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I Know…….I Saw it (18)
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Previously…….
‘’I come here tonight hoping that you will forgive my behaviour towards you in the past. I didn’t want Bette here as I have to build a different bridge each of you and I know that as strong as she may think she is, this is going to devastate her. All that I ask is that you will be here for her’’
Tina moved over to where Melvin was sitting and put her hand on his knee.
‘’Melvin, you don’t have to ask for my forgiveness, but yes I forgive you and you know that I will look after your daughter and your granddaughter. That is if you accept her as your granddaughter?’’
Melvin sat there with the famous Porter smile beaming from ear to ear tears streaming down his face.
‘’Thank you Tina….. Thank you so much, that is more than I deserve.’’
He handed Angelica back to Tina who had peacefully fallen back to sleep.
‘’I must go and see Elizabeth and Katie……This I’m not looking forward to.’’
They make their way to the door and Melvin turned to Tina. He held out his arms and gave Tina a gentle hug.
‘’Bye Tina and I do hope to see you real soon.’’
Tina returning the hug
‘’Bye Melvin and yes we will see each other real soon.’’
As Melvin drove down the street Tina closed the door and returned to the sofa and burst into tears knowing that in a few hours her beloved was going to come home a broken woman.
Chapter 18
‘’The Hotel reception said that Daddy went out and he left instructions for us to wait and order’’ Bette said as she returned to the table that Kit was sitting at.
‘’Where do you think he could have go to, it’s not like he knows many people in LA.’’ Bette asked kit.
‘’How should I know baby sis, you know that we haven’t spoken in some time, I don’t even know why I’m here.’’
‘’Oh Kit please.’’
‘’Oh Kit what, you that he’s a stubborn fool sometimes, I mean he’s even alienated you in the past, but all you see in him is that he’s a saint.
‘’I do hope you two are not arguing.’’
Just then Melvin appeared at the table and both Bette & Kit rose to give their father a hug. As they all sat down Bette and Kit gave each other a look of concern as they noticed that Melvin didn’t look well.
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Hitting close to home. I lost both my parents, unfortunately, none of the children were with them. This was a beautiful ending for Bette, Kit, and Melvin. Please don’t stop.
All 6 of us were there on Christmas day when dad died of cancer
My brother was with my mom. We were taking turns being at her bedside. I was just leaving my house to go when I got the call from my brother. She had taken one last breath and was gone. Please keep going. I know Tina will help Bette and Kit through there pain.
When my mother passed I didn’t want to see her take her last breath so I waited in the other bedroom. I didn’t want that to be my last image of her. But in hindsight that was selfish of me. When I pass from this life I want those I love to be by my side. I miss you Momma.
He finally excepted Bette and Tina and at least was able to spend some quality time with both his daughters and granddaughter.
Wow, that was very emotional to read as well as a joy. I liked this Melvin and how you handled him in your story.
It’s good that Melvin made amends with all of them and let them know how much he did care for them and their mothers. Has it been established in this story if Bette’s mother is alive or just missing, I don’t remember. So good that he got to see the baby as much as he could and enjoyed being with her, that should have meant a lot to Tina and Bette. If only it could have been this way on the show. Great update. Thanks for posting. PPS
great chapter… we were all with my dad too… please don’t stop…
I lost my grandfather about a few months ago, and I was glad I was there when he finally left. I know how heartwrenching it is and yes you definitely captured all the emotions within this piece. Made me cry all over again. Fantastic chapter audiecats and I’m glad Bette, Kit and Tina have gained acceptance and hopefully Angie will have some memories of her grandfather as well. Thanks for sharing this beautiful chapter and PPVS! :)
Wonderfully written. Thank you. When my mum passed away I wasn’t with her. Thank you for this story.
Hi audiecats, I am new to your great story and have just caught up with all your chapters.The reunion of Bette and Tina was brilliant measured and delivered. It was great that Shane was the one to kick Bette’s ass into touch when Bette and Tina were still dancing around each other rather than committing to their relationship.The rekindling of erotic pleasure was exciting although I would love to read how Tina pleases Bette in the bedroom.Then the sad situation with Melvin was resolved when he apologized to Tina for his prior poor judgement and meet Angelica.This child has helped bring this family together. The last chapter was so sad yet confirmed the love between Bette and Tina is as strong as ever.I do hope that Helena gets her comeuppance as it is vastly overdue.Perhaps Peggy will return and drag her off somewhere.Whatever this is a wonderful read and I hope to find more posts on the site soon.Many thanksA Fan.
Damn that was so sad!