go along.. :D Great job by Tina on shutting Alice up, she was due a lesson anyway!!! :) Can’t wait for more (long?) posts and thanks so much for bringing this story to us!! :)
Whoa, Tina the Tiger, glad to she her put Alcie in her place, and happy to know that Bette was jealous, that other was eyeing Tina and not embarassed by her. And that kiss was hot and intense.
Be sure to read the missing Chapter. Thanks Sammer for pointing it out. :)
Wow,you spoil us,really nice chapter and lovely story.Alice got what she deserved.Thanks for this and PPS.
Wow! Definitely HOT chapter. update more.
Great update. It’s great that Tina made Alice shut up and warned her off. It shows that Tina will not be intimadated by Alice and she will not accept rudeness either. Good for Tina. Thanks for posting.