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Who’s Shane McCutcheon?
Chapter 2
Mr. Morales:"What is there anything wrong with her? Any record against her?"
Carmen:"No no! I just met her in the parking lot!" Carmen gets lost in her thought for a while. Mr. Morales smirks at her daughter’s reaction.
Mr. Morales:"Yeah, she’s pretty young for the post! But she has just the personality to hold such a post! Sad thing is that, someone set her up for drugs in her senior year and she got kicked out from UCLA, that’s why she doesn’t have much experience..’cause no one would hire her" and Mr. Morales shakes his head!
Carmen feels bad for poor Shane….how can something so bad happen to her!
Mr. Morales:"Mija do you mind staying with the kids today! I think they would really want to stay around you especially today"
In all these commotion, Carmen totally forgot about the kids!
She promised them to take out to the mall and hang out in Toys r us and watch movie. So she called Alice.
Carmen:"Hey Alice, do you wanna hang with me and the kids today?"
Alice:"Of course! I will! I guess they finally declared their hidden hatred for you"
Carmen:"OH Alice…Shut up..You can bring Dana if you want"
Alice:"I thought that’s a given"
Carmen:"OOOOooooooooo"
Alice:"You’re such a tease"
Carmen:"I thought You knew! NOw get your ass in my house"
Carmen enters her family home and Marco and Rosita comes running to her!
-"tia tia"-
Carmen:"Yes munchkins…I am here to take you guys to the mall for movie"
-"yay"-
Carmen:"come on now! get dressed everyone! Hola Abuela"
Abuela:"hola mija! how are you?"
Carmen:"I am good abuela! I don’t want the kids to grieve over their parents today! It is sad enough and we all suffered enough already I want to spend the day out with the kids to have some fun today"
Abuela:"do what you think is right mija! I am sure you’ll do great with the kids! "
Carmen:"Thank you Abuela! and thank you for taking care of the kids. I don’t know what me and dad would do without you"
marco:"tia let’s go! Rosi isn’t done! let’s go without her" and he runs to Carmen’s car.
Rosita:"tia won’t go without me!"
Carmen:"We can’t go until Alice and Dana comes in"
Alice:"Is anyone calling out for me here??"
marco and rosita: "Tia Alice !!! " and jumps on to Alice.
Carmen:"Where’s Dana?"
Alice:"She couldn’t come! She has got practice"
Carmen:"USUAL"
Alice:"SUcks right!"
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two stories now!!! great start, looks to be real interesting :)