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Breathe Me * Chapters 3 & 4
CHAPTER 3
"Who was it?"
"The Captain. She wants me to meet Porter."
Shane shuffled some paperwork and smiled, "Have fun with that."
"Aren’t you coming with me?" Tina was incredulous.
Her partner laughed, "Yeah right, like I want to be in the middle of Mount St. Tina. No thank you. Been there. Done that." Shane leaned forward and looked into Tina’s eyes,
"Try to keep your cool though, okay? I have a feeling Porter is going to be around for a while and the worst thing you could do is make an enemy, especially when the two of you are going to have to work so close together."
Tina stood and attempted to straighten out the wrinkles in her slacks.
"You look nervous, Kennard."
"Don’t be ridiculous," Tina huffed. "Do I look okay?"
"Since when do you care how you look?"
"Porter is in there with a $400 suit and me, I’ve fallen into the Gap. Why are you laughing? Stop laughing, Shane. It isn’t fucking funny."
"Oh, but it is."
Tina turned toward the Captain’s office as Shane called out to her,
"It is a shame though."
"What’s that?"
"That I’m going to miss your first meeting. It would be nice, years from now, to say that I was there when it all started," Shane whispered.
"Fuck you!"
***
Elizabeth Porter never believed in the idea of love at first sight. It was an antiquated idea, thought up by poets and romantics and those with false notions of the reality of life. She was a loner for a variety of reasons. It was true that her father had seen to it that her expectations in others were unnaturally high; however, she never really fell into anything other than lust. She didn’t do relationships. It just wasn’t her. But when Tina Kennard walked into Peabody’s office that Monday afternoon, she may as well have walked directly into Elizabeth’s heart.
Peabody watched in amusement as Kennard came face to face with her newly sworn enemy. The minute Tina entered the office Bette stood to greet her and then things got interesting. The two women stared at each other, motionless, without a word. The Captain watched as Agent Porter lifted her right hand slightly and then let it drop to her side not once but twice. And Kennard, for her part, was no better. Her eyes darted back and forth rapidly as though she were willing herself to speak.
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(33 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Whew! You have really captured my reading interest with this story. Looking forward to the next, and the next, etc. Thanks for sharing your talent.
I just caught this story and I just love it. Can’t wait to read more.
I am so loving this Story!!!! Thank you so much!!!! PPVS
Wow! Great chapter!
enjoying it very much…like the setting of this story, keep them coming
I so love your writing and this story is just off the charts. Thank you and can’t wait to read more.
I love your new story! Thanks for the posts!
this story is totally awesome! ¢¾
Love it!
Perfect. With all that pent up frustration and high level of stress, there is really only one way to deal with that. Looking forward to your next post.
That’s where you’re wrong, Tina! Agent Porter feels exactly the same way! I’m really loving this story. Keep it coming.
Wow! Great start! This is like Rizzoli & Isles X10. if the passion on both sides is like this on first meeting….imagine when… LOL. PPS! Can’t wait for the next 16 chappies.
Yikes tk! Bette’s reaction is exactly how I would’ve reacted. But this a good sign, potential energy. Thanks scaf, awesome.
more!!!
A wonderful story that I find easy to get hooked on, looking forward to more soon
Love it. Please post an update soon.
Love it.Thank you.
Really like this one too. Indeed …”walked right into Elizabeth’s heart.” Wonder how long it will take them to admit to the attraction? This will be a fun ride although filled with anxiety and more than a little frustration on both sides. Great update. Thanks for posting.
I love this story!!! You could cut the tension between the two with a knife :)
I loved your “pissed off” Bette and “angry” Tina who’s already questioning her sexuality! Those two are so sc****d up with Captain Peabody and Shane in the vicinity.Very good idea, you posting a new chapter every day ^_^
That was awesome and love it!
The attraction between Bette and Tina was so strong that neither one knew how to handle those feelings- as they say the opposite of love is indiffernce, and the it’s a thin line between love and hate. Can’t wait to see how this one progressed.